10 lines
you spit first
no crew votes
no d/r votes
no hatin votes
no feedin
and no time limit
STUBBY
...Apocalypse...
10 lines
you spit first
no crew votes
no d/r votes
no hatin votes
no feedin
and no time limit
if i post right now, will you post right away or are you not going to post for a day or so
I'ma drop my verse today..............like you have to give me 10-15 minutes
alright then consider this my check in bro.........
iight..........g'luck you'll need it
I called out anyone, and you are the person that i got
These five votes against u, feels worst than your pop-a-squat
You think you all tight cause your messaged at instantkilla
"blah blah, YOUR VERSE" shit all thats just a filla (filler)
You don't got a chance in this battle man, I know you see
I dont know what the fuck you thinkin man tryin to battle me
Your raps are just some wack shit like my mom's Masako Scripts
You think your all good man, but your really suddam's APOCALYPSE
Your thirteen, and you have already started rappin, thats cool
But im afraid, this is your third loss man, 5-0 majority rule
Masako- means female written
and the....
suddams apocalypse line- basically you have to know the definition of apocalypse to understand the line
This kid’s names says that he short and thick...
He calls out newbes cuz he’s knows he cant spit...
He aint on the “Next Level”, thats just unfortunate...
It’s a lose for you and to me it’s a 5-0 win...
He jerks off to porn, he’s always wishin...*
That he can have sex, but he aint in my position...**
50-50 is ya battle record but this battle isn’t...
For him to spit a verse it takes him 30 minutes...***
He’s so fruity just like his sig he’s white purple and blue...
After you loose, white, purple, and blue is wat happens to you...****
*- look at his avatar
**- look at his Interests
***- It took him 30 minutes to spit his verse
****- After I beat him he turns those colors
dude that was not even close to one of your best drops, that shit wasnt very good bro, but anyways uppin 1
just to clarify that his record is 8-8 and the 50-50 shit is based on that uppin......#1
uppin 2 can we get some votes please just leave links i will return the favor
ok ill kick off the voting, return the favor tho I think both of you might have voted on my battles but if you havent go ahead
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=133926
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=133962
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=133989
Opener: I wasnt feelin either of ur openers, seems like you were both stugglin to think of something and you both ended with something played
Punches/ Personals: Apoc because he went after stuff that was understandable, altho i didnt think that his explination was necessary, but give it to apoc because he worked in a lot of Stubby's personal info
Creativity: Ill call it a draw because you both tried really hard to be creative, maybe too hard cause you needed a lot of explinations, but good attempt not to have the same old boring stuff.
Flow: gave it to apoc because his first few lines flowed really excellently, but both of u did decently keepin it consistent.
Closer: give it to apoc although i think it might have been better if u had tried to keep it purple and blue and left out the white cause it makes more sense, but it was good, stubby kinda chose to use filler for a closer.
Even tho i made it sound like a blowout it wasnt that lopsided, stubby held his own but V/apoc
Now return the favor if u havent already
This battle wasn't that great....
Stubby had a few OK lines. His punches were lacking though. He had an Ok flow throughout his verse, but he lacked any real witty punches. His personals weren't that great either. You need to sit down and think about what you are writing before you just submit some shit like that. Just try to think of a witty concept and work off of it. Take your time, he didn't even specify a time limit, you could have taken all day if you wanted to. The only thing I can say that was good about your verse was that every line was actually supposed to be a punch.
Apoc was even worse. Most of his lines were filler and he threw no real punches. Who cares if his name means short and fat or whatever you said, you never played off of it. You had an OK flow, meaning your lines weren't stretched, but you had absolutely no wit behind anything you wrote (I almost called them punches). You need to direct your verse towards your opponent instead of just rapping, this is a battle, not a freestyle.....
Vote - Stubby for actually throwing punches
Return the favor with honest votes....
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=134353
uppin 3 can we get some votes please, just leave links
ok i expected more of apoc, but not a great battle, stubby came harder
apoc - a weak verse from you IMO, not really any good punches or personals, i think your alot better...
this verse kinda let you down, nothin really hit hard.....
flow wasnt bad tho, and structure was also good as lines were short. best bars was...
He’s so fruity just like his sig he’s white purple and blue...
After you loose, white, purple, and blue is wat happens to you
Wasnt good but your best.
throw harder punches nex time..
stubby - you had a few ok lines in the verse, some ok punches thrown, i liked sum of ya lines ya came kinda witty which is good, you did hit alot harder and you win this battle for actually throwin punches..flow was ight and structure werent bad..ur best bar was..
Your raps are just some wack shit like my mom's Masako Scripts
You think your all good man, but your really suddam's APOCALYPSE
Kinda creative and punches mixed with personal, pretty good.
v/ stubby
return the favour on my battle plz
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=134353
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