greed money n fame feat. LG

[G-Money]

LG:
yo lg is back here wit another hit track
im sellin more records than bobby brown sells crack
we count our money in stacks
cuz in this game its about the money n fame
ask any rapper they'll tell u the same
i clock the glock n point it straight to ya brain
my thoughts r insane
all im doin is tryin to survive in this game
so who do we blame? the original soldiers of the game
we jus carryin on the tradition
fuck aroun n i'll leave u in critical condition
i'll beat u in submission
dont step to a guy wit the caliber of my position
beatin down every bitch of the opposition
all u wack mcee's is who we dissin
fuck aroun i'll have u missin ... on unsloved mysteries
me n g-money gonna go down in history
listen to me my lyrics r real
im down to kill
im here to steal the spotlight
i'll take flight on all yall bustas
u cant touch us, we on fire
fulfillin the worlds desire of rap artist to come
put biggie n pac together n im the sum

hook ---> g-money
greed money n fame
death murder n pain
thats how it goes to survive in this rap game(repeat 3x)


g-money
it takes alot for me to get mad
and it takes alot for me to get sad
but it dont take much for me to get ur gurl glad
cuz see im into money gurls n fame
and lg's into that murder n pain
im soon to bone ya gurl he's soon to leave u slain
while lg's whoopin that ass me n the rest of the sbp in the back bustin a train
cuz see in this rap game we incognito
makin more money than bam n his fat ass unlce don vito
and this is all me i dont needa steal anybody's stee-lo
when im done whoopin that ass imma be like "WHO ESLE WANT SOME??"
punkin foo's like dee bo
g-money ready to be on playboy t.v like steve-o
u see we grew up on basic cable not that tivo
n im that x-factor like mr.dante hall
jumpin on tracks givin it my all
talkin to all the fine ladies tell em to gimme a call
dont let my size fool ya cuz im small cuz not only am i savage i can spit it raw
lg lets whoop these bitches asses cuz im tired of soft

{hook 3x}
greed money n fame
death murder n pain
thats how it goes to survive in this rap game

g-money
u see im known as g-money but u can call "showtime" like im philip buchanon
but most gurls see me as a gigolo like im nic cannon
man thats enough about me
im on this track to let u punk mu'fuckas see
how we gets down to the greed for the money
seein rappers face murder n pain it aint funny
but thats wat happens when u say stupid ass things
the fame that u obtain can get u jacked for ur bling
jus like death was brought katie for havin that fling
jus stay street smart n this aint no rappin its a form of art
this message is sent out cuz im comin off a fresh strart
LG
here i am jumpin on this band wagon
in this game filled wit black mail n back stabbin
thats wat happens when greed money n fame takes affect
u step to our crew n get checked
lg's always contradictin
on this pain im inflictin
after im done whoopin that ass im still gettin head from a chicken
constantly flowin the top is were lg n g-money is goin
shuttin wack mcee's down like im bruce bowen

hook 3x (til fade)
Greed money n fame
death murder n pain
thats how it goes to survive in this rap game


(** katie is a gurl who got cheatin on her husband
and was brutally murder.)

*note that we have this song already recorded n we were lookin
for some help on how to put it on here so y'all can hear it*

[chris_6t9r]

Well I liked the first and third verses but I found the second verse really hard to understand. The rhyme scheme in the first verse went through well and whole the thing seemed to flow well, but I think after that it kind of slacked off a little then came good again in the third verse. Also, does that have a chorus? I know it's got a hook but what about a chorus.

[Johnny 6-feet]

elementary stuff, played subject matter, basic vocab and rhymes. i think both of you need to elavate something harsh, i suggest an original topic, learning how to do multis and uppin your vocab and describing lines.

[Mistral]

You need to leave 2 links to 2 open mics that you left decent feedback on or this gets closed, Thanks.

[G-Money]

Well I liked the first and third verses but I found the second verse really hard to understand. The rhyme scheme in the first verse went through well and whole the thing seemed to flow well, but I think after that it kind of slacked off a little then came good again in the third verse. Also, does that have a chorus? I know it's got a hook but what about a chorus.

the second verse is based on greed money the fame n i also through some pain in there, i mean i know it needs work n right now im still in the development stage.

[chris_6t9r]

You need to leave 2 links to 2 open mics that you left decent feedback on or this gets closed, Thanks.

Damn! How many times do you post that everyday? I always see that post. What you can do is look at the "Last Post" colomn on the main board to see if we've replyed to anyone else.

[Mistral]

Closed, Go Fuck Yourself Chris. Its My Job To Enforce The Rules Of The Forum. Get Use To It.