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Here's the rules....
10 lines
no crew, hate, dr votes
Blind spit
due in an hour
drop as soon as you are ready
check in before you start keying
good luck
checkin...
A quick ten for ya.......
PJ's taking a fall like usual....nothing new for you today
Thought he was the finest...cause people asking "U.K?"
He murks fakes daily.....like that takes balls, go get a tutor
Never stepped to a vet before....now he's getting neutered
He takes forever to bust......he'll never come quick as me
And PJ's a lousy cook.....can't get the desired consistancy
He's got spades, clubs and diamonds....hearts tooken, ya dig
He hasn't shown me nothing yet...I mean, just look at his sig
He's feeling all these kids....knowing most of 'em are tighter
Cause he's RBs biggest petafile......PJ's stuck in the minors
nah quick 10 for you
You even dropped first, and still didnt hit me where it hurts
cos hes just fake.. like an atheist kissin bibles in a church
No doubt hes a 'Kon'....cos he thinks he can bite for free
shit! the faggots like low fat drinks, hes too light for me
Your bring shame and disgrace on this fuckin proud nation
i mean, ive battled better 'cats' ...in the stray kitten foundation
Son I know your retarded...so ill drop this half hearted
you just like shite builders...ya never finish what ya started
Ask for an hour and drops way before...i hate those stupid fucks
he couldnt feed off my verse...but he'll wanna feed off my nuts
upping 1. leave links
ok ill kick off the voting here not hate please both of you return the favor
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=133926
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=133962
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=133989
Personals/ Punches: You have to give this to Kon cause he attack you personally, if you read over PJ's verse u'll realize this could have been directed at anyone, even tho a lot of lines in there cracked me up they were too general
Creativity: Give it to PJ because the atheist in the church and the low fat drink metas were funny and creative so he definitly took this category
Flow: Draw, both good, no clear cut winner in this category
Structure: Kon gets a slight edge because his lines were exactly the same length so you gotta give him credit for that
Vocab: Kon slightly neither were spectualar but Kon takes that because of his cook line
Overall I thought this was a really good battle props to both no hate but I sense that PJ came half hearted and Kon came harder, plus Kon had more personals which is what this is really about so V/ Kon
No hate please return the favor
Kon quest: Liked yours verse alot..you got nice punches...cool wordplay...solied structure....with a nice flow..chalk full of nice nameplay and metaphors.personal enough. The lines I liked
Originally Posted by Kon Quest
MceePJ: Don't get mistaken....you had a pretty nice verse but I feel that Kon just overcame you. You had nice structure but most of your punches are vague. Something I noticed is that you almost always finish your punches with a simile.
A few ok punches...and wordplay.
I liked this line
For a nice battles vote/KON quest
please return the favor and vote on this battle I found a while ago....and old battle.
Son I know your retarded...so ill drop this half hearted
you just like shite builders...ya never finish what ya started
Dammit forgot that I copied over that line...
heres the real url
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...1&page=1&pp=15
upping 2... leave links... jam ya battles closed..PM another if ya and ill hit it
I Dont Know Whats Up With Everyone
Kon- Dont Get Me Wron Man You Had A Really Good Verse, I Liked Your Structure, And You Had Really Descent Punches, Great Word Flow And Everything
Mceepj- I Think This Is Really Good Man, I Liked This One Alot, I Dont Know Why The Other Guys Voted For Kon, One Of Them Said Its Cause You Only Came Hald Spit But Shit I Guess Thats All It Takes Man You Got This Battle
V/mceepj
I Will Drop Some More So This Dont Get Dq'd....um Overall Kon I Guess That You Just Need To Try And Focus On Going Straight At Your Opponent And Stay On Onw Topic Until You Can Handle More Than That
And Mceepj Just Keep Droppin Your Shit Man, Its Workin Good So Far
uppin, just leave links
Kon Quest - Your structure was nice. Your flow was good. Your personals were alright but nothing really stood out. Your punches weren't very good, there wasn't any that hit hard. Your verse lacked complexity and creativity.
MCeePJ - Your structure was good. Your flow was nice. Your personals were okay but could have been better. You had some decent punches and some actually did some damage. This was a decent verse from you.
Vote - MCeePJ
Both of you drop a vote here:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=133754
KonQuest u had a decent verse some punches and ya structure was pretty good structure but it seems that MC came harder though. He had better punches and a better structure as well as clever wordplay so my vote goes too
MCeePJ
return the favor
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=134012
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heya.
kon..
PJ's taking a fall like usual....nothing new for you today
Thought he was the finest...cause people asking "U.K?"
nice opener.. good wordplay.
He murks fakes daily.....like that takes balls, go get a tutor
Never stepped to a vet before....now he's getting neutered
played, but pretty decent
He takes forever to bust......he'll never come quick as me
And PJ's a lousy cook.....can't get the desired consistancy
blah?
He's got spades, clubs and diamonds....hearts tooken, ya dig
He hasn't shown me nothing yet...I mean, just look at his sig
pretty weak.
He's feeling all these kids....knowing most of 'em are tighter
Cause he's RBs biggest petafile......PJ's stuck in the minors
decent finisher.
overall decent verse, but some of ya punches were pretty weak...
7.5/10
MC..
You even dropped first, and still didnt hit me where it hurts
cos hes just fake.. like an atheist kissin bibles in a church
hmm.. not a great opener.. but wasnt too bad
No doubt hes a 'Kon'....cos he thinks he can bite for free
shit! the faggots like low fat drinks, hes too light for me
not too bad.
Your bring shame and disgrace on this fuckin proud nation
i mean, ive battled better 'cats' ...in the stray kitten foundation
nah, wasnt good
Son I know your retarded...so ill drop this half hearted
you just like shite builders...ya never finish what ya started
pretty damn weak.
Ask for an hour and drops way before...i hate those stupid fucks
he couldnt feed off my verse...but he'll wanna feed off my nuts
crap finisher..
ive seen ALOT better from you MC.. maybe you wernt trying on this verse or something.. because this would have to be ur weakest verse....
overall 5/10..
Kon quest gets this..
v/ Kon
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