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StrEETZ101
Allevyate
No dr
No hate votes
10-15 Lines
No feeding
u spit first
due soon
iight listen........
You should have i was the champ from start..
But i'll give u props, u called me out, this nigga got heart..
but even though u got heart..
i see u not smart..
i'll have u removed like AJ from 106 & park..
im sumthin that u need to be afraid of..
cuz wit one kiss u dead like jada (No- Homo)
and what does your name mean??
i dont mean to dead your daydream..
but you'll never make the mainstream..
wait am i finished yet??
nah i could keep goin, his mom aint call him in for dinner yet..
but ima finish it fast..
if this was a race wit every1 on the site youy would end up last..
lol...i was jus playin on that one too........
Holla at StrEETZ101
ok checkin in, will b keyed within 30 minutes............
Yo this aint even about me and u man, u gunna get outlawed,
No not by a mod, cuz u been told off by god http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ght=streetz101
This kid is from the big apple, but in the city he got banned,
Can’t get no cherries, so he gotta settle for dick in hand,
And gun grippa rides your dick wherever u go
Congratulations streetz, you got ur own post ho
So what, he wants to be ur protege like kanye is to jay
Calls you up and says “Sir do u need ur dick ridden today?”
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ght=streetz101
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ght=streetz101
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ght=streetz101
Aint u both been told, dick riding is for gays
Your shit bombed, the lyrical timothy mcveigh
Man ur shit sucked no toilet would touch it
What u smokin aint legal, that amsterdam dutch shit
No one remembers u, ur like last weeks dinner
Ima quit now, you all already know the winner
uppin 1....lets get some votes please.....ill return the favor at some point i cant do it now cause i dont have enough posts but i will soon
uppin 2 streetz u can up too, vote on this please..
I dont have enough posts to vote, but i drop some comments
Streetz:
You should have i was the champ from start../
But i'll give u props, u called me out, this nigga got heart../
This was pretty weak, your a noob, what you talkin about callin u out
but even though u got heart../
i see u not smart../
Maybe the weakest stuff ive ever seen
The one with AJ and 106 and park was about the only ok thing you had but still really weak
you had maybe one personal but it was so weak that it didnt hit when you said
and what does your name mean??
i dont mean to dead your daydream..
but you'll never make the mainstream..
Anyway, ur vocabulary is really weak, work on that, most of your words were one syllable
Dont think im haten on you, just tryin to be honest
Allevyate:
Your stuff was ok, but again nothing special
Your best line that i liked was the Kanye and Jay. I thought your flow was good. The bar with timothy mcveigh as the punch could of been stronger if you worded the lines better. You had better personals, going after him about the post with god in another thread. Your closer was pretty weak but it was just like you said, we already know the winner.
If i could vote it would be for Allevyate
StrEETZ101
opener was alright, couda been more harsh.. lol
The second bar was short and got to the point.
Third bar was straight up gay..
Fourth bar was wack....
and you made a spelling error trying to spell you...
Allevate
I like the use of links...
I dont like the flow in your opener and the use of god's name (and im athiest) lol
Second bar was a killa diss and it was funny
No one remembers u, ur like last weeks dinner
Ima quit now, you all already know the winner
^ just for that line right there you get my vote
vote-A
QueenStyle
uppin 3............i will return the favor if you leave a link.....please vote
Allevyate takes this rather easily. I didn't like his use of links throughout his whole verse, as that's just kind of newbish, but he had some relatively aight punches and personals..i've seen better, obviously..but not terrible. With elevation I think he could have some potential. You need to be wittier, less gunplay and sex jokes, more similies and metas.
Streetz came pretty bad. Whack structure..punches didn't always hit..AJ line was aight..nothing really else in that verse. Elevate man.
/v All for better punches, etc.
Originally Posted by StrEETZ101
Vote - Ally
LIFE'S A BITCH, BUT GOD FORBID THE BITCH DIVORCE ME
uppin 4......its time to close this.......steetz up it some too.....leave a link and i will vote on urs honestly
A took this battle easy, his punches werent decent but his did actually hit and some of his were kinda creative, other guy needs to elevate, you lines were weak, i mean
wait am i finished yet??
nah i could keep goin, his mom aint call him in for dinner yet..
What is that^^..it didnt hit or nothin, no personal, fake weak shit.
others were the say aswell, step ur game bro.
A's best line was
This kid is from the big apple, but in the city he got banned,
Can’t get no cherries, so he gotta settle for dick in hand,
werent great but it beat the other dudes who verse.
v/ A
I didn't really like this battle too much
Streetz came pretty fucking wack. If you are going to battle, don't you think you should diss your opponent? I mean, isn't that the whole point of battling? You failed to do so in your whole verse. Some of the shit you were saying didn't even make sense. Flow was a littl eoff and you had absolutely no wit behind anything in that whole post. You need to stop and think for a second when you come up with a punch. Try proofreading, you should be your worst critic, but from the looks of it, everyone else is doing your job for you....
Allevyate wasn't that great either, but he had a few OK punches. His verse flowed well too and he had a little bit of wit behind a few of his punches. You need to work on your wording a little bit more and stop just trying to make things rhyme. Make the wording right, then change it up for the rhyme...
Vote - Allevyate
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