Here's the rules.....
10-12 lines
No crew, hate, dr votes
No feeding
Blind spit
Due in an hour
I'll start keying after you check in and I'll drop as soon as I see your verse. I just got burnt by a no show and I don't want it to happen again......
WiSeCraCk
Kon Quest
Here's the rules.....
10-12 lines
No crew, hate, dr votes
No feeding
Blind spit
Due in an hour
I'll start keying after you check in and I'll drop as soon as I see your verse. I just got burnt by a no show and I don't want it to happen again......
aiight checkin in dawg....don't worry about a no show here...i'll start writin now
peace!
A 1 of ya niggas battle me!I'm willin to get tested!
I don't really feel like waiting any longer.....plus you seem like you're gonna show anyway so here's my verse.....
Alright....it's time to put an end to all these wisecracks
He don't want it....even his avi says "yo, I'll be right back"
If he's ten times more affective than your average perscription
Then he's not too ill.......he's just outta commission
I'm punching him so hard you won't even listen to what he said
Even his sig is black and blue....with a hint of some bloody red
You cant even copy right....you'd get smacked by inventors
Fuck an audience....you have a hard enough time capsizing letters
I ain't tryin to kick knowledge when I put a foot to your head
Cause I'll ruin your sweater just to say you have no pull in this thread
I spit like violent alcoholics....I'm leaving him punch drunk
I just ate this kid for breakfast so I'm saying Fuck Lunch!!!!
You've past the deadline.....you need to hurry up!!!!!!!!!!!!
Why the fuck aren't you online?......
I'm about to DQ the shit out of you.....
I Fucking Hate Bitches That No Show!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
yo konquest couldn't pull with a win if he was addicted to crack..
he comin out flat, with more crooked lines than gats afflicted to caps
your a filler fag with a massive motive to kill-a-rap..
inticate ya passive notives cause i wouldn't wanna be hearin a skill-a-wack..
i'm inflictin pain from ya ears to blow ya brain in the mid field..
drainin ya wasted life while ya smear in fear, flexin stress ya mind wont heal
ya ain't ready to clash with a rap titan cause i'll stash his body in a flash..
after i bash his open head, trash his half-ass spits when ya hear the flow splashed
so i suggest you give it up coz ya sluggish when it comes to "konquest'..
stick to text cause your spits just ain't your best, that's "non sense!"
ya intoxicated just to speak who's iller, but you wouldn't be bless if your verse was written with "weak fillers!!"
aiight peace...
uppin fo votes
my bad yo ...i told yah i wasn't gonna no show ..but yeah...
Uppin for votes people!
Kon Quest you got this battle man you had some realy decent punches which could of been alot more hard hitting with more experience.. flow was decent kept rolling smoothly all the way through and the structure was built up strong.. good personals.. the one on his avy had me..
WiSeCraCk that was poor and it was a waste of my time reading it so: for having me read it.. punches were real weak and personals were a joke
flow was ok and structure was pretty steady..
vote.. Kon Quest
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I'm punching him so hard you won't even listen to what he said
Even his sig is black and blue....with a hint of some bloody red
^u call that a punchline a hard hittin punchline? ..............
that's weak, and first line is a filler...w/e
and plus, he just took my quote from my sig and used it ...that's fuckin unoriginal!..not so creative...so tell me where is his creativity at?
all of these battles ive done on here, are just fast keystyles, nothin fancy but i dont use someone else lines and turn'em against'em! thats not creative at all
wow kon gets this...he had better punchlines no doubt...
stayed with his oponent...used as minimal filler as possible
some shit could have been better...but it was decent enough
WC man ya shit was really a lot of filler...didnt really locate any,
punches from u...if any they were directed poory my man...
kon had some wittyness which helped him a lot in this battle
well lets just say what kon had...WC didnt have...
kon takes flow...which in contrast takes structure...
WC had some long bars which fucked up his overall flow...
work on not using so much filler WC and work on punches!
but overall imma vote for kon...he had the wordplay...
hit my battles up when u get the time...peace...
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Vote- Kon
Kon- You took this with much better personals and some decent punches. You had a good flow and nice structure. You had some fillers, but they didn't really take anything away from your verse. I felt you kinda fallin off at the end of your verse, your last 4 lines were kinda weak, but you still had a much better verse than wisecrack.
WC- This was wack and weak as hell. All of your lines were way played, and you had a minimal amount of personals. Your attempted punches missed completely, you need to improve those. Also, your structure wasn't good, and your lines were too stretched which killed your flow. Your verse was wack, don't go whining like a little bitch about it.
v- kon
kon got this one cause of his punchlines and personals
like the last line (I just ate this kid for breakfast so I'm saying Fuck Lunch!!!!)
wises words ryhmed but is was borin as fuck it didnt affend
Uppin.............
the only line i thought was good in this battle was the kicking knowledge one. he told u ina creative way that u were stupid it was cool. the rest of the battle for kon was average. the other guy was arrite, needs to work on punches instead of 'if' statements and sayin ull kill him
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