[Parkcide]logik...VS... ILLITICAL

[.ILLITICAL.]

10 lines
No d/r vote
no crew votes
o hatin b4 or after battle
you spit first

[[ParkCide]Logik]

Ya Bring your game to GO but I bet you all talk
phuck yo 200 dollaz im already sittin at boardwalk
I bring more lines then a coke feinin addict
They call me Logik from [park cide] just read between the brackets
You think you smoke foos like bluntz but i left that shyt hollow
When ur pops phucked ur mothers kunt thats a load she shoulda swallowed
That was a tragik day I bet ur moms was feelin blue
Just look at the results, they came out with you
I know you meant a dildo when you say you comin fully strapped
So go phuck urself to hollywood, cause you don’t know how to act

[.ILLITICAL.]

check it.......
'Parckside' Ya mom said ya Dads Dick is so small she had to use a dildo.......
But bitch my rhymes turn you red and childish like Sesimi Streets (Elmo)..........
"Logik" man Your new so im going to take it easy on you bar by bar...........
I also bet this man is so horny he beats his meat to his fucking avatar..........
My punches come harder than your becuz I add the the Glock with the dee.....
stick to the newbs kid becuz like it says under your name ya new to RB...........
I poped it in ya mommas pussy and got her pregnant, she turned into the (grim reeper)
I cant be ya father but you came out ugly and no teeth and rippin eyes out like if ya was a kin to jeepers creeper..
I know your a prewritter so you dont spit like everyone else does which is blind......
But I know your going to lose so I did you a favor and ended it with a 11th line........

[.ILLITICAL.]

Dang son.....You messed up big time.....uppin fo votes.........uppin#1........

[.ILLITICAL.]

Comeon.....No sleepin needs to keep up.....Lets get some vote.....uppin#2

[Sidious]

check it.......
'Parckside' Ya mom said ya Dads Dick is so small she had to use a dildo.......
But bitch my rhymes turn you red and childish like Sesimi Streets (Elmo)..........
"Logik" man Your new so im going to take it easy on you bar by bar...........
I also bet this man is so horny he beats his meat to his fucking avatar..........
My punches come harder than your becuz I add the the Glock with the dee.....
stick to the newbs kid becuz like it says under your name ya new to RB...........
I poped it in ya mommas pussy and got her pregnant, she turned into the (grim reeper)
I cant be ya father but you came out ugly and no teeth and rippin eyes out like if ya was a kin to jeepers creeper..
I know your a prewritter so you dont spit like everyone else does which is blind......
But I know your going to lose so I did you a favor and ended it with a 11th line........

aigh... lets see this was a pretty dope battle... parkcide.. you didnt come as hard as you shoul have, and your consistency through out your verse was lacking.. ex.. one line was hot.. the next not.. etc.. but overall that "load your mom shouldda swallowed:" line killed it.. lmao.. BUT that strapped like dildo punch is playyyed out cuhz... fo real. on to.Illitical that elmo line was kinda funny.but wasnt what i would say is "hot".. avatar line COULD HAVE been straight.. but the avatar is "x'd" out .lol.... so that was ineffective. the "new to RB" basicaly killed it in your verse.. that had me laughin mah ass off...NOW the jeepers creepers line was WACK and you had the biggest run on line.. shittt... wack. 11'th line was hot...

vote- illitical...


hit up my battle.. as i did yours.. thanks.

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...=126001&page=1

pz EZZ ~ Sidious...

[Nique.]

Vote-ILLTICAL..

ILLITICAL actually had punches, unlike Parkcide who praised himself in some of his bar's and the other's weren't too effective besides your last two with the hollywood/act line...work on consistency and harder punches and creativity and you'll be fine..ILLITICAL..wasnt really feeling your verse either, but you at least attempted punches..most were stretched but nevertheless they were more effective than Parkcide's...this battle was a lot close then how I am explaining it but ILLTICAL edged it...keep battling

[Nique.]

smh@ILLTICIAL...I was the one who did the poll thing you idiot.

[Nique.]

Sidious was the ONE who didnt vote the poll, so before you complain you should get your facts straight..thanks.

[Sidious]

Sidious was the ONE who didnt vote the poll, so before you complain you should get your facts straight..thanks.

yahh man... i dont have 100 posts yet.. so i cannot vote... do what ya want with the vote... care i do not.

[.ILLITICAL.]

Stop fucking free posting in my battle.........IM sick of it...Just vote please and give a exlanation......Aint no need to talk about what yall did.....DAMN

[.ILLITICAL.]

uppin#4

[.ILLITICAL.]

Last uppin.....Dont get no sleep here please vote

[Catalist]

v/illitical

he had better punches and a much better verse

check it.......
'Parckside' Ya mom said ya Dads Dick is so small she had to use a dildo.......
But bitch my rhymes turn you red and childish like Sesimi Streets (Elmo)..........
"Logik" man Your new so im going to take it easy on you bar by bar...........
I also bet this man is so horny he beats his meat to his fucking avatar..........
My punches come harder than your becuz I add the the Glock with the dee.....
stick to the newbs kid becuz like it says under your name ya new to RB...........
I poped it in ya mommas pussy and got her pregnant, she turned into the (grim reeper)
I cant be ya father but you came out ugly and no teeth and rippin eyes out like if ya was a kin to jeepers creeper..
I know your a prewritter so you dont spit like everyone else does which is blind......
But I know your going to lose so I did you a favor and ended it with a 11th line........

good verse...strong punches good flow...god structure...work on more personals..but good job.......punches hit harder than his and thats what really matters...didnt need to come very hard in this battle

Ya Bring your game to GO but I bet you all talk
phuck yo 200 dollaz im already sittin at boardwalk
I bring more lines then a coke feinin addict
They call me Logik from [park cide] just read between the brackets
You think you smoke foos like bluntz but i left that shyt hollow
When ur pops phucked ur mothers kunt thats a load she shoulda swallowed
That was a tragik day I bet ur moms was feelin blue
Just look at the results, they came out with you
I know you meant a dildo when you say you comin fully strapped
So go phuck urself to hollywood, cause you don’t know how to act

posted fou times...thats wack.....verse didnt get better...punches didnt hit...persoanls werent there...flow was bad and so was the strcuture...work on verses and personals...read vets battles and learn new concepts

v/illitical

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Axiom