I called out...
He accepted.
I denied.
He insisted...
So aight, 12 lines.
Do ya thing, kid.
siCCz
Born To Kill
I called out...
He accepted.
I denied.
He insisted...
So aight, 12 lines.
Do ya thing, kid.
thank you... checkin in... i gut 20 minutes to spit it... those were my terms... so, here goes...
and by tha way... g'luck homie
i jus said that shit to get chu to acceptlol
pz
ight... here it is...
Fuck ya whole record, cuz ima still disrespect ya/
Since I aint gutta loss, dealt by you yet-sir//1
pleez put cha dictionary, back on ya dresser/
You flow like sneezes, & farts mixed 2getha//2
iono whether 2 say, excuse you, or god bless-ya/
You getting nervous bout your acceptshure//3
I can see my impact wuz like fatty foods & stressors/
str8 up raisin ya bloods pressure//4
give up tha rap thang, you aint gonna git-stacks/
Ehh, don’t make a difference, still leave ya crumbled like kit-kats//5
And don’t tryta mention my wal-mart job like them 3 unoriginal bastids/
Tryta be intelligent here… leave it alone, let’s get past-it//6
you're up homie
g'luck
pz
Ya just a kid dreamin, tryin ta beat a vet...
Forced ta try and win big, cuz he ain't won nothin yet.
Livin up to his name, makin me sick, not discreetly...
And his ignorant attitude makes strangers...immediately.
And I know he's ugly, his face is worse than a glock...
He knows the second he was born, cuz his face stopped the clock!
I bet ya girl's ugly too, and I don't mean ta hate...
But she fakes orgasms with you, and then when she masturbates!
Or is that Prince in ya sig, lookin gangsta gay?
With pumps in chump's mouths, maybe you swing that way.
I've killed you, kid, now commit suicide for real death...
Cuz when ya started livin for the moment, the moment got up and left.
hmm... wut is it wit ppl and sayin my name is sick?... its siCCz... as in tha number 6! lol... has nothina do wit siCC at all lol
but o0o well...
nice drop
pz
b2k
your punches were fire..... but ive seen alot of people do alot better... nice flow, multies were really iight but i really didnt like any...and that what i really liked about your verse,personal's were okay not really good..overall nice job overall ... but it was enought to merk this kat who has no life...but okay and oo0 yea your structure was good .. overall pretty weak but it was enought to get you a win
sIcCZ
your verse was wack as fuk you really need to find another hobby you really need to elevate alot.. your multies were wack , your punclines were wack and even if they were which i think they were derected at b2k, i really think your wack@@@!! ass fuk ,personals were wack and i really think you need to work on that,your structure was wack made your verse really hard to read , but i still think your wack and you need to elevate alot and really need to elevate alot...
Vote = B2K
return the favor in the battle in my sig and ill drop my poll vote .. and please explain properly when voting thank you
Born to Kill- You did enough to win straight up...Your flow good, structure: good, multies, good, punches, good... Your whole verse was ehhh... but Your overall stat is 7/10...enuff to win
Siccs- Wack on the real son Structure: no, Flow: not so good(more like wack)lol, enjoyed: hell nah, punches, wack, overall 3/10 to 4/10
Vote: Born to kill
Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Ambiguous
My bad on born to kill where it said enuff to win it was suppose to be more than enuff to win
Ba dum bump!
Born took this although like others mentioned, he didnt even really try hard. His punches were basic but at least his punches were more creative, complex and witty.
nice. . .
I've killed you, kid, now commit suicide for real death...
Cuz when ya started livin for the moment, the moment got up and left.
I couldnt make sense of this line thought . . .
Livin up to his name, makin me sick, not discreetly...
And his ignorant attitude makes strangers...immediately.
SiCCz
You obviouisly new to this but I mean you did not so bad. You didnt have any creative punches and it seemed to rhymed JUST to rhyme. Dont worry thought keep battlin and u'll get better
v/Born To Kill
Harry
cuz ima still disrespect ya/
Made nosense
Since I aint gutta loss, dealt by you yet-sir//1
pleez put cha dictionary, back on ya dresser/
You flow like sneezes, & farts mixed 2getha//2
2/10
iono whether 2 say, excuse you, or god bless-ya/
You getting nervous bout your acceptshure//3
I can see my impact wuz like fatty foods & stressors/
str8 up raisin ya bloods pressure//4
3/10...whack and basic
give up tha rap thang, you aint gonna git-stacks/
Ehh, don’t make a difference, still leave ya crumbled like kit-kats//5
And don’t tryta mention my wal-mart job like them 3 unoriginal bastids/
Tryta be intelligent here… leave it alone, let’s get past-it//6
5/10 nice try but still weak
Vote B2K....for havin a verse that made sense
Born with the merk!
You newbie battler!
Lol Anyways yeah you came real easy on this one. Your punches were decent, only decent because i believe that you came easy with your verse. Nonetheless, The personals hit and the flow was good. Also structture was good and it beat his shit. Your verse wasnt that spectacular, but it was Way better than his.
With you siccz, You came wack. Please stop with the / on the end of your lines cuz its mad newbish, but your a newb so i guess its ok. but stop doing that in future battles. Your punches didnt hit and they didnt do damage or make me say wow!
Flow was bad and so was the strcuture, even your lines a bit and use more personals..
V/BTK
Hit up the battles in my sig Please, Preferably the one with blitz
Thanks
uhh this was a pretty weak battle.
siccz you really need some help. try working on your flow and structure. Alot of the time you weren't making any sense. You tried to be witty with wordplay and ended up being quite wack. On top of that you made up a word... lemme find it. . . "acceptshure" oh man. . . even if this was an attempt at wordplay it was wack. Siccz you need to come at it harder. try to be more creative cause you seemed played and boring. read more and listen 2 more rap.
b2k you didn't even try to really win. you knew if you just whipped something together it would be good enough to get votes. i dont blame you i do the same thing. haha we are lethargic devils. b2k your flow was on point and structure was pretty crisp aswell. creativity far outmatched your oppoenets. punches were stronger by far. all in all not the best verse of yours but enough to take the vote.
Props 2 both
peace
Vote- Born To Kill
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