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Last edited by Magnum Opus; July 9th, 2004 at 11:51 PM
Last edited by Two.Up; July 10th, 2004 at 01:43 PM
Truth.
Eh:
Ralphs = Grocery Store in Cali
lines 8-10 = his pic http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=124836
falsify(misrepresented .. spelt wrong)
Ya you registered before me,but the facts remain..
If you speak nothing but the truth,you falsified your name..
I put more cracks in ya game than the soul machine..
And your structure isn't felt,like vertebraes with no spleen..
Copycat?,i wouldnt wana shadow wack, so u tried to map-this..
And followed my lead,for a better image, when u C.Graphix..
Face-it,this kid gets bagged on more than groceries at Ralphs..
And the only way this kid can get on my line,is if i was watchin the mexican version of alfs!
My verse is solid, there's no way u can see past these prose..
^For 1 Reason: You wish your battle record was as big as your nose!
Bleh
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Me against a poser? It's a joke, the way im rippin this nerd
Trust me, his skills would grow...only cuz im sonning this herb
And thats word, can't you see? Symilee was here from the start
Guess we'll see what you're made of...when this verse rips you apart
Time to part ways, watch me RB...I'm ridding you of this fake
And I'd feed off your verse...but this is already a piece of cake
And what they say is true...your worst enemy here is yourself
No wonder this kids sick, when even his avatar is bad for his health
Its sad how bad you get taken down, let me lead you to your doom
This nerd's in the next level...playing video games alone in his room
yep.
Truth.
Simile
Ya you registered before me,but the facts remain..
If you speak nothing but the truth,you falsified your name..
decent opener.. not bad wordplay
I put more cracks in ya game than the soul machine..
And your structure isn't felt,like vertebraes with no spleen..
another decent punch..
Copycat?,i wouldnt wana shadow wack, so u tried to map-this..
And followed my lead,for a better image, when u C.Graphix..
alright
Face-it,this kid gets bagged on more than groceries at Ralphs..
And the only way this kid can get on my line,is if i was watchin the mexican version of alfs!
streached.. and ehh
My verse is solid, there's no way u can see past these prose..
^For 1 Reason: You wish your battle record was as big as your nose!
lol.. nice personal and a good closer to finish off ya verse
Symilee
Me against a poser? It's a joke, the way im rippin this nerd
Trust me, his skills would grow...only cuz im sonning this herb
nice opener
And thats word, can't you see? Symilee was here from the start
Guess we'll see what you're made of...when this verse rips you apart
decent punch..
Time to part ways, watch me RB...I'm ridding you of this fake
And I'd feed off your verse...but this is already a piece of cake
another one that hit.. pretty cool punch actually
And what they say is true...your worst enemy here is yourself
No wonder this kids sick, when even his avatar is bad for his health
coulda been worded alittle better.. but nice concept
Its sad how bad you get taken down, let me lead you to your doom
This nerd's in the next level...playing video games alone in his room
lol.. made me laugh for some reason.. good closer
Overall: Symilee wins... his verse never fell off and always hit hard wit a punch.. the only good punch Simile had was his closer.. Symilee wins for a more consistent harder hitting verse.. more creative too
V/ Symilee
please hit up my battle against Black Magic and drop an honest vote
thanks
V/Symilee
I'm too lazy to explain why, so it'll probably be disqualified. Basically, Simile = too stretched and boring. Except the 'nose joke' and 'ralph's', those two i liked.
LIFE'S A BITCH, BUT GOD FORBID THE BITCH DIVORCE ME
Yeah... i think sym took this one... neither verses were all that appealing... i think sim had better personals but they weren't that strong.. i dont think syms were that much worse tho . .. creativity definately went to sym. Closer of syms was the star line in both verses so im givin this one to him
vote Symilee
Simile
Ya you registered before me,but the facts remain..
If you speak nothing but the truth,you falsified your name.
Umm.. pretty decent opener..
I put more cracks in ya game than the soul machine..
And your structure isn't felt,like vertebraes with no spleen..
feeling this man...
Copycat?,i wouldnt wana shadow wack, so u tried to map-this..
And followed my lead,for a better image, when u C.Graphix..
Ok personal..
Face-it,this kid gets bagged on more than groceries at Ralphs..
And the only way this kid can get on my line,is if i was watchin the mexican version of alfs!
Its hella stretched..
My verse is solid, there's no way u can see past these prose..
^For 1 Reason: You wish your battle record was as big as your nose!
muahaha! good personal
Symilee
Me against a poser? It's a joke, the way im rippin this nerd
Trust me, his skills would grow...only cuz im sonning this herb
Played out opener...
And thats word, can't you see? Symilee was here from the start
Guess we'll see what you're made of...when this verse rips you apart
This is decent.
Time to part ways, watch me RB...I'm ridding you of this fake
And I'd feed off your verse...but this is already a piece of cake
Played concept but this is a decent flip
And what they say is true...your worst enemy here is yourself
No wonder this kids sick, when even his avatar is bad for his health
Feelin this bar..
Its sad how bad you get taken down, let me lead you to your doom
This nerd's in the next level...playing video games alone in his room
ahaha... quite liked this.. good good
v/Symilee... down to the wire, close ass battle..
good battle
simile-overall i really liked your verse man, i felt that you had good structure, the flow was tight, and personals and punches were good, but that one stretched line really ruined it for you man
symilee- overall your verse was real tight man, i liked it alot, your flow went very well with the structure, i think your personals and punches were also very good nice vocab also overall props 2 both peeps,
V/symilee for havin one more personal, and for havin a better verse with no stretched lines
looks like u took it..
nice battle
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thanks...didnt come too bad yourself.
Truth.
vote-symilee
decent battle here, simile had the nose line, which was pretty much the only thing that stood out in your verse, while symilee had his last 6 lines...
so...symilee got the vote..
good job sym
<<a battle for the name>>
u won.
g/job
lol
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Symilee advances to Rd.2, closed.
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