10 lines
no d/r
no crew
no hate
no feedin
Blind Spits
due by 9 tonight
good luck
Sdizzle
Catalist
10 lines
no d/r
no crew
no hate
no feedin
Blind Spits
due by 9 tonight
good luck
10 barz seems a little large so ill make that the max
this dude aint skilled, i mean ur the worst ive ever seen
i spent a hour less on this verse, u still got merked by me
u have no talent......... rappin just aint ur forte
he just hits random keys, all he knows is qwerty
just admit ur flow is off, i dont think ull drop.. just stop
were u born this stupid, or u were living under a rock
still cant believe he cant ride a beat, or start a flow
u couldn't cut a-head of me if u slit ur throat
this herb talented..... and versace had a wife
his legacy was sick...... if cancer took his life
.. im back
sayz 10 lines not barz, so my bad...................
.. im back
its explained to him by me
he agreed when i asked that i could spit tomorrow cuz i dont have time...so i will spit tomorrow after school
will spit in a few.......
On the side of road, hurting as if you were in trouble
Thought your name looked familiar,...
.....In fact I'm Seeing Double!
The value of you in shocking, yet thats still under review
Cuz Your crew leader wasnt living up to his name...
.....When he let You in the crew!
Have 5 battles goin in elevated, Damn son take a breather
No please.....he doesnt belong here either!Originally Posted by Phixion
I would say your falling off, But skills were never there to decline
Cuz Even Cryptic Lyrics didn't want you....
.....And thats ususally a bad sign!
Your crew does have some skill, but your being outdone
Cuz if your the beginning of the era on Old rb.....
.....Than I'll jump to the new one!
My
Catalist-HArd punches..I like ya structure..Reall easy to read
Also not to much complexy..Good with the quote thing
Work on ya structure I lil more..Flows was even and ya flows was balanced
Sdizzle-OK I didnt understand what ya was sayin....Also you had some good
structure though...End words was complexy...Not to hard punches.....Work
on them punches aight...Then ya will be good
Catalist can ya hit up my battle against aces of aces
ill admit his verse was sick, just close the battle and give him the win, wasn't expecting such a good verse, so i just through together a verse
.. im back
^thats sad
and it wont happen
votes have to close this
Played line, no punch.
Once again, played. No punch, flow was sorta off
Played.. wont coment
Attempt of creativness.. but still played
sorta sounded like a topical finisher.. but eh
Elevate man.. you came played as hell
No punches what so ever,and flow was off here and there
On the side of road, hurting as if you were in trouble
Thought your name looked familiar,...
.....In fact I'm Seeing Double!
Ok personal, not that hard of a punch
The value of you in shocking, yet thats still under review
Cuz Your crew leader wasnt living up to his name...
.....When he let You in the crew!
Nice personal, decently hard punch
Have 5 battles goin in elevated, Damn son take a breather
No please.....he doesnt belong here either!
Personal again... decent punch
I would say your falling off, But skills were never there to decline
Cuz Even Cryptic Lyrics didn't want you....
.....And thats ususally a bad sign!
Personal and punch again
Your crew does have some skill, but your being outdone
Cuz if your the beginning of the era on Old rb.....
.....Than I'll jump to the new one!
Good finisher.. solid punch
Pretty consistant with punches and personal
and overall.. came better, and not played
V/Catalist
Sdizzle...
this dude aint skilled, i mean ur the worst ive ever seen
i spent a hour less on this verse, u still got merked by me
ok 2nd line.. 1st line was very n00b
u have no talent......... rappin just aint ur forte
he just hits random keys, all he knows is qwerty
[/b]clever line but seemed forced out..[/b]
just admit ur flow is off, i dont think ull drop.. just stop
were u born this stupid, or u were living under a rock
Good multi but a weak bar.. n00bish again
still cant believe he cant ride a beat, or start a flow
u couldn't cut a-head of me if u slit ur throat
Your best punch up to now.. i would of said "slit ur own throat" though
this herb talented..... and versace had a wife
his legacy was sick...... if cancer took his life
Good closer your best bar..
6/10
Catalist...
On the side of road, hurting as if you were in trouble
Thought your name looked familiar,...
.....In fact I'm Seeing Double!
Great opener.. you hit him straight away
The value of you in shocking, yet thats still under review
Cuz Your crew leader wasnt living up to his name...
.....When he let You in the crew!
Good hard hittin personal
Have 5 battles goin in elevated, Damn son take a breather
No please.....he doesnt belong here either!
That ripped him bad.. good punch
I would say your falling off, But skills were never there to decline
Cuz Even Cryptic Lyrics didn't want you....
.....And thats ususally a bad sign!
Good punch but no need for that..
Your crew does have some skill, but your being outdone
Cuz if your the beginning of the era on Old rb.....
.....Than I'll jump to the new one!
9/10
Sdizzle.. Ok this wasnt you.. you have done alot better than this.. you had ok punches but your flow was off and some bars needed re-wording..
Catalist.. This was a great verse i was very impressed.. Punches were good hard hitting ones.. flow was smooth and structure was steady..
\/0te.. Catalist..
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catalist-you came wit a pretty nyce verse..........you was consistant with your punches and didnt let up and they hit hard.................personals was good i like that.......structure could have been alot better..................made your flow kinda choppy......but sall good still wun
sdizzle-i seen you do alot better then this shit but you jus got outclassed in this battle
punches was okay.........they hit semi hard..............personals ehhhhhhhhh........... your flow was off and i didnt like your structure either..........you should have reworded some of your shit to make it better but didnt so yeah....
v/catalist
cata......hit this up when you get a chance since i hit yours up and voted
and no im not new to RB i jus put that as mi shit
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=126412
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close this...ill hit links up later
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Same as above
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