letter to the World

[REALISTIK]

I Cant Stop Thinking The End Is Near //
So Much War And Crazy Shit But Does Any One Even Care//
I Dont No Why Humans Gotta Live In Fear//
Continuisly Staying Aware Of Wats Gonna Happen Next//
Didnt We Learn When The Towers Got Wrecked//
Peace Is Wat The Gov Should Collect//
But To The Islamic Religion They Dont Show An Ounce Of Respect//
Two Nations//
To Many Times To Count All Tha Threats//
I Wonder If Prez Has Any Regrets//
That He Started This Thing//
We Should Learn From Moses When He Parted His Thing//
Im Talking About The Red Sea//
Cause He Brought Peace And This War Is Just Deadly//
Not One Good Thing Has Been Acomplished//
Isnt It Time To Stomp This//
Cut An End To It All//
Or Are We Just Gonna Wait And See When It Will Fall//
Im So realistik Not Pretending At All//
Is It Gonna Be Another Berlin//
Cause In The End There Was No Protecting The Wall//
Weapons Of Mass Destruction?
Aint Found Shit And They Inspected It All//
Goerge Found It Hard To Spit Out An Apology//
He Wasnt Really Aknoliging//
The Disrespect He Gives There Culture//
Hes Like A Vulture//
Gonna Pluck At It Bit By Bit So In The End There Wont Be Shit//
So This Is It//
Yoll Can Get Wid It //
Or Hate My Shit//
Either Way Im Gone Continue To Spit//
So This Is It
(who Is It?)
Its realistik

[J-BIGGZ]

ok im new herre can any bodyz tell? wullz dont know all thiz site yet but yall seem like preety cool peeps

[J-BIGGZ]

ok im new herre can any bodyz tell? wullz dont know all thiz site yet but yall seem like preety cool peeps
PEACES

[J-BIGGZ]

whoops sorry

[REALISTIK]

yoll can any one tell how to provide links............................................. .......peace

[Mistral]

Reply to 2 other open mics and just leave the names of the pieces in this thread.

[REALISTIK]

any comments welcome

[Mistral]

I know you replied to a lot of pieces but honestly those feedbacks werent that good, but i'll leave this opened for the moment....But start leaving more indepth feedback or i'll start closing your pieces ok man

[REALISTIK]

yeah no worrys ...i only just come to this place ...
still learning how to go about it....peace

[absolutezero]

yo this was a pretty solid drop the structure could use some help and, but besides that the metas and shit was tight keep dropin

[Genocide21]

this was a good solid topic that you had messed up wit the structure.i could sense that your emotion was there.it was good.though you should just keep on writin'.Nice.

[REALISTIK]

yo thanks for tha feed bak .......................
all feed bak is good negative or positive.. cause i no to learn you gotta listen..............................peace

[Miss_Jess]

Structure could be much better, but concept was good. Write a bit more 'bout this or get the structure right, just try to elevate...Vocab was straight to the point, overall pretty good piece....

Peace, Jess -xxx-