Stryk9 Vs. Dissonance

[Dissonance]

Rules:
10 Lines min
20 Lines max
No feeding
Blind Spit
No D/R
No Crew
Only Explained votes.

You said youd spit right away. so, check in and spit.

[Stryk9]

checkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk kkkkkkk

[Stryk9]

HEy diss were going for another battle, round 2
ill mop up while i dont need a wig to clown you
You can make the rules, tell me to blind spit
but your reps so small i could piss on ants behind it
dissonance consigned this and for the price it costs
Damn im late i coulda been responsible for your fifth loss
Seems you store failiure like stocking up a shelf

Wack emcees need not apply

Now your talking about yourself
for gods sake this broads fake till he stops life
He asks whats cooking whenever hes offered to hot knife
I can graph my success the way i sever your skin
like a slot machine you cant match up, thats why you never win
Thats my verse as a vacuum of skill its yours to suck in
screw a turbo this is the epitomy of forced induction

there ya go

[Stryk9]

when exatcly do you plan to spit i mean ill have a quick spit hadicappe but at least spit today

[Dissonance]

Here's my verse.

Ayo,
you dont have a prayer to spare, against these ill rhymes I tear
People know I'm like a bear, I'll have you shredded to bits,
Your style is like greasy foods, it will give you the shits,
It's impossible to win this battle, you just “struck” out,
After “nine” wasted tries, people yell "Get the Fuck out!"
Come on, bitch, dont even try to use those illiterate rhymes,
Ill have you connected to the machine with the "squiggly lines"
I save up a metaphor, for when I met a whore, now I set the score
Now I use one letter more, and watch my abilities soar.
You cant combat with anything, I know ya lyrics bore
On the microphone, i straight disconnect your face
Ive already seen your turn, and you are secured for 2nd place

[Stryk9]

upin 1 common lets gets some honest votes
dont be sleepin

[Stryk9]

upin2 can we plz get some votes on this,
ill return favor on anyone who votes

[Stryk9]

holy fuck, not even one vote, man shits getting bad on this site
vote and i wil return the favor,
common dont make it so i droped verse for nothing
diss start uppin dude

[Exculptifactoriusness]

Ill break the ice here..

Punches: Stryk got this, narrowly though. When it came to punches i felt that both came pretty weak...both had 2 good punches. The two tyhat sryk had were better thsn the two the dissonance had..

Personals: Both came weak in this category also. But i felt that stryk got this also. But against it was very narrow. Steryk had lone really good one that made me laugh, but dissonance had some sub par ones..

Flow and Structure: For this battle i put these tow together just because dissonance got both. Good flow and great structrue by diss. I liked it alot and it helpoed the verse alot. Stryk this is what you have to eleavte on the most. Flow was really bad and the structrue was wack. Get anenw one.Read vets battles.

But punches win battles and not flow

So V/Stryk

Hit up the battkle in ym sig please

[Aargh Kelly]

punches and personals i would say go to stryk9 but the flow and structure goes to
dissonance it was an ok battle you both had an good and bad on your verses but punches and personals win battles

vote/stryk9
cant vote anyway cause dont have enough posts and stryk9 and i are in the same crew

[Dissonance]

yo, i been busy. sorry about not uppin, had some shit to do.

Upp #1 for me. Lets get some more votes on this shit!

[Dissonance]

Uppin #2..

Quick spit handicap??? haha. Thats funny. It took you 30 minutes to write that verse. At the maximum, i had 50

[Karl Merks]

This was an old battle I had with Jo'Bus that I recently came across. Please help me finish it, it's been like 6 months.

Flow - Dissonance - His words seemed to rhyme better, which made for a better flow. A couple times Stryk rhymed words like 'Costs' and 'Loss' - which sound similar, but do not rhyme.

Punches - Stryk - This category was very close, but I just think Stryk pulled it out. There wasn't any amazing quotables by either of you.

Personals - Stryk - I really only counted one for each of you. I feel that Stryk's was the harder of the two.

Originality - Dissonance - I think Dis came much more orginal. Some of his punches didn't hit hard, but atleast they were original.

People know I'm like a bear, I'll have you shredded to bits,
Your style is like greasy foods, it will give you the shits,

^ Case and point.

VOTE: Stryk - close battle, but when it comes down to it, punches and personals are the meat of the battle and he took both of those categories.

[Jonezy]

overok try to break it down

Flow - dis took the flow, his was a lil better and he kinds stayed constant with tit throughout, stryks did fall off now and then andit wasnt as good.

structure - Diss also had better structure, his lines were even, and they were also at a good length which also helped keep the flow good, stryks was all diff size lines which wasnt as good.

punches - stryk takes the punches, his were harder overall and they were more creative than diss's, some of stryks were kinda good and stronger.

personals - none had great personals, but again stryk takes the personals, his were better than diss's and he came harder also.

overall stryk came original and it gave him the win.

v/ stryk

[Stryk9]

upin 4 can we get this over with soon,
vote and all return favor on the same day