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Thread: Lost memory..Insight Into A football Hooligan

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    Lost memory..Insight Into A football Hooligan

    Lost Of Memory

    Contemplation….
    Darkness is all I see, all that recollects in my memory
    Heartless in what I be, forever searching for a remedy
    Trapped in myself without help of a hero saving me
    Warped by the visions that are constantly escaping me

    Trying to recollect….
    My past is a haze, a memory of past days set ablaze
    Now the embers of my life are throwing deadly ash in my face
    I can’t breathe; my forgotten history is a mystery to me
    & people try & relight the fire within me, bring back reality
    But that’s impossible, my minds wiped clean of these sins
    Never recollect of this monster of tales that lie within
    My intellect ceased all knowledge, I must be blind
    Now sense is trying to acknowledge, the life I’ve left behind

    The Common Sense Seeps Back Within
    A memory bank embarked in a voyage to find & collect
    The hooligan’s life that I fail to recollect
    In retrospect, I remember a state of vexation & tribulation
    Always forced into a frame of mind while I rot in stagnation
    Thoughts flood back like the tide to where they used hide
    Deep in the depths of my mind, behind they will find
    A way to crawl back, will power that I lacked
    & the energy I felt from fighting at a match….

    A Hooligan’s Life Floods Back & begins
    Once more

    Now my memory’s back, & now I’m out of coma
    Happiness back on track, living from the gift of a kidney donor
    See, I was bashed up, trashed up, A brick knocked me unconscious
    & in my weakened state the opposition went bonkers
    I was kicked spat on, lifeless, friends thought it was the end
    But In the life of a hooligan, It was just another weekend…


    Inspired by The FoOtball Factory...Top film
    Last edited by Trahedy Siphon; May 26th, 2004 at 10:51 AM
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    Replied to Dev -Impaled by bad fortune
    & telekinetic -lOST hOPE
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    plz...feedbak..leave a link 2...
    *Cries*..I feel my talent is being overlooked!lol
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    ok guy, don't cry....shame this piece is being slept on though cuz its a good 1....liked the last verse alot, really sheds light on the previous verses....kidney donor idea was a nice touch 4 me and rounded it up wel, i really saw the point you set out to achieve at the end n loved the way u portray a football hooligans life as a bitter, gritty constant cycle from match to match.......nice work + keep em comin
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    got introduced to the game got an ounce and fuckin' blew up.'

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    ok this shudn't be slept on at all it is a very nice piece..
    This was a good out take on the piece.. Had good flow in it and some decent lines but some were to simple...

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