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Thread: With the Apocalypse in mind...(thanks, Cam)

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    With the Apocalypse in mind...(thanks, Cam)

    The abomination bitch began to bleed the baby...
    Bringing an end to defense and a victory to Hades.
    Unchained hell doesn't dwell, it crawls up with lust...
    And the sound of black bells signals death is a must.
    The child drains in silence, again dying by hands...
    That betrayed and then slayed, damning all man.
    Heartless whore, who never once showed him love...
    Gave birth to an angel and immediately had enough.
    Of life as a mother, cuz evil's as easy as pie...
    And the sweet tooth within just can't be denied.
    But unbeknownst to her, a silent scepter slinks...
    Coated in cold, with a thirst to greedily drink.
    Watching and waiting, it knows who she's with...
    And it also knows, she doesn't understand this.
    Swift is the sweep across the small throat...
    Then Mary the mother gathers purse and coat.
    Motel mirrored, closer than it actually appears...
    But after a minute of motoring it all dissappears.

    Our fears, start coming to life before our eyes...
    All across our world, and with dread we realize.
    "Film at eleven, there's no more Heaven", transfixed...
    As one by one the impact's felt from the ton of bricks.
    Slowly at first, then panic as running's useless...
    Feet aren't fast, when the mind can't get through this.
    Comprehension suspension, can't possibly happen...
    But reality's returned by a constant slappin.
    Of balls against ass, as the fuckin's relentless...
    Humanity's torn, as the underworld reams us.
    Terror forever, and we thought Al Queda was bad...
    No hiding wherever, not even the hole Saddam had.


    But how can we weep when we slaughter the sheep?
    Say prayers to our saviour then dream sinful sleep?
    Actions speak louder than words, but silence is golden...
    So goodness won't be observed when it's only just spoken.


    Legendary presents...The Sonning

    Oskar Schindler
    Last edited by Born To Kill; May 21st, 2004 at 07:51 PM

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    Make sure you notice the new open mic rules, or this will get closed. Thanks


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    Good BtK
    Anyways.. nice drop


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    Ba-dum-bump!

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    yo, im bout to be out for the night but i'll hit this up tommorrow or whatever. seen it just now, read like half way through but i have to go.

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    this was fucking good..

    liked your imagery and vocab that was produced.

    Good drop dawg...Everytime you put somethin out it's pure dope.

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    Straight dopeness man. I Liked this alot. The whole idea behind it was very clever.
    There were a couple lines in your flow that seemed to be off a little thoughl. Might want to reword some stuff. Could just be me though. Also you might want to add a few more mulites or inner rhymes to help the flow a little. But very minor shit really. Overall a realy good drop. Keep it up.

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    nice work... a very creative drop, interesting to read... thought the second verse tho shorter finished it up nicely, brought it together.... you had good imagery thru it, the only thing id say, is some of the transitions didnt really hit for me.... but asides from this, i thought it was well written..... props
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    I'm glad so many peeps seem to have liked it...

    Thank you.

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    I swear I read this already... nice job...
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    Dope man. I really relate to this. Keep it up.
    Rappers sound the same man, found 1 game plan & ran through it
    They all got that Geico flow.. Cause even a cave man can do it

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    This was rather enyoyable.
    Very creative in a sense.
    This for some reason reminds me of an old friend mine who use to write in this style.
    Props for this work.
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    yeah most of the "dark" things if you will most can relate to... but yeah this was hot. good drop my man.. i cant really say much that you can improve on.. because you are better than me.. ha ha
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    Nice....Nice job...good imagery and creativity....real nice vocab, The emotion really stood out for me...Good job on that...Another real nice piece...Keep at it...

    If you got time...check out this link...Its a crew topical battle...Thanx...appreciate it..
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