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View Poll Results: Who won this battle?

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  • Tomer

    0 0%
  • yarborough

    5 100.00%
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Thread: Ash (AKA yarborough) Vs. Tomer

  1. #1
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    Ash (AKA yarborough) Vs. Tomer

    Sup.

    Nigga you's a newbie tryin to step in da ring wit da big dogs.
    When im done when you we wont see ya no more, youll be gone.
    Now lemme clear somethin up, I aint no B rabbit wannabe,
    Then again i aint like u, a fagget on his knees,
    Bitch please, when you pick an opponent you gotta be more selective,
    Or else ya mommas gonna have to hire a detective.
    I murder ya Tomer,
    put ya body in a dumpsta.
    But hey bro, lemme give u some advice.
    Take this time out an try to be nice.
    Cus i doubt u got anythin worth while to say.
    Jus go ahead forfeit the battle an admit ur gay/
    go ahead its ok to take a defeat,
    cus if u step up to me son, u gonna get beat.
    I dont mean that jus verbably,
    Im whoop ya ass irresverably.
    Nigga be up in a hospital sippin through straw.
    Screamin, "I got owned by Ash then he hit me in the jaw!"
    But ya im outta dis shiz lets se wut u got.
    Becareful wut u say cus u might get shot......

    (Sorry bout the typos, jus typin as it comes.)

    Please rate.

  2. #2
    TomER
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    Yeah... my name is Tommy,
    But your rhymes stink worse than old salami,
    Soo why dont you go home and cry to your mommy,
    cuz my rhymes fold together like origami.
    William Hung can flow better than you do,
    I can think of betta rhymes while takin a doo-doo.
    I started to think you had a hit,
    but i didnt think so many words put together could sound like shit!
    It was hard to read your lyrics thru,
    But i guess hookd on phonix dont work for u.
    You just got killed by dis new-b hoe,
    so use this next free time and have a blow.

  3. #3
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    Battles over, not tryin to sound like an assho. But as a word of advice (back me up ppl) try to use kiddy words, like doo-doo etc. But anyways, good battle bro. Lets see wut the ppl think. Vote plz!!!

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    Quote Originally Posted by yarborough
    Battles over, not tryin to sound like an assho. But as a word of advice (back me up ppl) try to use kiddy words, like doo-doo etc. But anyways, good battle bro. Lets see wut the ppl think. Vote plz!!!
    Sorry, Try "NOT" to use......
    my bad

  5. #5
    TomER
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    Come on people back me up. this guy has got no ryme capabilities

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    ^^^^^^^^^^Bizzzzump. Vote pu pu pu pllllz lol
    Last bump I swear

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    aight, lemmie break it down for ya.

    Ash, sorry, but your vese needed some SERIOUS elevation. you had a wack structure, your 4th bar was short as hell and didn't rhyme worth shit, and, um... oh! allow me to count up how many punches/personals/metas you had in your "verse"........................................... ............. NONE!!!! NADA!!! ZIP!!!! you just went babblin on about how you wuz gonna kill TomER and put him in the hospital and shit.... man. save that shit for your open mics, or the freestyle/ weapons cypher. And your opener and closer were pathetic. sorry. you need punches to win, dawg, and ya didn't have ANY.

    TomER, you, however, actually HAD punches in there, and they were halfway decent for a newbie. your structure was good, and ya rhyme scheme was ok. your opener was wack, but funny as hell; lmao; but your closer was not what i would expect. YOUR BEST BAR IN THERE (AND OF THE ENTIRE BATTLE) WAS YA 5TH. LMAO! tomer, ya did great, 'specially 4 a noob, and, due to the fact that you had the more consistant and better punches, i gave you my vote.

    my vote = TomER

    hit up my battle wit dreamer, cuz...... oh, THAT'S right, i forgot... I KO'd the kid!!! HA! Nevermind!!!! lol





    ps. yo TomER, click on this > our crew. PM me when you do that, k? I'll meet ya there and we can discuss things.

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    *Senses hate vote* Considering you had Tomer's back in the Bitch Slapped forum. If not, my bad. Lets see wut other ppl have to say.......

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    Sorry just noted your sig also. Lets see wut other ppl think............

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    hey man, don't worry, no hatin. cool? i don't do that. I vote for whoever has the most punches, aight?

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    Na bro, Aint tryin to disrespect ya man, jus callin it how i see dats all. All good bro, u welcome to hit me up on pm some time if ya want, same to u Tomer. Jus tryin to see wuts up. Would let to get some votes on dis.

  12. #12
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    good god yall are pathetic, just some advice to both, yall just wastin ur ups over some bullshit argument. damn newbs.....oh my fault, damn certified newbs. I swear yall are some funny ass bitches. Screw wut i said about wasting ups, keep arguing, this shits funny.

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    doo wuteva, i would battle u right now, but im hung ova. Lets get some votes on dis.......

  14. #14
    TomER
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    somebody plezzzzz vote on this battle............................

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    Tomer is DQ'ed for spamming his thread in Macabre and Recca's battle.
    I'm a fag, I'm a faggot...
    Oh I'm a faggot...
    I'm a fag, I'm a faggot...
    Oh Oh...Oh I'm a faggot

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