t-storm vs stubby

[t-storm]

house rulez
10 linez
blind spit
verses due 30 mins after u chk in

consider this my chk in..............gud luk

[STUBBY]

alright im checking in!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[t-storm]

ok stubby ima drop this quick, i dnt wana let defeat linger...
ima burn ya brain so u cnt spit, n bite off ya writin finger...

all u can do is bark, well now u fucked..got me to bite
ima drop your jaw fasta than a run in with iron mike

i change faces,attack from unsuspecting places...call me cata-troy
like pearl harbour ur armour weak ,ima sneak n ya fleet de-stroy

bitch, in this game u a tenant...so go and get your bags-packed
step 2 me mr wack, i knock u down quicker than an M.F.I flat-pack

ma internal rhyme scheme got u a shade of ashamed green..thats envy
call me the mouse that scared the elephant..u lost the fight of the century




LOOKIN 4 A CREW SO HIT ME UP PEEPS

[STUBBY]

You called out someone to blind split
I battle anyone, its MY SIG i signed it
It's there so dont tell me u cant find it
Its just TWO little faces giving u the bird
If u will just wait a sec..i will add a THIRD
By the end of the voting its what you'll prefer
The faces can be the number of votes i get
I know that now u just want to sigh and quit
But its not my fault that my dick wouldnt fit
Being a T-Storm like u gots to be frightening
But storm couldnt handle MY lightening
Storm could u tell me if my teeth are whitening
I know that u can see them, cause u made me smile
This battke will be like Born to Kill vs. Versatile (short)
Tell your mom thanks, i aignt had that kind of pussy in a while

[t-storm]

supposed to b 10 lines....u had 15....but whateva UPIN...............................

[STUBBY]

MY BAD YO, ALL THAT SHIT IS ONE PEICE THERE IS NO SPACING

uppin votes

[t-storm]

Aiight Its Cool..................upin........................ ......................................

[sabotage]

this battle was ok. T storm took it in terms of punches. Stubby took it in terms of flow and creativity. Both of you kinda came weak in the delivery department. Diction was also kinda lacking. Personals may have been in there somewhere but i wasn't catchin'em. Concepts were ok on both sides. I liked t storms a bit better. In general flow and structure stubby had a more organized verse. Through looking over both verses again . . . im going to have to give this one to stubby because he had a generally better verse with more rthym. Good battle. Props 2 both. Peace

Hit up the battle in my sig!

Vote - Stubby

[STUBBY]

alright man thanks for the feedback yo...........uppin more votes

[t-storm]

ok but i disagree..i had beta punches,wordplay,multies,metas,pretty much everything really...................................but no hate.UPIN

[Hansom Harry]

T-storm is pming people for votes...DONT do it to me again

[t-storm]

piss off^^^^^^^^i asked 4 an HONEST vote u tossa...i`ll pm u as much as i want tit

[t-storm]

i mean ur a fukin austrian 4 fucks sake.....................fuck u think u r...................

[STUBBY]

hey man just chill out yo and dont worry about it.....uppin more votes u all

[t-storm]

sorry peeps.is it a rule that ur not allowed to pm for an honest vote?
i asure u i wasnt tryin 2 cheat............................show u the pm if u want