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  1. #16
    You've Earned a Custom Title! southsideloco's Avatar
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    I dunno y but u always the type to flow emotions out n u doin a hell of a job wit it...the stroty was dope, i luv the way u can take sumtin then relate it sumhow to real problems...nice emotion, the flow was hot n easy, the vocab was good n the complexity was also very nice....all i can really say is keep flowin n hopefully one day ill get to ur level, hope to see sum more from u homie...

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    raw....i left for a while...and now eleete's doing his thing...good job on this peice man...very descriptive and the whole nine yards..paints a pretty picture...u've definately come a long way
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    damn. this shit's tight right here. nice imagery, nice flow and in general, agree this is dope shit...can't say nothing bad. keep droppin' homie

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    doesnotexist
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    Imagery was reeeeeeal good and u were poetic. That was real tight. Vocab was pretty good too. There aint nothin bad i can say about this piece except keep bringin more.

    Just a silence profound...Bound to this disgraced life...
    I pace twice and look over the cliff...Then I take flight...

    ^^ love that part

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