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Last edited by Exculptifactoriusness; July 9th, 2004 at 12:02 PM
Last edited by acryonym; July 8th, 2004 at 12:29 AM
..gotta come strong on acount of this bitches d/r votes..
..i watch him spit his verse and i think arent those my quotes?..
..ima merk this cat, and he still cant see me, you look into an eclipse?..
..ever taste the feeling of merked? you gunna feel it better then ya moms lips..
..as we said, ten lines, all it takes to take down this wannabe rapper..
..hes gunna scream when your elimnated your sister, i already heard her..
..ass thread finalist? no wonder i got alot punches, u must be hated..
..his punches cant be harder then mj ever even tried maturbated..
..it takes more then 100% to beat me, ima bring it to you 120 percent..
..u gunna give up fasta then 40 days and 40 nights, givin up sex for lent..
quick spit, ill wait for yours...
ackkkk fuck my 4th line is stretched... rb posting is wacked.
it doesnt matter how it looks
it matters how it sounds
and it sounds stretched
n the posting aint whack, you are
Like the MTV show, Your out in Round One, Dismissed
Kid's got a generic diease, Professional Name: Wackness!
You got no predictions, Nobody thinks your rhymes are outrageous
And if I'm just maulling him, I hope his disease isn't contagious!
Been here over a year, Your Boring, have no appeal to the reader
Needs help to win, so get on your knees and pray to your crew leader!
His feet are bare, Cuz my punches simply knock off his socks
Trying to get to the Next Level, But still stuck on Building Blocks!
He has Mood Swings, Headaches, Body feels like 150 Degrees
In that case, Call me Vaccine, The Way I'm Killing this disease!
Votes.
Eclipse came much better with punches. They hit much harder. Generic came with played and wack lines. Didn't like 'em at all.
Oh and Generic used mom jokes, OMFG, they are so played, and whenever I see one in a verse, I just fuckin' laugh my ass off.
V/Eclipse
Pz
Generic came terrible. & Eclipse won with one line. The building blocks line.
Vote-...Eclipse...
^word...vote eclipse...he came much nice generic isnt back into it yet.
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I havent battled in more then 6 months...i guess theres my disadvantage.
excuses....anywase
vote-elipse
you werent that great, but you came with enough to beat disease
He has Mood Swings, Headaches, Body feels like 150 Degrees
In that case, Call me Vaccine, The Way I'm Killing this disease!
that was pretty much the only decent line
bad verse generic
Structure:This goes to Eclipse, cuz generic structure confused me and didn't look 2 great
Personals:Eclipse, like kahn or whoever said ya mama jokes are played especially if they are yours generic
Punches:Okay punches about him praying to his crew, and a bunches of other shit i don't generic had any worth mentioning punches at all
v/Eclipse
I believe i'm making some good music, please just wait for me
[sc]https://soundcloud.com/hood-society/what-you-fear-featuring-a-cas[/sc]
Generic Disease-
Ehhh...wack...'nuff said...but since I'll feel guilty if I don't give you proper criticism, I'll go more indepth...you're flow was awful..you're rhymes sucked..no punchlines (even tho you rapped about how many punches you have)..nothing made this anything but wack...elevate alot...
Eclipse-
Damn....you killed him....you're second line won the battle for you...every bit of nameplay that u used was dope....pretty good verse here....
V/ Eclipse
I.J.L.
Generic, Blah. Had no good lines, or even half decent punch attempts. Wasn't feeling it at all.
Eclipse, had no good shit either, but at least he attempted shit. The closer could have been dope, and the god line too. Horrible wording, but he still gets the vote.
Vote: Eclipse
-W1
Hence Forward
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