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    King of Iron Fist! sabotage's Avatar
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    Titled as Untitled

    Bear with me gents cause so far I'm not sure where this is going
    From this word forward my inner mind will never stop growing
    thats a fact im sorry to impress or even shock you
    I know that my words dont have to necessarily mock you
    ive just been posting all the time without a moments thought
    Irony compells us like a free drugs ceremony after you just bought
    Logical Fallicies are what drive us to rash conclusions
    Stereotypical morons are convinced by seemingly truthful illusions
    conscious thought will be my own destruction on this day forth
    never will i submit myself to being molded by a creative writers course
    i am who i am in the rawest of forms, i keep most things 2 my self & show little remorse
    THe lines are becoming long and vauge so i'd better quit soon
    i wouldnt want 2 fall out of suit like a poorly tux fit groom

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    You need to reply to two open mics and post the links to them in this thread or this thread gets closed, Thanks.

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    upping

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    ok....this was an allright piece..
    not amazing but it was OK...
    Liked ur vocab & ur flow etc...
    Give u a 6/10 for this piece..
    check the links in my sig!
    Boom tick its Brix!

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    this was good enough to ask the dude sitting next to me to read it......you got nice wordplay man....you should startbattling folk then you will be superman
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    haha thanks man! U2!

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    yea.. i liked this piece.. flow was tight.. vocab was nice.. everything was just tight.. dont think it is legendary tho.. .. but thats ok i guess.. you'll elevate more.. real nice work man..

    8/10

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    ^ Thanks man respect! LoL! Had you labeled it as legendary I wouldah told you your full of shit! :P

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    yea i got to say this piece was tight.flow was good.vocab was nice.everything was good.though not that great.maybe it might.great word play.nice. i think that i will use this one more mines.

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