Wrightmak17 vs. Rippar

[wrightmak17]

10-20 lines
No dickriding
No crew votes
No other bullshit

Spit in 30 mins, and i'll drop after you

Good Luck

[wrightmak17]

Rippar change ya name, I hate to say it but yo ass is about to be ripped
My verse will leave you speechless, like ya stomach got kicked
In bitch slapped you called out a battle for new b’s… I wonder why?
Maybe cuz that’s all u can handle, so in this battle I wont even try
Your avatar is the la lakers logo, I should change mine to san Antonio
Because after just 6 (lines, games) I’ll drop you, and send you home yo
I feel sorry for you, you havnt dropped and I already know im merking u
I’m like mr t, I pity the fool, ya jaw just hit the floor, and u startin to drool
Line 9? Damn, why am I still typin, I already won, this is a waste of time
I had you beat with my opener, you were knocked back with my first rhyme
Rippar, its simple, my punches and personals hit harder and come quicker
My rhymes are like hard liquor.. hard to swallow, but enjoyed by all niggas
And with this closing line I guess I’ll just go ahead and finish you
Ill put you otta ya misery, one win, but now I think I’ll have two

[wrightmak17]

Rippar's Verse: (he asked me to post it cuz his comp aint workin)

my computer's being gay and won't me drop,

so could you do me a favour and stick my verse on and say its from me

Better than being a no show bitch

here it is;

Yo, this bitch don't belong up in front lines,
stroll back to cypher and practice your rhymes,
walk back to rock city, until ya feet bleed and blister,
just like ya voice box, when you battling ya lil' sister,
cos u givin her all you go just like the mister, (Mr. E)
i'm tellin ya he killed ya, bitch you'll be goin down in history,
as the wackest kid, face it you got merked by that newbie,
holy fuck, you were coming out with some wack shit
Quote:
u'd be like the bizarre of d12, u'd take a decent group and kill it

D12 decent? bitch listen to some real music,
Royce 5'9" only man to make Detroit shine, W17 man lose it,
Quote:
Interests: b-ball, rappin, not mush else

so you like to shoot, like to see Pistons take it up with me,
rock city playas cant shoot, Wrightmak is the worst emcee,
i wish this shit was in audio battles, so i could press mute,
i guess i'll have to put up with ya text, written by this prostitute

[wrightmak17]

actually i had 2 votes against Mr. E, but he won by default because of my "excessive upping"

all because of illunadick, think he cool cuz he a mod...

[wrightmak17]

Uppin

[wrightmak17]

Vote people........................

[Nique.]

Wrightmark17:

Rippar change ya name, I hate to say it but yo ass is about to be ripped
My verse will leave you speechless, like ya stomach got kicked

Decent punch. Good opener.

In bitch slapped you called out a battle for new b’s… I wonder why?
Maybe cuz that’s all u can handle, so in this battle I wont even try

Wasnt really feeling this. Was just a blunt statement.

Your avatar is the la lakers logo, I should change mine to san Antonio
Because after just 6 (lines, games) I’ll drop you, and send you home yo

Ight. Could of been worded better and not so obvious. And its only Game 1 of the playoffs...haha.

I feel sorry for you, you havnt dropped and I already know im merking u
I’m like mr t, I pity the fool, ya jaw just hit the floor, and u startin to drool

Good 1st line, good 1st half of second line and then an elementary ending.

Rippar, its simple, my punches and personals hit harder and come quicker
My rhymes are like hard liquor.. hard to swallow, but enjoyed by all niggas

These are the one's that I felt in your verse. It wasnt a great verse, but it also wasnt a weak one. You came straight. Some ok punches and some pretty good metaphor's..work on creativity and personals.

Rippar:

Yo, this bitch don't belong up in front lines,
stroll back to cypher and practice your rhymes

No. Not feeling it. Very elementary.

Quote:
u'd be like the bizarre of d12, u'd take a decent group and kill it

D12 decent? bitch listen to some real music,
Royce 5'9" only man to make Detroit shine, W17 man lose it,

That was decent. I think thats the only thing I felt in your verse. You came very elementary and you had no punches..all those attempted personals were useless because they werent effective. Work on everything.

Vote-Wrightmak17 for harder disses.

And check out the battles in my sig.

[Jonezy]

ight

wrightmak17 - first few punches were decent and they hit hard, and the personals were nice, but you started to weaken off near the end, some of the last lines were basic and not creative like the firsts few, flow was ight, could of been better, lines were a lil stretched but structure was pretty good,

best lines from you

Rippar change ya name, I hate to say it but yo ass is about to be ripped
My verse will leave you speechless, like ya stomach got kicked
In bitch slapped you called out a battle for new b’s… I wonder why?
Maybe cuz that’s all u can handle, so in this battle I wont even try

6.5/10

rippar - verse wasnt very good at the start, you had some played lines in there and structure wasnt the best, tha first like 5 lines were very poor, too basic, but then you cam with some good personals, quotin shit is blah and boring, flow was decent tho, but you need to think about wordplay and use better vocab,

ya best lines - not dope, but ya best

so you like to shoot, like to see Pistons take it up with me,
rock city playas cant shoot, Wrightmak is the worst emcee,
i wish this shit was in audio battles, so i could press mute,
i guess i'll have to put up with ya text, written by this prostitute

6/10

vote wright for coming harder and better personals,

i cant poll but thats my thought on it

[wrightmak17]

Uppin, drop a link if u want

[Rippar]

uppin 1................................................. ...................................

[Rippar]

uppin 2................................................. ............................................

[Rippar]

c'mon votes needed on this shit, uppin 3..............................................

[wrightmak17]

uppin

[Rippar]

uppin 4................................................. ......................................

[ILLunatic]

Rippar disqualified for have more than 3 active battles.