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Two blowouts in a row, what has triple el junior come to,
Fuck readin Free's whole verse, peeps don't even vote his 1-2's;
I spit salivated storms that Reign, tornadoes tearing terrain,
Verse leaves this bitch off balance, ... so I throw Her-A-Cane;
Killin this whore at a Young age, u cant See me nor words I play,
May as well dismantle ur eyes, and end your hopes to Die-Late;
Hot as Nevada sharp like cacti, this you cant ignore see son,
My verse straight Stings peasants, ... but u'll never Score-peon;
Leavin u so fucked up, start ur own Talk Show over me,
Maybe you can be Opera, but you'll never fuckin Win-Free;
g/l Free.
Kayooh is about to get smacked, as i deliver another blow
I thought this was DEJAVU....
......Than i rembered i merked you four weeks ago
I am doing this for SHOCKVALUE, so watch the truth unfold
everyone knows you are the wackest in your crew..
.... no reason to outline it in bold...
And latley iv been told: KAYOHH has really elevated
its your verse that proves your wack, not how your rated
your getting laid the way my verse is leaving you fucked
and your verse is getting some action too, it just sucked
KayOhh- Started off real well, liked that personal a lot. However all of a sudden, u focused on wordplay instead of personals. The rest of the verse was just full of wordplay. And wordplay can either be really nice, or can seem really forced, and most of them were forced. You have just kept on using personals on him like your first bar.
Eki- Liked everything except your last two bars. The 2nd to last bar wasn't great, and your closer wasn't very good. But your opener was nice, a little played concept, but still nice. The Shockvalue and the bold line; very nice personals. You fell off towards the end, but good drop.
Props to both on this, nice battle to read. My vote goes to Freethinker because his punches hit harder, I dunno, I just didn't like the wordplay too much, but again good battle.
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22/50Originally Posted by KayOhh
9/40
Is that obvious enough?
V/ Tee KayOhh
ok battle...
eki - came alright... some decent punches.... played off the sig nicely... good metas not too much wordplay....good flow / structure... decent verse... punches werent too direct tho... 9/20
ko - good verse, wordplay was good here... personals were eh, alright played off his name and what not... punches were pretty good... your closer was nice... metas were good, flow/structure was good... overall punches hit pretty hard and u dropped a much more complex verse... 12/20..
vote - kayohh
KayOhh.....nice verse...you showed wittiness...like the her-a-cane line...that was real nice....punches hit nicely...personals were good too....flow was near perfect....overall a nice verse
Eki...you came real basic...you had mostly OK lines....nothing standout...try and up your wittiness....some shit seemed more like filler than punches...be more crwtive wit ya shit....
Vote=KO for a verse with harder punches and more consistency
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KayOhh-
Two blowouts in a row, what has triple el junior come to,
Fuck readin Free's whole verse, peeps don't even vote his 1-2's;
Pretty nice, dunno if I woulda used it as the opener..
I spit salivated storms that Reign, tornadoes tearing terrain,
Verse leaves this bitch off balance, ... so I throw Her-A-Cane;
Seemed a little forced..nice creativity nonetheless..
Killin this whore at a Young age, u cant See me nor words I play,
May as well dismantle ur eyes, and end your hopes to Die-Late;
Didnt like this..
Hot as Nevada sharp like cacti, this you cant ignore see son,
My verse straight Stings peasants, ... but u'll never Score-peon;
Blah..filler...nice wordplay 'n flow tho..
Leavin u so fucked up, start ur own Talk Show over me,
Maybe you can be Opera, but you'll never fuckin Win-Free;
Decent..
******
FreeThinker-
Kayooh is about to get smacked, as i deliver another blow
I thought this was DEJAVU....
......Than i rembered i merked you four weeks ago
Ya messed up a potentially good personal..worded wrong in my opinion..
I am doing this for SHOCKVALUE, so watch the truth unfold
everyone knows you are the wackest in your crew..
.... no reason to outline it in bold...
Lol..decent but funny...never seen this used before..
And latley iv been told: KAYOHH has really elevated
its your verse that proves your wack, not how your rated
Weak man..
your getting laid the way my verse is leaving you fucked
and your verse is getting some action too, it just sucked
Decent creativity, but landed between mediocre and weak..
Overall, I wasnt too impressed with this battle. It was kinda one-sided in my opinion, but neither came really very strong. FreeThinker, you started off rather promising, but you ended really wack man..KayOhh, you had, by my count, one personal..the rest were regular punches..some blah other pretty nice...thing that stood out was ur wordplay tho, props on that......basically, KayOhh gets my vote simply for being more consistent and coming more creative...wasnt too impressed though with this battle
Vote / KayOhh
kayohh got this won...
good battle but the punches were hard hitting from ko's verse....personals were good...and punches were on...flow was on and so was the structure..but punches won this for ko
v/kayohh
kay-
Two blowouts in a row, what has triple el junior come to,
Fuck readin Free's whole verse, peeps don't even vote his 1-2's;
haha..not bad
I spit salivated storms that Reign, tornadoes tearing terrain,
Verse leaves this bitch off balance, ... so I throw Her-A-Cane;
decent
Killin this whore at a Young age, u cant See me nor words I play,
May as well dismantle ur eyes, and end your hopes to Die-Late;
not bad
Hot as Nevada sharp like cacti, this you cant ignore see son,
My verse straight Stings peasants, ... but u'll never Score-peon;
ehh....
Leavin u so fucked up, start ur own Talk Show over me,
Maybe you can be Opera, but you'll never fuckin Win-Free;
lol..ok
free-
Kayooh is about to get smacked, as i deliver another blow
I thought this was DEJAVU....
......Than i rembered i merked you four weeks ago
lol...not bad if you read it right
I am doing this for SHOCKVALUE, so watch the truth unfold
everyone knows you are the wackest in your crew..
.... no reason to outline it in bold...
eh....
And latley iv been told: KAYOHH has really elevated
its your verse that proves your wack, not how your rated
no
your getting laid the way my verse is leaving you fucked
and your verse is getting some action too, it just sucked
played to death
Pretty decent battle...free fell off at the end...kay was pretty consistent
V/kayohh
Go Red Wings
kayohh took this one easy. eki didnt seem to try to hard...had one decent punch...the "bold" one....besides that nothing really hit too hard or was too clever. flow was off a little too. kayohh came pretty good here........in my opinion he over did it a little bit with the wordplay...it was a little overly complex...but clever none the less. win-free is mad played...and score-peon is realllll stretch. but the opener was ill....and the her a cane was funny. didnt really hit was kinda creative. and i liked the die-late too.
vote K
A h e U n c D e f I o r B w a L r d E
KayOhh wins (4-3)
Eki loses (3-2)
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