Rules.
^Read & Good Luck...
Rules.
^Read & Good Luck...
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Last edited by Stryk9; July 4th, 2004 at 07:54 PM
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Sounds good
Soft Focus
..Returns..
Yup
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The clock Stryks 9 & crashes the kids imagination
He's a depressed youth pulling down our Nation
Compare my work to yours i'm over your head
People float in thoughts drowned in yours instead
Predictions granted your way but is it actually correct
Hence the fact at battlen..you suck at every aspect
So if i'm good at one catagory thats a W. for Eclapt
Drop my verse first and you wont no how to react
Don't bother to write back people wont be amused
You could throw 1000 punches & I wouldn't be brused
Pushing all the wrong buttons damn kid..c'mon
...ya whole verse is retarded..
like a hole sex session of lezbians with a strop on
Soft Focus
..Returns..
Clapt is in the wrong forum, yeah your glass is half full
i can almost see your death ,cuz your oblivions shadow
topical turned bateler??yeah your a comfirmed gimmick
You only pull chicks working at poultry sperm clinics
concerned critics,accept easy when asked just to shoot ya
a bitch in your past life and your going back to the future
your changing past attempts at art and that is laudable
did gods laughing, finally tell you that you blow at topicals?
you know at hospitals theres injuries and i fucking know this
you couldnt even use brain fluid with concentrated osmosis
soft focus is garbage and getting fucked by my virility
no ones claping when they realize that your a liability
if you dont get the wordplay ask me or jsut dont vote
god is my crew leader aswell for one line
if you dont know what osmosis is .....
upin for votes
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eh... i read stryke 9's verse first, thought he would lose for sure. but no. eclapt, you need to word your punches way better. for example:
"Compare my work to yours i'm over your head
People float in thoughts drowned in yours instead"
If you're over his head, then they should float on his thoughts, and drown in yours. the other way makes no sense. also, its worded clumsily anyway. you also wasted something that could have been cool in clock strikes 9, and then your last 3 bars were all played and dull. elevate.
stryke... eh. poor wording on a lot of your punches as well, a decent concept sort of on the second bar but it was just akward. then towards the end you tried to get to fancy... fuck him with your virility? boo. osmosis and brain fluids? boo. you had the one decent personal though, gods laughing, and that won you this.
v/ stryke.
Last Word
I must last... word
I gotta agree with shadow.....
Honestly, the only line I liked in this whole battle was the God's Laughing one...
Vote - Stryk9
stryk... i did like the drowned line by eclapt though, but i didn't like that verse in a ahwole
.. im back
these people got history..so dey really don't gotta explain hard..but i'm kinda da rookie so i'm sure ima git soem flack for this but i don't give a fuck iight..
Vote-Stryk9
Didn't particularly enjoy peepin the battle...twas nothing special..vote goes to Stryk 9 because he was the better of the lesser..u both worded your veres a bit awkwardly yua know....
erm favorite piece from eclapt-
"Don't bother to write back people wont be amused
You could throw 1000 punches & I wouldn't be brused" -i guess
erm favorite piece from stryk9-
"your changing past attempts at art and that is laudable
did gods laughing, finally tell you that you blow at topicals?"
- i suppose....
no hatin jus truth..
eclapt- your verse was kinda weak. Your punches weren't really that hard hitting, mainly because you used statements instead of clever ideas. The 1000 punches and not being bruised? Not feeling that at all. Seems like your solid ground is in topicals.
Stryk9- better in the punches department, better written and the gods laughing line was solid. You just had better punches and thats what it call comes down to.
vote- stryk9
Truth.
thats why LLL jr..is for elavation...lol
half my punches people didnt understand...blah...whatever
Soft Focus
..Returns..
Eclapt..you are obviously used to poetry and topical writing..not battling..and it shows. You had some really unique ideas that coulda been dope..but didn't because you didn't make them punch. If you wrote creative lines like those that actually punched..you would be decent.
Stryk9 didn't come too great either. He has bad wording issues..and it detracts from his verse for sure. Some decent punches in there though.
/v Stryk
Nah eclap your verse seemed topical really badly...
Just diss the other guy..
Stryke came pretty weak, but still got this battle...
v/ stryke
He has already won so i'm breaking down my verse..
The clock Stryks 9 & crashes the kids imagination
He's a depressed youth pulling down our Nation
^^name flip...and we're both from canada...meaning he makes our nation look bad
Compare my work to yours i'm over your head
People float in thoughts drowned in yours instead
^^saying i;'m better and people enjoy my stuff people don't like his...saying he sucks
Predictions granted your way but is it actually correct
Hence the fact at battlen..you suck at every aspect
^^prediction said he's win..but claimed he sucked..so i hit the prediction..and said if i come dope in one aspect i'd win meaning he sucks at everything
So if i'm good at one catagory thats a W. for Eclapt
Drop my verse first and you wont no how to react
^^just a filler..claiming he sucks again
Don't bother to write back people wont be amused
You could throw 1000 punches & I wouldn't be brused
^^another filler...but still a commonly used you sduck line from most people
Pushing all the wrong buttons damn kid..c'mon
...ya whole verse is retarded..
like a hole sex session of lezbians with a strop on
^^my best line no doubt..
Pressing buttons (keyboard)...lezbians should eat eachother out not use plastic dicks...cause they might as well be bi or striaght..but a dyke only does females...get it...
blah anyways...nice verse stryke...
Soft Focus
..Returns..
yeah your was good too
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