check in
due tonight
5 bars
u know the rest of the rules
iLL Kahn
Perpetual
check in
due tonight
5 bars
u know the rest of the rules
ORIGINAL BADASS
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Checkin' in...
Yo yo *takes a notebook* yo, *looks for a pen, finds one, grabs it* yo yo...
...*begins writin' letters of death* aiyyo...
(fuck trying)
ha ha, ur sig admits it, ur wack.... and im better
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ajfopd asjgma........djafeo ahjfdoe daojfd doaf
dovcajaio diocvan dfodja dfoj dkofe dhjooaf
dahj..........djyey ahjdiie jsiufdhj kiuca
...........dajfhdui adhie huca
dfda louj lduuj dluoua jvuydf euiycb jdiaoght
now my verse proves it..... ur wacker then u thought
i used gibberish, no english.... u didnt se it coming, i bet
..... and i still beat u without breaking a sweat
ORIGINAL BADASS
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the gibberish didnt even RHYME man! *Slaps forehead*
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~Current Battles~
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Ok, now what the fuck is this?!
I'm serious, you're wastin' my fuckin' time.
Keyed in 5 minutes, I'm not gona waste a real verse on that.
Btw, to whoever votes, just look at his verse & you'll understand all the punches.
Aight check it...
Kid's in a wack ass crew, but... what's even worse
is that God was gettin whored...
...so no one ghostwrit his verse!
Read this carefully son, as you sit down, & cry
u defined TNL with that post...
...pussies that never even try!
I'll go easy, I mean, I don't wana offend him
what a pity...
...even his crew member turned agaisnt him!
I said 30 min, he needs time, and said tonight
Goddayumn yo...
...I thought we're battlin in English, right?
We ain't on the same level, seriously, coz it seems
ur plain wack...
...i'd have to be like u, to know what ur verse means!
Blah...
perp - wtf...man...that was horrible....u tried to be creative and beat him...but instead u were stupid and lost...nothing to comment on....what a waste of a battle....you didnt even have any good punch at the end....damn man i give it a 1.4/10...
ill - simply put....you won....u had personals....punches....flow....everything....kill ed his....wow what an easy win....lol give it a 6.4/10....
vote - iLL
I cant poll but i took time to leave feedback...please hit my battle up with an honest vote....it is in my sig....against V' Tech...thanks...
ok ill vote on this even tho its not even worth it and please return the favor
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=134407
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=134382
Personals/ Punches: Ill didnt come with anything spectacular, but then again he just didnt have to. Perp's verse had 0 punches, let alone personals, so Ill got this by default. Ill gets it
Flow/structure: Since Perp's gibberish didnt even rhyme, he automatically loses this one too, Ill gets this by default as well.
Creativity: Perp was trying to hard to be creative, and he ended up with nothing. Ill gets this too.
Vocab: Ill gets this for just using real words.
V/Ill Kahn
Now please return the favor
^^sorry I didnt realize I couldn't poll, but I took my time so please return the favor anyway
[QUOTE=L.I.]perp - wtf...man...that was horrible....u tried to be creative and beat him...but instead u were stupid and lost[QUOTE]
ummmmmmmmm no
it was not a shot at creativity
i didnt feel like wasting time on this dude
and just did wateva
ORIGINAL BADASS
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^^No matter what, you still won't merk me.
Uppin' #1
LMAO@actually uppin this mess
iLL you won man, no doubt.
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~Current Battles~
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^^Duh lol. I didn't even try, even though almost everyone in my crew told me to spit real lol.
Uppin' #2
I'll return the favor, just vote & drop a link, I hate havin' open battles.
Perpetual - Your structure was poor, even out your lines. Your flow was horrible, mostly because of all that bullshit in your verse. You had no personals, they are important in a battle. You had no punches, basically you had nothing that hurt your opponent at all.
iLL Kahn - Your structure was kind of confusing, although it did remain consistent. Your flow was off and on, you need to use a set syllable count. Your personals were okay, nothing really stood out though. Your punches were alright, but they didn't hit hard.
Vote - iLL Kahn
^^Duh, I didn't even try.
Anyhoo...
Uppin' #3
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