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Thread: Love Like This

  1. #1

    Love Like This

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    Straight from my demo. Here's the lyrics to the song. The chorus is actually a sample. Here's a real love song for all of you emotional people. Enjoy.

    [Verse One]
    Was a jewel in the dirt, a ghetto chick, but no acta
    heart goin fasta, present Cleopatra
    my hobbies didn't matter, didn't care that I liked this
    Liked that I write this, she's what my dream wife is
    met her at the theatres, she was lonely, a seeker
    wanted a real man, her ex-man was a cheater
    emotions she was showin, a connection was growin
    ignorin the foolish teens and their popcorn throwin
    Walkin down the sidewalk, street lamps make glares
    at night, the dim light, show her smooth, black hair
    walk her to her front steps, press a peck, then her number
    wasn't boring like others, called her right before slumber
    Layin on my bed, feelin special what we had
    dialed her digits without lookin at the phone keypad
    A smooth, welcome voice, we talked through the whole night...
    from this point, I knew...that she was my future wife...


    [Chorus]
    There ain't no love like this
    Nobody makes me feel like you do...
    There ain't no love like this
    Nobody makes me feel like you do...


    [Verse Two]
    Invited her to the park, calm afternoon stroll
    down hill, kids roll, green grass bein mowed
    Not a cloud in the sky, not a single distraction
    Grasped her hand in mine, a smile was her reaction
    finally, a woman I could spend my life with it
    excitement she brought forth, dam I liked it
    ego wasn't too tall, she liked me after all
    no woman purposely misses her cell phone calls
    talked more to make bondage, found she had knowledge
    Sixteen and already had planned to go to college
    Intelligent and serious, my queen, she's precious
    her message, I knew that she'd love me relentless
    lookin into her eyes, they were calm and welcome
    she stared back, her hands on my leg, I felt em
    true feelings for a woman, I never pictured this
    witnessed a real heart...for my first true kiss...


    [Chorus]
    There ain't no love like this
    Nobody makes me feel like you do...
    There ain't no love like this
    Nobody makes me feel like you do...


    [Verse Three]
    Too many hoes nowadays, a good girl is the rarest
    she was the type of woman I would show to my parents
    Her name made me smile, she had a sense of humour...
    But all of that changed once i started hearin rumours...
    Affectin my dome, she wanted to be alone...
    Don't give me your machine, when I know you're at home
    Didn't believe what I was hearin, it was getting to my mind
    Things really start to stick once you hear it many times
    she denied it, called me on the phone, even cried about it
    told me that she loved me, but I just wasn't buyin it
    saw she was depressed and stressed, and I was too
    but I hung up the phone, when she said that "I love you..."
    a red heart stricken, the rumors made me sicken
    But I still loved her, so when she called, I listened
    she said we needa talk, so I asked where to met her...
    This was a fresh beginnin, so we met at the theatre...


    [Chorus]
    There ain't no love like this
    Nobody makes me feel like you do...
    There ain't no love like this
    Nobody makes me feel like you do...
    Last edited by Bare Fists; June 22nd, 2004 at 02:41 AM

  2. #2
    That Shit Cray Chris Black's Avatar
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    This was cool. Everyone has there twist on the topic. This was pretty tipical for it. Flow seemed straight. Everything was cool. Nothing great, but not wack either. Pretty average. I'de love to hear the song. Text doesn't do real songs justice, seeing as how I can't read your delivery, energy, voice etc. Anyway, post up the song one day. Keep doin' you, homie.

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  3. #3
    MC_Merc
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    That was kickass, its funny how all these new people start showing up and they be puttin kick ass open mics. Props man, i'm surprised nobody left any feed back. The flow was alright, the structure was alright, but the piece had alot of emotion so that mwahts really made this piece great.

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    Fear Before The March Foreshadow's Avatar
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    Nice drop. Description was nice I like a good descriptive piece. Topic was nice. I started reading the last verse an I was like NO your going to mess it up then it wouldnt be a nice love song but you fixed it.

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