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Thread: State Of Existence

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    State Of Existence

    My lifestyle's like the nile, got an awkward flow
    The way my feet take me places I shouldn't ought to go
    Im walkin' slow ..
    In the opposite direction than I'm thinkin' in
    A routine talk w/ God everynite
    But it's not my words when I speak with him
    It's not my actions, swirlin' thoughts imagined
    Re-drop the same thoughts, but the walk is acted
    The plots are practiced, everyday the same thing
    Wake up, get dressed, then look out onto the world gazing
    Raising hell, cuz when I wanna go right I go left
    It's my life! But if I don't do everything right
    Your not impressed ..
    I'm dressed to make moves, destructive scenes
    Honestly faithful, it's painful ..
    Someone tuggin' these puppet strings
    I'm stuck between, a real world on a painted canvas
    Always questioning my dreams, getting tainted answers
    Imma sacred dancer, I just gotta tie my shoes tight
    I lose sight, cuz every morning I wake up to a new life
    A confused mind, it's impossible to think before I act
    Yesterday I had the star role, now Im heatin' on the back
    Sinkin' on this path, just to acquaint w/ a new one 2morrow
    Tired of bein' a ventriloquist's dummy ..
    Find a new soul to borrow!
    A new soul to make hollow, mold and compile to your liking
    A new soul to characterize and fit your style of writing!
    Quit fighting to make them shoes fit me, they're too small
    Instead why don't you attire me with toy parachute ..
    In case I do fall?
    But you choose, call it how you want, Im unable to refuse
    It's up to you which games I win, and which games I lose
    My strings, almost completely chewed, ready to break
    Why'd we have to have a pool today, instead of a lake?
    At the end of the day I lie awake ..
    Awaitin' tomorrow mornin' when you call out
    Dreamin' about existence when I've never existed ..
    Reality, Im just a toy in Jesus' doll house.

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    The shits crazy nice, i love the ending but you really do need to read this twice to get a grasp at some of the things you hint at, but thats part of what makes this peice so nice. the last line really throws the whole thing together, the words were chosen carfully i like that, the begingin is a little off the topic but it works, keep postin fire and knoweldge
    <center>But I, being poor, have only my dreams;
    I have spread my dreams under your feet;
    Tread softly because you tread on my dreams
    - Yeats

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    Thanks for the reply fam .. Uppin for more?

    Edit: And can a mod delete that reply below me? LoL
    Last edited by Nahlidge; April 23rd, 2004 at 03:08 PM

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    hey dog nice tight as hell keep it up

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    Upping ..

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    The shits crazy nice, i love the ending but you really do need to read this twice to get a grasp at some of the things you hint at, but thats part of what makes this peice so nice. the last line really throws the whole thing together, the words were chosen carfully i like that, the begingin is a little off the topic but it works, keep postin fire and knoweldge


    i agree

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