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Here i come with my tongue so venomous
try chat shit get jumped by ten of us,
my crew buss'a'buss
if you fuck with us
leave you in a daze, my flows contaminous,
none of my boys no never back down
try merc me youll get knocked out
il catch you rip out your throat,
put it to the mic, hear you spit that dope ?
go put on a dress, platforms like the beegees
girls get vexed cuz you give em D VD
i dont really care cuz my crew is riding with me,
get pulled over ? yo feds wont see me,
pick up my uzi,
pick you out easy,
il merks you like jill dando from the T.V
mc you say you heartless, but your brainless
your flow is more wack then your face is
your titled certified noob, more like certified crap
learn how to write before you start to rap
your toungue is venemous nodoubt indeed
when it spits its a crime, u about to see
just look at your rhymes, they cant even flow
you call me a muthafucka, but cant even show
any true, or insignifigant challenge to me
nor anyone in the world, could be defeat by thee
uppin 1#
uppin 2# why the fuck isnt anyone voting, its been like 20 views
yeah man, its been like 20 views and no ones voted, because this is a weak battle, but imma do u a favor...........& vote, so i expect a thankyou.
vote- mc_merc
reason:
mc_merc- he just came around with the better all around verse, even though his was just as wack as the other kats. Nothin was that spcial in ur verse, except that u had the better structure and flow. Vocab was aight, nothin special, just alot of elementry words. Personals wasnt any. Punches there was none. And oh yeah......ur a certified nOOb aswell........just wanted to include u in on that.
mc heartless- ur verse just didnt cut it period in this perticular battle. U need to really look on workin on ur structure and flow, but most def. punches and personals. I think wut i just sayed summarized everything about ur verse, nothin was really that good. Just elevate man, and then come back around to merk this kat.
Agin my vote goes to mc_merc, for having a "noch" better verse, even though it was still wack.
mc heartless, don't bring that Garage shit in here please.
MC merc won that one just overall betta and his flow was way betta but heartless ya shit was ok but not quite enough
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thank you, and what i meant was under him it said cerified noob, but hes certified crap so he should be titled that .
42 uppin 4
yeh n ur reviews werent much betta merc boy so fuck u
Vote for MC_Merc because his flow was better, both vocab was pretty average but i was more feelin tha verse of MC_Merc...Nothing really amazing in here, just basic stuff but if i look at both, must say MC_Merc was better in flow and rhymin' but mcheartless wasn't bad either but have to go for MC_Merc
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mc hearless
structure was wack...ur lines got longer as ur verse progressed...and because u did that, it really fucked up ur flow...no metas...no wordplay...none of ur punches connected...no personals...
MC_Merc
dont feed off of his verse...for example, u talkin about ur tongue bein venemous...but anywho...structure was good...flow was on target...u had a few metas...wordplay was pretty simple...some of ur punches barely connected...a few attempted personals...
Overall
MC_Merc had a better structure...a more stable flow...more metas...better wordplay....more punches...better personals...so basing off of that...MC_Merc gets my vote...
VOTE - MC_MERC
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yeah man, its been like 20 views and no ones voted, because this is a weak battle, but imma do u a favor...........& vote, so i expect a thankyou.
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why? becasue this battle was half ass.... actually. it was ass. but merc cam ewith attempts on punches and personals. he wasn't talkignto much playd shit andkept it simple. heartless work on your text = aim for punches
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