bribeone 1-0 vs. avalon 1-0

[Richard Parker]

rules, bitches:

[bribeone]

why my boy once more ...erghhhh lets make it good

[Allen McGregor]

Ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooh... Once again huh..!?


let say... 30 max...


MS BATTLE..!

[Brandon Heat]

*plays Beanie Siegle's Truth...*



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Nevermind... I got enough 1's in the verse...



Bribe getting punches off Av 1) cant stand the clown
2) can't give thumbs up..to lines that I handed down...
We're going 30 a'piece, wack dude I'll gas your team
told me to match you, and I will... after the gasoline...
You're the worst period..., face it ya text is dormant
when Bribe hits the pad..... he uses extra absorbant...
My force folds your verse.. stop Av'll crack the mold
ya verse has dots 'n dashes.. it's read in morse code...
In text ya weak bud.., your scared making a pain for it
kid soils his pants, added water n created a rain forest...
and I show no blame..... I guess you aint a hot writer,
true Bribe puts out flame...., as a volunteer firefighter...
n' I won't us a set up................ya already been beat
since you are what you eat, Av's now both ass n' butt...
you remind me of JayZ out there wreckin the sales
minus the flow.. album hype... plus everything else...
yea that line's recycled.. but it'll be the funniest in this
since I used it on Young P... n' can't tell the difference...
simple sentence kid...........of MS Av's best of the batch,
to win you'll need a voting ring, chain n' watch to match...
Rapmusic, then straight to the league... ya done duke
..cus even weak heads didn't take 2 mins to shun you...
I'm fuckin this pussy up quick...fuck uppercuts n' jabs,
cus you'll be back on Av's dick like ghonnorea n' crabs...
my style has aged..? sit down.. let me get you straight
Jac meant Im married to skills the way they past dates...
take a look at ya verse, n' watch ya writing get snuffed
after you lose... blame the e-z boards for hyping you up...
I hope you don't post........................son it's finished
cause when Av show the clutch on his nuts,
..........................Bribe'll still try to come through in it...





*drops mic n' walks away*

[Mystery~Murdera]

^^damn.

[Kaput Mundi]

^go ahead and spell that with a capitol D.....

[bribeone]

Avalon......




(*picks Avs mic up*)


...and serves purpose........


damn Av where u been man, it's such a small world
is it that bad you have to warm up to another mans girl.(peep the sig)
you know whats im talking about, thats how it starts off
but do we need any more evidence that Mr. Av has gone soft
I randomise bullets make 'em in tune with the mind
I spray a second coat, once I see that he's thru with his prime.
I hope voters got that ^ is too complex in the clutch?
but I dont need a Jackson one to say this guys lost his touch.
when i first got here you were the guy to look up to.
but things do change specially when I'm two feet above you
I come Louiville equipped if you try matching my stats
Van Helsing would'nt be close to u, when catching them bats.
in my favor they say the odds are even, so this guys leavin.
but AV brings a long verse to make up for his size given.
hes never been hit this hard to leave the game with stiches
your punches are like our relationship..it's a shame he Miss es.
dude who you faking, witt all the moves you be makin....
here for years and The End........... left you out on the check in...
remember that, only elite who got excluded..
funny we watched you grow to stay the same like Frankie Nunes..
I thought you knew this, That I can also flip a cliche
im colombian and your wife burn foreign rubber ...like a mitsubichi...
yes I'm from there and this match comes courtesy of feeble.
we bring it pure, you just cut it to crack..... to kill your own people..
bribe ain't pleased till AV's done and he quit breathin
says hes got a deal but for some odd reason he's not leavin.
sorry I'm not beleiving, but dude why you frontin for
The painted chapel is the only tale of the Mike I'm falling for.
your head to the floor pretender, arent you a biting offender
well I leave u an exposed cover up like Rumsfelds hidden agenda

[Stand Steel]

Legend type battle. I'm not sure if I can vote on this, but I will if yall want the feedback. First of all, thank you. Thank you for putting something on this board that makes me happy when I read it. Now for the breakdown.


Av:
"You're the worst period..., face it ya text is dormant
when Bribe hits the pad..... he uses extra absorbant..."
Good wordplay here..nice punch really feelin' it.

"simple sentence kid...........of MS Av's best of the batch,
to win you'll need a voting ring, chain n' watch to match..."
I liked this also.


BribeOne:
"I randomise bullets make 'em in tune with the mind
I spray a second coat, once I see that he's thru with his prime.
I hope voters got that ^ is too complex in the clutch?
but I dont need a Jackson one to say this guys lost his touch."
Dope on both punches.

"yes I'm from there and this match comes courtesy of feeble.
we bring it pure, you just cut it to crack..... to kill your own people.."
Lol..dunno exactly why, but I liked this.

"I come Louiville equipped if you try matching my stats
Van Helsing would'nt be close to u, when catching them bats."
Although it wasn't a personal I liked the wordplay here a lot. Nice new non-played punch. Obviously it aint played cuz Van Helsing just came out.


Av:Pretty good flow..and easy read. Sometimes you didn't rhyme to me. "My force folds your verse.. stop Av'll crack the mold
ya verse has dots 'n dashes.. it's read in morse code..." Mold and Code don't rhyme..not even in audio really. And then the ass-n-butt line. Good punches, however I only saw a couple personals in there. Nice use of wordplay tho..multis..n all that dope shit.

BribeOne:Best flow out of the two. Best personals out of the two. My fav punch of the battle was definitely that 4 liner I quoted. When I first read Av's verse I thought you were done, but you came through and won. You also had a line that didn't rhyme too. Cliche and Mitsubishi dont rhyme. Cliche is prnounced kleeshay.

Again, dope battle.

V/ BribeOne

[Mystery~Murdera]

Both came great, I must say. One of
the best battles in a while. I just think
Av came more original. Dope battle still
fellas. Av was just more consistent.

v/ Av

[Nique.]

Mystery had his mind made up before the battle.

But he did choose the right person.

Vote-Avalon

And in all honestly, I usually dont compliment anyone, but Av is nice. Bribe came good but Avalon was consistent with his punches..and they were effective..real effective. Good read.

[Brandon Heat]

nevermind... 2-1...

[Chrit.]

Av took it...

decent battle here kids

[Mystery~Murdera]

Mystery had his mind made up before the battle.

But he did choose the right person.

Vote-Avalon

And in all honestly, I usually dont compliment anyone, but Av is nice. Bribe came good but Avalon was consistent with his punches..and they were effective..real effective. Good read.

bitch dont ever comment on my mind and no
I didnt have it made up. I read all of Bribes
verse to make sure it was fair n legit. Av's was
just better. That's all I could say.

[Brandon Heat]

^ Ex MS representer... You can always tell who we are...

[Mystery~Murdera]

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