Yeah this peice really had a lot of meaning.
You used some really nice imagery that told a compelling story
I really like the outro in the peice especially the heavens door bar
but you had really solid multies all the way through well still not sacrificing meaning for words.
As alwasy Ace your consistent and this is definetly up to your standard
my quesiton is what is the story behind writing this is any?
ps. i also liked the structure and how it could be poem or a song