Alright you know the rules already
even though u decided to change them
there's no d/r, no crew, no hater votes
no line limit
no recycled or pre-written
Alright you know the rules already
even though u decided to change them
there's no d/r, no crew, no hater votes
no line limit
no recycled or pre-written
B.X.P doesn’t have the balls to spit first
I’ll merk him anyway cause my shits unrehearsed
I aint got time to wait for some weak pre-written
‘bout his late night prison kama sutra positions
So take a close look before u post what you’re spittin’
Cause your battle rap is gonna need a couple revisions
It’s not my freestyle that’s leaving you speechless
It’s that dick in your mouth that you’ve been sucking like leeches
But even leeches don’t suck off same-sex creatures
So go back to kneeling underneath the bleachers
I don't need to spit punches when this battles already taken
I don't need to hold grudges, I'm battling Clay Aiken
Take your fucking time with your rhyme dictionary
Cause there’s no possible way you could win this shit fairly
--By the time you read this line
I’ve eXecuted this mime
Pulling apart this newbie was a waste of my time--
I’ll show this bitch how serious I get about my rhymes
When his body gets discovered by CSI
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let's see this text
I dont remember you agreeing to battle me
you just set this shit up without telling me
you insult my intelligence but
anyway ill spit give me a minute
no limit hahaha sorry
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sorry abou this freepost i needed to see if my lines would fit
i dont trust that preview post
I read you verse have to admit your B.X.P line touched a nerve
Im surprised you can connect the letters to form a word
But im not hatin I guess the emcee in you has yet to awaken
But your mistaken show some respect your dad IS Clay Aiken
This battle is misleadin after I post this you bitch about me feedin
But you forgot im a leech and leeches leave you bleedin
You chose the battle against me cause you thought i was the worst
I went second cuz i knew you was stupid enough to go first
You wanted to diss me so bad so you posted no limit
hell you spit twenty lines and you still couldnt win it
ill win this battle but you'll say i didnt win it fair
i dont care go back to countin your pubic hairs
You saw "new to RB" and said this kid is goin to get a merkin
im certain you brought the balls cuz your dick is never workin
I saw yo girl under the bleachers she looked like a fucked up creature
I put a bag over her head but dont get me started on her face features
I'll give you a clap on the back just for being stupid enough to try
lyrical attack on the skillz you lack next time decline and you know why
alright lets see some votes on this shit
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uppin(3) i will return the favor
just pm and when i get enough posts ill vote
on your battles
Dyslexic breakdown-
B.X.P doesn’t have the balls to spit first
I’ll merk him anyway cause my shits unrehearsed
weak.... 4/10
I aint got time to wait for some weak pre-written
‘bout his late night prison kama sutra positions
wack... this is just dumb.. not connecting 4/10
So take a close look before u post what you’re spittin’
Cause your battle rap is gonna need a couple revisions
ehh not creative,.... 5/10
It’s not my freestyle that’s leaving you speechless
It’s that dick in your mouth that you’ve been sucking like leeches
kinda wack...5/10
But even leeches don’t suck off same-sex creatures
So go back to kneeling underneath the bleachers
wtf bleachers?... this was just dumb 5/10
I don't need to spit punches when this battles already taken
I don't need to hold grudges, I'm battling Clay Aiken
LOL @ clay aiken thats kinda funny..6/10
Take your fucking time with your rhyme dictionary
Cause there’s no possible way you could win this shit fairly
ok ok.. your getting better....6/10
--By the time you read this line
I’ve eXecuted this mime
Pulling apart this newbie was a waste of my time--
I’ll show this bitch how serious I get about my rhymes
When his body gets discovered by CSI
ehhh last lines were weak... the csi was ok.. 6/10
overall---41/80
BXP breakdown
I read you verse have to admit your B.X.P line touched a nerve
Im surprised you can connect the letters to form a word
weak...6/10
But im not hatin I guess the emcee in you has yet to awaken
But your mistaken show some respect your dad IS Clay Aiken
lol@ emcee yet to awaken and aiken flip 7/10
This battle is misleadin after I post this you bitch about me feedin
But you forgot im a leech and leeches leave you bleedin
damn that was kinda hot... nice diss 8/10
You chose the battle against me cause you thought i was the worst
I went second cuz i knew you was stupid enough to go first
hahahaha.... lol 7/10
You wanted to diss me so bad so you posted no limit
hell you spit twenty lines and you still couldnt win it
lmfao.. harsh but kind of true.. hah.. 6/10
ill win this battle but you'll say i didnt win it fair
i dont care go back to countin your pubic hairs
woa.. that was wack.. 4/10
You saw "new to RB" and said this kid is goin to get a merkin
im certain you brought the balls cuz your dick is never workin
ok ok.. your getting better....6/10
I saw yo girl under the bleachers she looked like a fucked up creature
I put a bag over her head but dont get me started on her face features
ehh wackkkk... dissing sisters is fucking stupid 4/10
I'll give you a clap on the back just for being stupid enough to try
lyrical attack on the skillz you lack next time decline and you know why
nice last line.. but not creative....6/10
54/90
overall this battle was freaking weak, and shitty.. there were some nice lines said but the stupid shit in the verses outshone the good... im not sure if these were freestyles or not, but they need some work.. watch your structure and syllables, also add more multis flow is essential and also.... there were like no fucking punchlines.. battles ARE WON on punches..
v/ BXP for a slightly better verse...but not much better.
please return the favor on my topical battle..... thanks.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=132857
im sick of these fuckin judges..... all they can do is critisize.... cant do shit else....
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^^WTF You Talkin About
Well Neways
Dylexic=Your Verse Was Aite...Your Vocab Was Wack And You Really LackeD On The Personals On Your Verse...Some Shit Wasn't Onpoint Like the Bleachers Line And The Leeches Shit I Was Like WTF??? But You Was Aite I Didn't Like The Way You Spelled Out His NAme Shit Was Actually Not MAkin Sense...Your Flow Was Really Rusty And U Was All Over Comin From Some Shit To Another And I Wasn't Enjoyin It It Was Weak So Overall Verse I Read...........5/10 You Need To Step Ya Shit Up Homie ...I Haven't Voted In Years Lol So I'm Doin This Shit Again
Bxp=Damn Son...I Looked At Your Shit And WAs Actually Laughin Cause Your Whole Verse Was Fed Of Dylexics' Shit That Shit WAs Actually Not Creative At All That Line About Your Female On The Bleachers And The Facial Features??? Come On Homie This is 2004 I Remember Those Wack Lines Back In 02-03 And You Tryin To Be Better On This Site...Thats One Thing You Never Do ...Feed Of Some1 Elses Verse Which Means You Read His Verse And Then You Typed Yours Your..Shit Was Trash Homie No Offense.....No Wonder I Hate Votin...Verses Lik Yours....Overall Verse 3/10
Vote=Dylexic....And If Some1 Rejects My Vote I'm Really Gonna Throw A Fuckin Fit This Shit Is Alot Of Typin And ...Mods I Did Break Down The Vote So Hollaz
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^ feedin was allowed
unless he said no feedin which he didn't i had the better punches and personals
and overall better verse so dont give me crap about two lines jimmy
and i aint takin no advice from someone who has a name off a fuckin cartoon show so fuck you
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