ak-mixa vs. Da RiPpA

[ak-mixa]

10 lines or more
1 hour
no biting/ no feeding/ no hate/ or d/r

dis is not my check in.....

[ak-mixa]

checkin in now.........hurry up or i'll get dis closed.........

[Da RiPpA]

Check In.......

A.k Mixa, Im Bout Ta Mix Up, Your Body Gets More Bullets Spit At Then Rhymes Spitted From Twista
I'll Twistcha, Put Your Hands Up
Fagget Spittin Cum In A Cup, Goin Agaisnt Me Is Like Jada Kissed Ya
Gimmi All Your Money, All Your Flow's, All Your Cribs
Before The 9'll Be At Your Crib Lettin The Flow Of Money And Pain To Your Ribs
Pillow Case Over Ya Face....ready Ta Die?
Relize.. 9's Ta Your Head Ducktape Over Ya Eyes
Thats How You Witness A Grown Man Cry
Your Dien To Live, But Livin To Die Is Your Destiny
See What Happens If Ya Punk Ass Mension's Me
I Dont Give A Fuck If Ya 10 N 3
Only Way For You To Win Dis Shit Is Ta Put 10 In Me
You Talkin So Much Sex....... But You Dont Know How To
When Im Sexin Mama Boo, She Be Like Boi Ima Lick You And Pin You
You Cant Even Find The Hole, You Like Gaterade Talkin Bout.....is It In You!
Im Like Simba Taken Everything The Light Touches
Leaven Your Ass Rappin In White Cruthces
But Fuck Dat, There Shadows In The Dark, So Im Taken Everything The Night Touches
I'll Eat Your Rhymes You Put In Line Punches, Cuz They Lookin Like Food Real Scrumptious
Fuck A.k I Pack Banana Clips In My Launch's
You Just Munchikins, Slaves To My Dungens
Who Holds Grudges???
I Leave You Holdin A Gernade, Wit Da Pin Strapped To Ya Knee And Force You To Do Lungess!!!!!

[Da RiPpA]

Comeeee On Dogggg.........dont Tell Me Ya Pussyed Outtt!!!!!!!
Get Your Ass Back Online, Or I Won This Shit In A Form Of: Hes To Fuckin Good I Quit! Lol Im Serious Tho, I Brought It, Now Its Your Turn!

[ak-mixa]

G.F.L stands for Great Fuckin Losers so don't lie Rippa
me revealing ya truth is seen as pussy under ya zippa
my bullets hit with erections to knock his ass out hard
rippas whack is less random than a hand of uno cards
with G.F.L as his rap crew he is sure to be a real loser
when da bitch spits more basic than Apple computers
i'm eating dinner now and Da Rippa is good for grub
I club da hoe with my meat more than Subway Sub's
Da Rippa is really jus a mirage in his own persistance
how could I rip when da hoe is an entity non-existant

[Da RiPpA]

finalllllllyyyyy maaaannn........aight start the votes give oppinions to plz.......my first battle so tell how it went.............................................. ...

[ak-mixa]

uppin...........................vote and i'll get back to u quickly.....................................

[iLLskriLLa]

aight this was a close battle......da rippa had kinda sketchy flow....poor structure.......n had a few nice punches....i didnt like ya beginin to much...but this was still an aight verse tho

ak-mixa........you had some nice flow.....aight structure.....n betta punches then da rippa did....verse started off aight n got betta as it went.....overall nice verse

aight i gotta give this to ak-mixa for bringin the betta flow n harder hittin punches.....

my vote = ak-mixa

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[ak-mixa]

uppin................vote on dis and i'll vote on yours no bullshit...............

[ak-mixa]

uppin............................................. ..i'll vote back on u.........com'n......

[Kon Quest]

Didn't like this one that much....

Rippa didn't have any real punches, just a bunch of gun talk thta is played out and gay as hell anyway. His flow was off due to his stretched lines and rhyming an odd number of lines (3,5,7 etc). He didn't have any wordplay in there either.....

AK had an OK verse. He had a few punches in there that actually hit and his flow was pretty good. He threw a couple witty punches in there too, giving him the overall better verse.....

Vote - AK

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[Escar]

Aight this was good...

Rippa - You just kept talkin' bullshit. You kept sayin' shit about guns and how you gona kill him, man that's wack. Focus more on dissing him, you didn't have any punches or personals. Your verse had alot of stretched lines, your flow was wack. Didn't like the structure at all. And try to be simple too. Work on everything. Elevate.

ak - That verse was good. But I know you could do much better. Flow was almost perfect. I liked the structure too. Punches were ok, they hit him hard. Good use of personals dawg. Vocab. wasn't bad. Everything else was good. But you could've made your punches better. Creativity was there too.

V/ak

Please hit this up in return:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=130781

Try not to get a disqualified vote.

Peace

[Nice]

a.k. mixa won this easily in my opinion. the other 1 came way to stretched, lines were lame in a lot of places. the opener was as well kinda lame... rapping about other rappers, how can that be hard hitting to your opponent? i found most of da rippas lines didnt connect. the other guy seemed to half ass it but he at least had a good structure and some average lines, he takes it.

hit this up if you get the chance.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=131034

[ak-mixa]

uppin............................................. ...........vote and I got ya battle.............

[STUBBY]

AK- i really liked your punches i think u had a few good ones, your structure was hanging there it wasnt too bad, umm...like the others said u did start off bad but u pulled your way out of it..

Rippa- Now i disagree with the others i think that u had some good punches in there, and i think that your structure was good and like AK u started off rough......
but there is one difference i feel that AK pulled out of a bad front line and i dont think u pulled out good enough

V/AK