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ight checkin...droppin soon
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I do kinda 'Pity' this joke, but still leave him dead in a 'hole'
Closest his names come to dope, is being next to mine in this poll
Bein squashed and trampled, like FatBastards on top of ya for sex
This battle Just another true example, of my custom title text
Fuck the rest..just by dropping an opener i could really hurt you
Admire the 'skill' of the battle..and then peep Eclipse's verse too
Put this herb on blast, his crew name proves hes gettin clowned
For being himself, a total ass, hes finally gettin past a first round (his text)
I let you taste my illness, but no doubt hes already stole my shit
I could become a 'Real Vet'...the way i man handled this bitch (girl dog)
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We have something in common man, we both don't seem to lose
Then Again, I have 14 hard working wins, You, 14 Against Newbs!
Your not worth a downpour of Lyrics, I'll Kill you with just a drizzle
You don't belong in Elite, I Mean, Your best win was against sdizzle!
You came into elite, To show what you got, Your making bad decisions
Must of Not seen who he was battling, Figures, He's in Corrupted Visions!
I'm ending your winning streak, I have a feeling that again it won't begin
His avy says Uk's Finest, Well, Thank God I'm an American!
Got merked by Ambitious and Fathom, Couldn't Follow the Signs
You won't win any more at this level, Hey, There's always Front Lines!
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MCeePJ - Structure was ok, but some of your lines were a wee bit stretched.. nonetheless, nice lyrics, good multies... You had some dope punches in there, and both your opener and closer were good... You could've used more personals though, but overall your verse was a pretty nice drop...
Eclipse - Your verse was ok, but it could've been better. Flow was very good, but you could've used better punches... the opener and closer were good, and you had some other good personals (Corrupted Visions = best line of the battle), but you just didn't have enough to win the battle.. the American and Sdizzle lines were kinda ehh.. but good job nonetheless, keep at it
vote - MCeeJP
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I do kinda 'Pity' this joke, but still leave him dead in a 'hole'
Closest his names come to dope, is being next to mine in this poll
Lmao this was a nice way open ya verse strong punch
Bein squashed and trampled, like FatBastards on top of ya for sex
This battle Just another true example, of my custom title text
Was going to so dont go with the sex joke but u pulled this 1 off..lol made me laugh nice work
Fuck the rest..just by dropping an opener i could really hurt you
Admire the 'skill' of the battle..and then peep Eclipse's verse too
Nice self gloatin on second line but first line was a bit meh filler i would say
Put this herb on blast, his crew name proves hes gettin clowned
For being himself, a total ass, hes finally gettin past a first round (his text)
Not a bad personal on him here but didnt have much effect for me
I let you taste my illness, but no doubt hes already stole my shit
I could become a 'Real Vet'...the way i man handled this bitch (girl dog)
lol good closer punch was ight connected ight
Overall nice drop man you had some good lines in there...you came good except near the end you fell off a bit you opened well though keep at it man
Eclipse
We have something in common man, we both don't seem to lose
Then Again, I have 14 hard working wins, You, 14 Against Newbs!
Meh horrible opener for me seemed forced...would think you would of came better here
Your not worth a downpour of Lyrics, I'll Kill you with just a drizzle
You don't belong in Elite, I Mean, Your best win was against sdizzle!
This was ight but yet again has no effect for me...wasnt feelin
You came into elite, To show what you got, Your making bad decisions
Must of Not seen who he was battling, Figures, He's in Corrupted Visions!
Damn this was your strongest line so far....set up and connected well dope line
I'm ending your winning streak, I have a feeling that again it won't begin
His avy says Uk's Finest, Well, Thank God I'm an American!
lol nice line....setup was good and followed thru well made me laugh
Got merked by Ambitious and Fathom, Couldn't Follow the Signs
You won't win any more at this level, Hey, There's always Front Lines!
This was ight for a closer but i could kinda see it coming
Overall i personally thought your verse lacked in places....you only had 1 or 2 good lines noteably the cvisionz line i was likin that....apart from that i thought some of your lines had potential but u didnt fullfill them....sum lines were kinda meh...
The outcome of this battle has to go to mCeePJ to this as he came alot harder with his verse and had less lines that were meh....in his verse he only had 1 bar i didnt like where as eclipse you had quite a few....whether i miss read or understood something i dont no but for me they just wernt there for me.....with this said and done
mCeePJ gets it
nice battle
pz
GOOD BATTLE
WOW...
MCEEPJ- i usually vote for you to win, but i dont know about this one, i mean you had descent punches, and a few good personals, i also liked your structure but i dont know about anything else
Eclipse-NICE VERSE maan, this is one of the best that i have seen you do honestly i think that you had great punches, adn nice personals, keep this way up cause i really liked it
V/Eclipse
Eclipse check the Elite Bitchslapped thread
Eclipse.....your verse was okay.......seen you come harder then this alot of times.....your punches hit hard but you deffintly should have reowred some of the mso that they hit harder and uyou woulda gotten the ko in this match......your streucture was okay i liked it......wordplay was good......and i felt that you took this easly
MC-your verse was blah....seen you come harder.....arnt you 14-0.....im pretty sure if you got a record like that and you come wit a verse like this you battling newbs.....structure was good.......wasnt really feeling your punches the concepts was played as fuck and i seen them on sites everywhere.......wordplay was good thought that is the only thing i felt that you had going for you
v/Eclipse
McPeeJ
Your opener was funny...
I really like your second bar! The fat bastard part was gay though lol
Your closer was ok.... I like the multis...
Eclipse
I like the structure of your verse to begin with.
Your opener was ok, it was more of a personal.
You should put a link to your second bar...
His avy says Uk's Finest, Well, Thank God I'm an American!
^ LMAO!!!!!!!!!!! this part alone killed it...
Anyways.... this battle was close in my eyes...
both of yall were decent
v-Eclipse
QueenStyle
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You're welcome!Originally Posted by ...Eclipse...
This battle was aight, but...
MceePJ: Kinda weak from ya. It just didn't have the necessary strength of punchlines. I'm sure you can come better. It wasn't that you were bad, it's just that it wasn't as strong as it could've been. But nice flow and strucutre. I'd like to see more effective personals. Keep elevatin'.
...Eclipse...: Erm, it was okay. I mean, not great here either. Nice flow, and good concpets, but I would suggest better wording here. Other than that, good job. Keep elevatin'.
*Fuck both of you. I would be 21-0, but certain dope heads felt the need to battle a newbie named God, so instead I'm 21-7. I think. Anways, FUCK You!!!*
LOL...
Vote: ...Eclipse...
wow.. close shit...
mceepj - you came decently well. Could do better, but this was pretty decent. I liked yourr closer the best, but that's just me... think u could've made the closer a bit harder though with different wording. Overall, came alright with personals and punches, fairly consistent here. Seen bette though..
eclipse- man, yeah.. seen you do alot better. I thought ur "thank god I'm American line was ur best. I really liked it. Best line of the entire battle between the two... but that's really the only line I was feeling. The others were decent, fairly consistent as well just like MceepJ's, but that one bar put you over him in this battle.
Really close, like I said... read both verses a few times. Took awhile to critique and totally decide, but.....
vote- eclipse..
If either of you are bored. You can hit this up....
Quick key vs Stubby.. yet somehow he has a vote.
thanks
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Eclipse won
MCeePJ came aight, eclipse came aight
nothing that really stood out, but then again
it wasn't a completely horrible battle either.
I've seen the same concepts used by MC before
n' some from Eclipse but when it came to the
punches hitting more directly, Eclipse had them
Artificial Intelligence.
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