10-15 lines
No DR
No Crew
No Hate
3-0 = KO
U spit first
Due soon
Sao The Don
Allevyate
10-15 lines
No DR
No Crew
No Hate
3-0 = KO
U spit first
Due soon
and no feeding either, i forgot that my bad.......
This aint a tale of amazing fuckin grace so can you see?
Theirs no fuckin way You can win against me//
Unless you got dickriding votes then congrats suckin balls only way
you can UPP over me//
I'm so ill and keen, just eighteen but yet so clean my style sweet
like a tangerine//your punches so weak and obscene//
only way I can feel your shit is if I touch my computer screen//
I've traced your style routine//
say the same shit over, like lil flip repeating game over//
your shits wack out of this earth like the Mars Rover//
Quit delaying and delaying to drop your shit//
I know its like Virginia Slims I won't be able to feel it//
ive researched your battles and you actin so fuckin hard//
truth be told we kno u aint got no fuckin guard//
quick to back down we know u a wussy// pull up your undies
cuz i smell a wide pussy// i mighta fell off once or twice but im droppin first//
it dont matter tho cuz you fall off 10 times in one verse//
its over for this text battle now 4 me to rip u on the audio beat//
then after that its time 4 me 2 kill u on the street// when i find ya
Look at my eyes when I pull the trigger to have you gone//
So right before you die, you bow before the Don//
yo u went way over the limit...i said lines not bars.....whatever chekin in
So tried to do some research, but there aint none to b done
New cat annoying as hell, rb’s plankton
I got a secret for all you vets, this bum joined today
And he hops right on bitch slapped, yellin “mommy can I play?”
Hey Don u can call me bedpan cause I’m full of sick shit
With lines you cant stomach, take a break before u vomit
Ur lines don’t fit in the sequence, they lyrical misfit
You look so confused by my shit like ur reading sanskrit
Ur flow is equal to that of my leaky sink,
Ur vitamin intake is low, so ill pistol whip u for some zinc
Hey I gotta question whats up with u goin way over limit
Ah fuck it who cares, before this started it was finished
hahaha nice try kid... i'm use to this shit done in bars (not lines) since i was itty bitty drinkin liquor from my mommas titty... UPPin 4 votes..
i dont have enough posts to vote yet but im gonna go with allevyate....better flow and structure and he had better punches
i didnt like the same old..."ill pull the trigger on you" crap
and the wussy/pussy rhyme is overplayed so dont use that anymore
Allevyate had better vocab than STD
hahah STD!!!!
ok battle
Vote-- allevyate
if i have my 100 posts and this thread needs votes ill hit it up
your fuckin avatar kid shows your fuckin brain ya fuckin idiot
HEy bitch kwick sand u and me battle come bitch set it up pussy fuckin bitch
yo uppin 1 lets get some votes please i will return the favor as soon as i get my post count up
hey STD...dont u have some anti itch cream to apply to ur genitals...shut up
and dude
I"M PROBABLY A SHITLOAD SMARTER THAN YOU
and i'm 15!
ok...
Punches/Personals: there wasnt much to say bout STD but Allevyate did a nice job...he wins here
and.. STD went to long
STD, you used simple words ur vocab needs to improve so Allevyate wins here too
Some of ur lines were choppy and different lengths and Allevyate had better flow and structure
Allevyate also had better wordplay, creativity, and originality
Vote -- Allevyate
std your wyhme was very weak. Your supposed to diis him not got like i'm gonna pop this nigga. And just cause kwiksand stated this u start going crazy but he tallin the truth. U had BAD structure and flow, ur vocab was elementary and you dint have any punches.
Alleyvate had better flow, and sturcture which could have been better. Alleyvate had punches , not that great but they were they're.
vote:Alleyvate won
First of all STD you got a damn anger problem and blowin up everytime someone gives you feedback is gonna make it to where no one is goin to vote for you, and nobody does anyways right now but damn please bro calm ylur anger problem cause i seriously think you could have beat me in our battle but you fucked up b talkin to much shit, alleyvate won this battle he had stronger punches, and u talk to much shit instead of backin that shit up with good personals and punches, you just talk, and dont throw up anything
V/alleyvate
one of u forgot to poll, o well thanks for the feedback, uppin for more votes
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