intermentals vs So SiK

[intermentals]

You think ur hot? (lol) if I had a molotov u wouldn't combust
I jus' hit ya an' u still wouldn't know a punch, are you concussed?
My minds a verbal laxative unforced shit flows for hours
Your rhymes couldn't be more forced if ya were usin' jedi powers
You gettin' "ripped kid" better do somethin' drastic
The only way you "flip shit" is failin' at gymnastics
I'm creatin' protege-kids when I post like a modern-day-BIG
Like coke addicts there's been dodgy lines you've-got-away-with
Shit man u so wak if I ate u wit chilli juice
That'd be the hottest shit you'd ever produce

[So SiK]

ayo dawg punches from me will leave you blind sightless
have every1 in the world cryin for you like the WTC crisis
i spit flamez so excuse me i dont need 9mm or uzis
you arent a real rapper u have a ghost writer dont try and use these ( my wordz)
its time i show these emcees how i got the tittle So SiK
drop ya verse n spit i spit wet like the juice on ya moamz click
u spit dry from bein wack to scared to have additional info
but itz iight i dont need that to lyrically kill yo
my verse has left you runnin like Osma Bin Laden
but my verse flows in the air and crushes your insides n left you diein
theres no chance of you merkin me
my wordz kill ppl in every way including internally



wasnt the best but hey

[Axeshun]

Can you please vote in my battle(s) as I've took time to vote in yours..Thanks!!
^^Links In My Sig^^


OK........
So SiK
*ELEVATED* This is much beter than your verse with ~Guru~ here you've got punches, you had a multie, well done flow wasn't on and no wordplay. Your still using 'mom' lines TIP: dont use 'mom' lines.

intermentals
This verse was nice you had wordplay and nice punches. Didn't see no multies or persoanl's and ya flow was off. That gymnastic concept is played.

So Sik has elevated but need to work on his punches they aint hard hitting enough and you need to add wordplay and similies. Internals came harder hitting with nice wordplay. This is gonna look like I hate So Sik cos I've voted against him twice in a row but it aint I just vote for who i thinks verse was better. So Sik I think your battling people a bit to hard for you. Stay battling harder people and elevate more or battle weaker emcee's win but really dont elevate much. But your elevating so...................

Nice Battle.


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[So SiK]

iight w/e man thanx 4 tha vote

[intermentals]

I'm creatin' protege-kids when I post like a modern-day-BIG
Like coke addicts there's been dodgy lines you've got-away-with

that was a multi but thanx 4 the vote neway

[Axeshun]

Sorry I muta missed that man. Looks better with dashes(-) like that.

Can you vote in my battle with BOX please.

[Phocuzed]

Aight...

Punches-Intermentals
Similies- Intermentals
Multies- Doesnt matter but inter...

The coke addict line was filthy...

Fuckin killed this shit man..

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[Nique.]

You gettin' "ripped kid" better do somethin' drastic
The only way you "flip shit" is failin' at gymnastics
I'm creatin' protege-kids when I post like a modern-day-BIG
Like coke addicts there's been dodgy lines you've-got-away-with

Thought that these four line's were straight. You had punches and the hit your opponent effectively.

ayo dawg punches from me will leave you blind sightless
have every1 in the world cryin for you like the WTC crisis

The only thing that I thought about liking from So Sik's verse. You need to work on your punches, personals, creativity. Everything. Just work on attacking your opponents better. You'll be straight.

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Overall, he just came with a better, more consistent battle verse.

[So SiK]

uppin 1.......................dont sleep on this shit

[intermentals]

uppin

[Blak Sinzz]

okay battle


Inter-okay verse.........structure was better then Sik's................flow was on and it wasnt choppy.............punches was okay........overall not a bad verse but you need to keep elevating

So Sik-your structur wasnt that bad but it could deffintly use some work........ it kind of threw off you flow cause it made it choppy........punches was okay sum played but some okay........no personals you should always have those
keep elevating man and keep battling

v/ Inter

if you 2 eva wanna battle pm me wit the link.......pc

[Blak Sinzz]

and im uppin this for the both of you so that you dont have to waste ne of your upps........pc

[Agility]

O.K. battle

Intermentals you were pretty good. I enjoyed reading your verse for the most part... You had some pretty hard hitting punches and you had good creativity. Try working on your structure, cause sometimes you were really strechtched out and other times you were falling short... keep consistant homey.. other than that work on your vocabulary... ur concepts were bumpin'... keep it up amigo...

So Sik you were rippin it for the first half of your verse but than you kinda style changed and fell off toward the end. You also need to work on your structure... note above... you were inconsistent... try making each line have basically the same amount of syallables. you'll notice your flow improve alot. I Think you had some pretty strong punches and personals but nothing id ever quote... lol syke.... what else can I say... hmm.... read/work on vocab and elevate...

id say this one would have to go 2....

*drum roll *

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[So SiK]

iight thanx yo get 100 posts so u can poll it Inter. good battle man ........... Blak Snizz good honest post man thanx 4 beein reel....pz.......o yeh uppin 2

[intermentals]

uppin