Contendership Matchup: Mad Mike (4-4) vs DaIllistRebel (1-0)

[Aisle Phive]

Read the rules.
Verses due by Saturday 12 PM Eastern!!!
Check ins are due Thursday 12 PM Eastern!!!. If you don't check in there will be a replacement.
No show verses will not be permitted, if you drop a no show verse and the other person shows before the deadline you will not be allowed to edit your verse. Please don't wait for the last minute to drop, drop as early as you can.
Agree on a line limit of 10-20 lines, nothing more nor less.
Winner is in the FW match next week.

[Mad Mike]

-In...Hows 16 sound?

[Essen]

Ummm I'm goin 12, all I have time for. PM me if you really have a problem w/ it. GAood luck pz.

[Essen]

Ok, I'm gonna drop now, 10 lines, just in case he no shows.

Things To Know:
He used to have "there's no cure for maddness" under his name.
He lost to both Se7en and Kay Ohh in LLL JR


Quick, everyone run! It's Mad Mike, and he's going bizurk!...
Cause there's no cure for madness, well dopeness sure didn't work!...
Mike's got his eye on LLL, but we all know he's not quite there yet...
He's Zero-ing in on this battle,cause that's the # of votes he's gonna get!..
But you and wackness are very similar, it would be a cute marriage...
And 4-4 is pretty good........................for a baseball average! (.500)
This aint the place for you duke, go to the woods n take a long hike...
Cause he battled Se7en here....... and Se7en sure did a number on Mike!..
But lookhere, your our submarine the way you've sunk so low..
There's nothing left for me to do,he's already gotten beaten by a Kay Ohh..


There it is, try to show n match. Good luck pz.


*Edited for spelling, thanx*

[Mad Mike]

Dogg, You wanna Beat me?, If so ya Better sharpen your Sword...
Cuz 'only way U'd B Da-ILLest-Rebel, is if u caught AIDS in the civil war
And you did flip the boards, I'll admit it..I understimated you But...
....I'll still leave u so Whoored, "The End" will change yer name to "Slut"
Son, U must be dumb...actually thought I'd no show like a bitch...
U retarded? Cuz thats^almost as stupid as your lil "Things to know List"
This kid thought he could catcha win, His state of mind is wrong..
I.J.L. stands for " I Just Lose ".....Yeh, Thats why he be "Reppin strong"
U ain't gettin the W.(Win),Your Gettin The first Letter in Letter....
Its nothing to cry over, Im pointin out "Ur Not Wack.......I'm Jus Better"


I'll only key 10 for your sake...
Hah.."Things to know"...LOL how gay

[Nique.]

Quick, everyone run! It's Mad Mike, and he's going bizurk!...
Cause there's no cure for madness, well dopeness sure didn't work!...
VS
Dogg, You wanna Beat me?, If so ya Better shrapen your Sword...
Cuz 'only way U'd B Da-ILLest-Rebel, is if u caught AIDS in the civil war

DaIllist...I wasnt feeling the AIDs line. Ive seen illest/aids flipped so many time's that it has lost almost any form of creativity.

Mike's got his eye on LLL, but we all know he's not quite there yet...
He's Zero-ing in on this battle,cause that's the # of votes he's gonna get!..
VS
And you did flip the boards, I'll admit it..I understimated you But...
....I'll still leave u so Whoored, "The End" will change yer name to "Slut"

DaIllist... Felt his line more. Thought it was funny too.

But you and wackness are very similar, it would be a cute marriage...
And 4-4 is pretty good........................for a baseball average! (.500)
VS
Son, U must be dumb...actually thought I'd no show like a bitch...
U retarded? Cuz thats^almost as stupid as your lil "Things to know List"

MadMike..DaIllist your line about the baseball average could of been worded better. And Mike made me laugh. Bwah..

This aint the place for you duke, go to the woods n take a long hike...
Cause he battled Se7en here....... and Se7en sure did a number on Mike!..
VS
This kid thought he could catcha win, His state of mind is wrong..
I.J.L. stands for " I Just Lose ".....Yeh, Thats why he be "Reppin strong"

MIKE..he seem's to be picking it up at the end..with these personals..DaIllist your set up was better then the punch..wasnt as effective as you thought it was

But lookhere, your our submarine the way you've sunk so low..
There's nothing left for me to do,he's already gotten beaten by a Kay Ohh..
VS
U ain't gettin the W.(Win),Your Gettin The first Letter in Letter....
Its nothing to cry over, Im pointin out "Ur Not Wack.......I'm Jus Better"

Mad..lol his personals damn near killing you...daillist..blagh@other battles that he lost..you should of made sure that he lost THIS battle..your line's werent hard hitting 4 a closer

Vote-Mad Mike

Thought DaIllist was going to win but bar for bar...Mad Mike out did him with punches. Basically ate your sig and DaIllist set himself up with the Things to know ish..heh..good battle.

[Rappad]

Da ill-
Quick, everyone run! It's Mad Mike, and he's going bizurk!...
Cause there's no cure for madness, well dopeness sure didn't work!...

pretty good

Mike's got his eye on LLL, but we all know he's not quite there yet...
He's Zero-ing in on this battle,cause that's the # of votes he's gonna get!..

not bad, could be worded better

But you and wackness are very similar, it would be a cute marriage...
And 4-4 is pretty good........................for a baseball average! (.500)

no

This aint the place for you duke, go to the woods n take a long hike...
Cause he battled Se7en here....... and Se7en sure did a number on Mike!..

wack

But lookhere, your our submarine the way you've sunk so low..
There's nothing left for me to do,he's already gotten beaten by a Kay Ohh

decent



Mad-
Dogg, You wanna Beat me?, If so ya Better shrapen your Sword...
Cuz 'only way U'd B Da-ILLest-Rebel, is if u caught AIDS in the civil war

haha nice

And you did flip the boards, I'll admit it..I understimated you But...
....I'll still leave u so Whoored, "The End" will change yer name to "Slut"

weak

Son, U must be dumb...actually thought I'd no show like a bitch...
U retarded? Cuz thats^almost as stupid as your lil "Things to know List"

lol

This kid thought he could catcha win, His state of mind is wrong..
I.J.L. stands for " I Just Lose ".....Yeh, Thats why he be "Reppin strong"

lol nice

U ain't gettin the W.(Win),Your Gettin The first Letter in Letter....
Its nothing to cry over, Im pointin out "Ur Not Wack.......I'm Jus Better"

decent




Both came decent, mike had better punches, and more consistency, so

V/mad mike

[Steven William]

Illest-
Quick, everyone run! It's Mad Mike, and he's going bizurk!...
Cause there's no cure for madness, well dopeness sure didn't work!...
Played 4/10
Mike's got his eye on LLL, but we all know he's not quite there yet...
He's Zero-ing in on this battle,cause that's the # of votes he's gonna get!..
again Played about votes-zero 4/10
But you and wackness are very similar, it would be a cute marriage...
And 4-4 is pretty good........................for a baseball average! (.500)
Good punch...not great though 6/10
This aint the place for you duke, go to the woods n take a long hike...
Cause he battled Se7en here....... and Se7en sure did a number on Mike!..
attempt at wordplay and a personal...didnt work 5/10
But lookhere, your our submarine the way you've sunk so low..
There's nothing left for me to do,he's already gotten beaten by a Kay Ohh..
set-up=whack, played...Kay Ohh « seen that like 10 times this week 5/10

24/50 Below Average

MadMike-
Dogg, You wanna Beat me?, If so ya Better sharpen your Sword...
Cuz 'only way U'd B Da-ILLest-Rebel, is if u caught AIDS in the civil war
PLayed punch but I liked the wording 5/10
And you did flip the boards, I'll admit it..I understimated you But...
....I'll still leave u so Whoored, "The End" will change yer name to "Slut"
No..just no...3/10
Son, U must be dumb...actually thought I'd no show like a bitch...
U retarded? Cuz thats^almost as stupid as your lil "Things to know List"
LoL funny...^ 7/10
This kid thought he could catcha win, His state of mind is wrong..
I.J.L. stands for " I Just Lose ".....Yeh, Thats why he be "Reppin strong"
ehh...good personal guess I'll give you it 6/10
U ain't gettin the W.(Win),Your Gettin The first Letter in Letter....
Its nothing to cry over, Im pointin out "Ur Not Wack.......I'm Jus Better"
Funny LoL...Personal/Punch 8/10

29/50...good job

My V/MadMike...

[>Inertia>]

DaIllistReBel: Your verse was ok but nothing special, especially for LLL Jr. Nonetheless, you had some decent punches here and there, although some of them were a bit played. Your personals were decent for the most part....some of them didn't work out though. Structure was ok...but a couple lines were a little bit stretched out...ok verse overall, coulda been better though.

Your best line:

Mike's got his eye on LLL, but we all know he's not quite there yet...
He's Zero-ing in on this battle,cause that's the # of votes he's gonna get!..

^a bit played and worded a bit poorly..but nonetheless decent.

Mad Mike: Your verse was pretty good. You had some pretty nice wordplay in your verse, and for the most part, your punches hit pretty nicely. A couple of them were worded poorly or stretched, but most were decent. You also had some good personals in your verse. Structure was a little sketchy, but that doesn't really matter in the long run.

Your best line:

This kid thought he could catcha win, His state of mind is wrong..
I.J.L. stands for " I Just Lose ".....Yeh, Thats why he be "Reppin strong"

^Nice personal and punch

/v Mad Mike for a stronger verse overall: better punches, wordplay, and personals.

[Mad Mike]

5-2 MM

[Aisle Phive]

Maybe we're reading different battles .. but I have DaIllestRebel winning this. He had some good shit in there. One of the better verses of this week. Mike, drop the "" and shit, only degrades from your verse. A lot of it was blah, the opener sucked. IJL was your best line and it was still kind of wack. DaIllest came pretty strong actually. Opener was cool, the Se7eN line was nice, and the zero line was okay. But yeah, all of those about did it.

V/ Da Illest Rebel

[Richard Parker]

i had a whole long explanation, but my frikin cable went down, and i didnt realize it till after i hit post... so now its lost... gay...

anyway.. try not to be corny with the lines... some of the stuff got dumb like that baseball line, was just newbish, easy comparison to make...

vote = mad mike.. close tho

[Chris Black]

"But you and wackness are very similar, it would be a cute marriage...
And 4-4 is pretty good........................for a baseball average! (.500)
This aint the place for you duke, go to the woods n take a long hike...
Cause he battled Se7en here....... and Se7en sure did a number on Mike!.."

The lines I was feelin'. Drop the looooong dots, and the "()". People would have gotten the punch without it.

Dogg, You wanna Beat me?, If so ya Better sharpen your Sword...
Cuz 'only way U'd B Da-ILLest-Rebel, is if u caught AIDS in the civil war

Good shit with that line. Your finisher was ok, but not as good as this or the lines I quoted from Rebel.

Vote-Rebel, for harder punches. He came more witty and personal with his. His best two lines were personals crafted into witty punches. MM just didnt come as good.

[Young Philly]

Well first of all Rebel, 4-4 is 1.000% in baseball. (4 out of 4)
But really, neither came that bad...or that good.
Mad Mike, your first 3 bars were corny and didn't hit.
The last two were decent, but you need to come solid throughout.
In some places Rebel lacked decency, but most of his bars were ok.
He was more witty then Mike, that's what it came down to.

V/Rebel

[Rappad]

Well first of all Rebel, 4-4 is 1.000% in baseball. (4 out of 4)
But really, neither came that bad...or that good.
Mad Mike, your first 3 bars were corny and didn't hit.
The last two were decent, but you need to come solid throughout.
In some places Rebel lacked decency, but most of his bars were ok.
He was more witty then Mike, that's what it came down to.

V/Rebel

^He meant 4-4 as in a team record....meaning 4 wins and 4 losses.