"My Opinion"

**STUBBY** · July 6th, 2004, 03:23 PM

These are the ones you should love the most
The Father, The Son, and The Holy Ghost
God made the commandments which consist of ten
Jesus died for our sins, and then rose again
Living through life according to Gods word
Some think its easy, some think its absurd
But all my life I have always believed in him
To me the chances of gettin to heaven are slim
I feel like my whole entire past has ruined whats yet to be
I'm behind a closed door, and i forgot where i set the key
But no matter "how far" from God that I drift away
I still recieve another one of his gifts each day
Because of that I have always considered my life was odd
and STILL everwhere I go I recieve the word of God
Right now I think that I am doing pretty good
I'm goin to church and readin the bible like i should
Cause inside me there is no dought that he sees us
Today it no longer bothers me to talk about JESUS

MC_Merc · July 6th, 2004, 03:25 PM

that is the shit, that was great, possibl yo best but ya flow asnt perfect, but everything else was

**RB Terrorist** · July 6th, 2004, 03:26 PM

It's kind of... reassuring in a way. Well, I guess if you believe in god, it's reassuring. I thought it was pretty good, and I'm an athiest. :P

**STUBBY** · July 6th, 2004, 03:33 PM

dang guys thanks, im glad yall like it, can i get some good feed on this please

**Kleetus Kleaver** · July 6th, 2004, 04:27 PM

Werd...a real positive drop with a damn good topic and alot of good references...I personally dont agree with your opinion, but my opinion is that this drop is hotness..
and i hope people can agree with that...

Nice structure, nice flow, good rhyme scheme and a damn nice topic...

keep it up.

**STUBBY** · July 6th, 2004, 04:29 PM

hey man i definatley agree man, thanks for the props

K cypha · July 6th, 2004, 04:36 PM

i hate god/jesus. period. but it was still a nice drop. good job keepin it positive!

**Endeva.** · July 6th, 2004, 04:36 PM

well stubby, this was sort of moralistic in a way.... i can see how you would like it if you beleived in god, but me personally, i dont ...lol... but the actual structure of the drop and flow was pretty good, couple of the lines were a tiny bit stretched, but other than that well put together... short and to 'your' point... props

**STUBBY** · July 6th, 2004, 05:41 PM

alright peeps thanks alot for the props and feed, can i get some more plkease

Hoodless · July 6th, 2004, 08:00 PM

thas some shit that'll make even tha hard gansta or tha most devilish goth bow they heads is prayer. much much love on this man. i feel ya

**STUBBY** · July 7th, 2004, 07:40 AM

any feed at all...........................................

***ILLunatic*** · July 7th, 2004, 08:27 AM

This was an ok piece. The beginning was pretty good, until you got down to line 6. You started falling down hill. And I started to lose interest in it. So, your first 6 lines were the highlight of this drop.