10-12 lines
Fernoe spit first
No time limit
Votes must be explained
i'm expecting u to spit within 2 days of me posting this (u dont have to but i prefer it if u do)
...apocalypse...
fernoe
10-12 lines
Fernoe spit first
No time limit
Votes must be explained
i'm expecting u to spit within 2 days of me posting this (u dont have to but i prefer it if u do)
oh another thing... if you use a personal about my sig, i can't put the link to this thread to this battle (no room to add anything to my sig) i aint gonna use personals 'gainst ur sig.
iight cool u spittin first
yes i know its only 8 lines...
I will smash his face with roof tiles until he’s toothless and-he’s-dead
He’s only ruthless ‘cause he can’t afford to put a roof ov’r-his fam’ly’s-head
Fuck it! Apocalypse is dumb as shit! I ain’t got to spit; I could vomit it
Ya know I’d give you a stomach hit but there’s so much cum in it…
From where u sucking dick…I couldn’t stomach it!!
Start dropping it He’ll bring apocalypse to hip-hop, and I can prove it
The dumb lil’ prick He follows a crew named after g-unit…
Mongo thugs turning into weak losers. Imagine if shit was edible
His lyrics would make Ethiopians fat….he is that terrible
just spotted a REAL big mistake (thats what i get for spitting in under 32 minutes)
I will smash his face with roof tiles until he’s toothless and-he’s-dead/
He’s only ruthless* cause he can’t afford to put a roof over-his fam’ly’s-head /
Fuck it! Apocalypse is dumb as shit! I ain’t got to spit; I could vomit it /
Ya know I’d give you a stomach hit but there’s so much cum in it…
From where u sucking dick…I couldn’t stomach it!!
Start dropping it He’ll bring apocalypse to hip-hop, and I can prove it
The dumb lil’ prick He follows a crew named after g-unit…
Mongo thugs turning into weak losers. Imagine if shit was edible
His lyrics would make Ethiopians fat….he is that terrible
*Roofless...ruthless? get it?
word u suck Ima drop lata and just tellin u that I can spiot 10 lines which i will
I'ma demolish this bitch out of existence, livin the distance...
Played out lyrics you have, always tryin to diss us(M-Unit)...
I am the devil I rule the “666 hells highway“, K.O you 5 ways...
Its apocalyptic for you its all over........like the high days...
How many times you can loose, more than “666” times mayne....
Apocalypse my name, its describes the end of this game...
This aint MTV’s Real World’s Inferno so stop playin...
Leave you buried in the rap commentary decayin...
You should’ve neva drop ya verse, you drop the worst...
Losin not just cuz you drop the first, but cuz loosin is ya curse...
uppin #1.............
I will return the favor.....
dis battle was great i had to say
Apocalypse: i liek da word stucture very good rhymes but i got to say da wordins were a little out of shape but u did well u put more wieght and brutality (in words) dan fernoe. very good
Fernoe; very nice and well balanced, nice lines n dat is very competitive. i like how u spat da 2 first lines. very good
now i think da best is apoc. apoc: 8 fernoe: 7 1/2
The Youngest Intellectual Mind 12
Deep
Poetic
Feel
Who Am I... I bring Forth Misorder!
uppin..........#2
......Will return the favor.....
Woooooooo.
I swayyyyy.
I'm dope.
Last edited by Axe; June 18th, 2004 at 12:46 PM
heya..
fernoe..
I will smash his face with roof tiles until he’s toothless and-he’s-dead
He’s only ruthless ‘cause he can’t afford to put a roof ov’r-his fam’ly’s-head
weak opener, talking about killing
Fuck it! Apocalypse is dumb as shit! I ain’t got to spit; I could vomit it
Ya know I’d give you a stomach hit but there’s so much cum in it…
From where u sucking dick…I couldn’t stomach it!!
Start dropping it He’ll bring apocalypse to hip-hop, and I can prove it.
weak 2 bars, no real punches there
The dumb lil’ prick He follows a crew named after g-unit…
Mongo thugs turning into weak losers. Imagine if shit was edible
His lyrics would make Ethiopians fat….he is that terrible
weak finisher, too.. no punch
overall 3.5/10... no real punches there man.. you need to work on personals too, find something about the guy.. and use it!
apoc...
I'ma demolish this bitch out of existence, livin the distance...
Played out lyrics you have, always tryin to diss us(M-Unit)...
started off well, weak opener...
I am the devil I rule the “666 hells highway“, K.O you 5 ways...
Its apocalyptic for you its all over........like the high days...
nice multi's.. but weak punch
How many times you can loose, more than “666” times mayne....
Apocalypse my name, its describes the end of this game...
no punch
This aint MTV’s Real World’s Inferno so stop playin...
Leave you buried in the rap commentary decayin...
no punch
You should’ve neva drop ya verse, you drop the worst...
Losin not just cuz you drop the first, but cuz loosin is ya curse...
blah..
overall 4/10...
both of you need to work on punches.. half the time you are just talking without saying anything.....
v/apoc... barely.
Punches - Both, basically, with no exaggeration, and honestly, HAD NONE! Fernoe talked a bit 'bout killing = gay. But at least Apocalypse tried, he came better with dissing.
Flow - Both flows were wack. Didn't like 'em. Apocalypse's flow was better though. Not too many stretched lines.
Wordplay - Fernoe or whatever your name is, shut the fuck up! There was no wordplay in your verse. Apocalypse had no wordplay too.
Structure - Both average. Didn't like 'em though. Try to use a better structure kids.
Overall - Apocalypse's flow was better, and in general, his verse was better too. Fernoe, work on your flow, wordplay, punches, structure, rhyme scheme, multies, whatever the fuck you can find.
V/Apocalypse
Yo any mod ill khan voted for me but in the poll it says that ferno has one and i have one vote
and in fernoe I didnt rite till I got back from my friends house and that onlly took me 10 minutes
Yeah I asked the mods to change it...
...don't worry man.
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