Darkness Of Hell

[Jae Cyph]

The darkness of Hell constantly prevails in my life//
its sharp as a knife, and fills to the brim with strife//
struggeling to live, through darkness so deep//
as i rest in sleep, i feel my heart take a leap//
this world i am in is dangerous as can be//
scares me everyday, from alot i should'nt see//
This age is hard to stand, kidz like us need a hand//
cuz we feel like were slippin, falling into quick sand//
I look up to the skys and pray i'll be there one day//
hell if i may, i could be there today but i'd rather stay//
god if you will forgive all my sins, its my heart to cleanse/
lets come to amends, i will never purposly sin again//
lifes so hard, feel like i have to lay out my card//
I try to dis regard, but its hard when it hit the backyard//
touble is on the double its everywhere yo can go//
its hard to show, as you should know its on a steady flow//
lets try to think, feel like im drowin in the earths sink//
i need to get my life in sync, cuz im not what you think//
when darkness comes up i try to run and hide//
from what i abbide, its just really hard to let slide//
the deepness of my soul, i have to let these feelings loose//
verbal abuse, i feel like i should just rest in a neuss//
suicide isnt my thing, i love my life its just hard to live//
i learded i have to live with whatever they must give//
when the darkness of hell arrises i conquer face to face//
my life isnt the right place, i need my own space//
so from here ashes to ashes and dust to dust//
i live with lust, from which hells darkness must//

[Armaggedon]

i ain't seen you on open mic much, but i'ma be lookin' for your threads more often. hot spit dun. i'm feelin' it. you had nice wordplay, lines flowed well, all over hot piece.

[Jae Cyph]

yo yall dont sleep uppin

[Baron Mynd]

aight this was ok.my piece crew piece murdered this though.
No beef, but my nan could type up better shit than this!!lol!
Nah, on the real, good wordplay and Vocab and all that, i'll look for ya pieces in future...

[Jae Cyph]

whatever hater thanx uppin

[NoBody2Me]

fuk that dude I like it had nice flow I didn't stumble once spittin this ish, fukin' tight keep it up homes. Peace out

[The MRB]

This was aight, but u have no right 2 call me wack do u now?

[JOeY TeRRIFYING]

this as ill lethal. dope flow, decent wordplay all around a good peice. stay up. ya know what i think this is the first time ive ever seen you in the open mic link too. either way stay up.
peace, joey

[DECA]

this piece is tight.... Like your style i'll be peeping more of your shit... Peace and Love 43i

[Emerge]

lol at cracker cyph text

[BeRLin`S BesT]

this piece was cool I mean not worth a nomination but the story-telling n imagery was straight...liked it....pz

[Born To Kill]

I'm just sick of peeps rhyming "life"...

With "strife".

THAT SUCKS UNLESS YOU REGULARLY USE THAT WORD IN REAL LIFE!!!

And you know you don't.

Peace

[- Troublesome -]

This was a nice piece. Flow was on-point throughout. It was well-worded for the most part, pretty deep piece. Good shit overall, keep it up.

[noncentz]

this was a tight lil something JAY i remember u friom bullshit beaf we had way back its good to see u on here still and this was good work gat at me sometime/

[Sublime D]

I'm just sick of peeps rhyming "life"...

With "strife".

THAT SUCKS UNLESS YOU REGULARLY USE THAT WORD IN REAL LIFE!!!

And you know you don't.

Peace

i do...