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    Formula Feat. SMZ - Unwitting Suicide


    A young man, simply known as Formula, rises from his chair as chaos is ruling an enclosed room full of angry citizens.. Formula`s approach to the frong quiets the rowdiness and things settle down. Formula adjusts the microphone, clears his throat, and begins to speak...

    My how times have times changed, nobody thought they would
    Anybody who thought so were interpreted as misunderstood
    From the hood to every ghetto, everybody is getting a hello
    Mood`s are mellow, but yes, violence is still a paper route for fellows
    But it`s like, I`m having these flashbacks of the depression crash
    Stock market collapsed, Pearl Harbor attacked, revenge for that
    Catching Visions of the incions, reading the scripts on the monolith
    'I Have A Dream', King still gleams w/ his message that used to hardly hit
    Everybody free ? No, some living in his dream and can`t escape
    Some say it`s fate, but I hate to break such news that`s hard for some to take
    We still have wrongs refusing to be right, songs not truely write
    Because if they`re written truely then kids could cope w/ the fight
    Not tonight, nor tomorrow, but greener pastures are relapsing for relaxing
    People are mapping their own satisfaction for a post Bin Laden
    And war celebration, moral elevation, thoughts on determination
    Send the troops home, we don`t need oil for economy recooperation
    This is the way I see it, the way it comes across, how it`s interpreted
    I hope we can see the light and stop families from hurt again
    It`s at the end of the tunnel, we best no fumble or we`re humbled
    And everything we ever dreamed about in the past becomes a mere mumble
    Come one, come all, to witness a culture`s struggle through a political bubble
    Nothing is ever the prinicle of the thing `cause even a pricipal`s trouble
    I`m serious, we nearing this, dark hole that`ll cover all of society
    For noteriaty, killers run to mobsters and plead "Please hire me!"
    We die and then breathe, a sigh of relief, leaving this world at peace
    Nope, most leave the world through a piece, homicides can never cease
    We can`t increase awareness when no ones aware of present problems
    And presidents scratch they balls, itching for a way to solve all of um
    But they never figure it out, IT`S WAR, we can`t have this shit no more
    But any thought of a plan we had that didn`t include settling scores
    It`s treated like a unwanted individual and kicked right outta the door
    Four scores, and just some days ago, we lost another solider
    He lost his life and now is when we realize that he`ll never grow older
    I`m deeply saddened with our deadly habits, game over for this madness
    Never, not as long as someone`s in charge thinking he`s the baddest
    Through our eyes and cries, outsiders would wonder why
    We continue to put ourselves through all this shit and wait to die
    SMZ... bare w/ me man, take the podium and let your story get it`s side

    Formula steps down.. SMZ gets up and shakes his hand.. the people are once again bickering and now gossiping about what`s been said, but as before, they are brought to a cricket-enticing silence.. for it`s SMZ`s time to speak to the masses..

    Life races ahead - but my feet stumble
    Shoulders keep cringing from each rumble
    It hurts havin’ to watch my childish dreams crumble
    as lives are sacrificed inside a concrete jungle
    this violent spirit is fungal - it never ever submits
    I’m both tired and sick of this old world conglomerate
    Whenever a culture lifts someone starts bombing it
    Heaven just vomited - now evil strides through our midst
    I’ve tried so hard to convince alien eyes of the evidence
    but no matter how persuasive my arguments
    lives still visit the past tense - an inevitable chain of events
    And the bane of common sense as we go on destroying ourselves
    finding cruel joy in spent shells flung towards boyish males
    consigning them to hells before they can even appreciate Earth
    Negate their recent birth while nothing’s gained - nothing of worth
    It’s so fucking absurd - unreal - and beyond understanding
    Why people will yet and still go on demanding
    that *they* should be the ones commanding the course of history
    and it’s even worse to see the mental doors closed permanently
    causin’ wars that don’t cease although the reasons are long forgotten
    but revived so politicians can carry on their plottin’
    No one cares for the only begotten - I’m alone in thick mist
    struggling hopelessly against the throne of the abyss
    But despite all of that - there’s only one plea on my list
    I’m begging - please somebody - somebody remember this...

    SMZ removes himself from his position.. and Formula walks up to him.. they shake hands.. the citizens clap and shout in unison.. "We Remember".. and then.. it all fades to black..



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    ok...the whole piece was dope
    both had good imagery I tihnk SMZ wus
    a little better in that department
    vocab wus good through out and your flows
    blended togetehr yet were differnt...
    all in all a great piece...
    *goes to nominate for Om of the month*
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    Dope peice. Vocabulary was good by both and it helped the flow become dope.
    I would nominate this but its to late. Good job.
    peace.
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    thnx you two - I left feed on at least half a dozen things - lily-assed scumfeeding bastards... This is dope - read it you Cleopatra's snakepits

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    Up.. links left.. and they`ll get replies.. SMZ hit up alot of pieces to my knowledge.. so where`s the favor returned ?

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    wow some tyte shit...i was feelin the whole thing, enjoyed the rhyme scheme....keep on writin...good stuff...

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    I forgive you for posting in my battle without knowing what to look for in a topical - thnx for feed

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    yeah this piece is really good fellin the calabo on this it was tight as a bitch your guys

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