song to that em song...

[Lingwistik]

to Em's Kill You and this piece i wrote i think goes well with it and i can rap the same speed as em on that track too, but i cant record it, this is just to let off some steam i had...

People say my rymes are poetic but its pathetic…
They just don’t get it and they gunna regret it…
There I said it…and if hate comes then let-it…
But if it comes too far ill take this bomb and set it…
Blow!!!...your skill I met it…destroyed it and buried it…
Let my punches go and leave many hit…(haha bitches)
This song is to let it off…all the anger I portray…
But lets say one day one guy comes over and says “hey!”…
Then I might explode this load and let this choad get it…
Who knows?...friends change to foes and get big headed…
“hey dude, I took your bitch and fed it but I wont let it free”…
I don’t care about fears and I don’t shed tears when I bleed…
So its agreed that im psyco n ill choke hold your vocal chords…
And leave em stretched like sum dude’s lines on this board…
Pissed off like Lewis Black doin his stand up cracks…
I get enraged at the fame these wack cats grasp…
Im sorry if these blasts im sendin you is offendin yall…
But for some reason I feel that my back is against a wall…
So I might attack and leave ya not breathin from your fall…
Its last call so move your bitch ass down the hall…
Like alchohol ill leave you dizzy and sprawled on the floor…
And before your parents come home sneak out the door…
I laced your 4X4 with bombs to watch you die…
While you drive and watch you die in the fire…
Im tired of this and im going to bed now…
But these are my thoughts in my head that I found…

uppin, leave ya links

[Lingwistik]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=128713

[Ace of Aces]

real tight.
loving the multies that you got lined up there. this flowed very smoothly. this was also interesting because the word choice. your consistency in what you were trying to say was great. the quotes that you had in were nice. made them stand out. this was a very enjoyable read. favorite lines...

“hey dude, I took your bitch and fed it but I wont let it free”…
I don’t care about fears and I don’t shed tears when I bleed…
So its agreed that im psyco n ill choke hold your vocal chords…
And leave em stretched like sum dude’s lines on this board…

^dope. keep it up man.

peace

[Lingwistik]

thankoyu very much man, uppin

[YungBlud]

Homie i was feelin that, i loved the flow and the multiple rhymes u got set up there
one of the sikest keystyles i seen since ive been on here, props nigga

[SMZ]

decent - the thoughts seemed to jump around some - I didn't particularly like the (maybe unintentional) imitation of eminem - like saying you're a psycho and that you'll shoot people for saying "hey",etc - some nice concepts in there too - wordplay and whatnot - but when you're spitting this kinda subject matterless stuff it could use a bit more - decent drop - hit something(s) in my sig - peace

[iLLskriLLa]

aight....shits lookin good.....good flow....had sum nice multis....the song u thinkin ofs kill you......n it would kinda go wit that shit......

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=128700
1st battle on this site^^^

[Lingwistik]

ay well,i was just pissed off, really pissed off yesterday, and that just helped a bit, than, ill hit yours up i guees

[נєм]

man that piece was pretty nice flow was tight.. structure was holding it together well pretty much all the way through.. good mullti's lying up in there aswell felt some of them lines.. but some were a bit Eh !..!..!

Good punches.....SYKE

[Lingwistik]

i really wasnt tryin o add punches, cuz i wasnt really aiming this to everyone, it was just anger, but thanx for the reply anytway

[Lingwistik]

uppin