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Verses due by Saturday 12 PM Eastern!!!
Check ins are due Thursday 12 PM Eastern!!!. If you don't check in there will be a replacement.
No show verses will not be permitted, if you drop a no show verse and the other person shows before the deadline you will not be allowed to edit your verse. Please don't wait for the last minute to drop, drop as early as you can.
Agree on a line limit of 10-20 lines, nothing more nor less.
Sorry to post Aisley but Spits got a match in LLL.
He dunny need this one.
Pz
I know Brix, but he said he wants to be in both, so both he gets.
Good lookin out thoughOriginally Posted by -Brix-
check.... 10 lines?
fucker better show...
AJ? LOL
If you're gonna bite, make it your tongue.... meanin don't even talk
I'ma make sure I kill you.... cuz I'd never put you in Shock!
claim artist artifact... that's probley why I'm diggin you raw kid
takin me on? you just plain nuts.... so I'ma leave you a-salted!
you actually thought you had a chance.... I find it fuckin hilarious
bomb you, but make it look like a suicide... when I tear a wrist
your asshole rips... I see you're not strong enough to squash shit
son, I look like a bad father... with my punches always apparent hits!
my whole crew could son you... or reign on you & drown you
it's obvious you're worthless... cuz you can't diss-play any Value!
blah you're fuckin merked
Last edited by $pitacular; April 22nd, 2004 at 06:06 PM Reason: spelling
Sorry man, just saw this, I will spit asap, sorry about the wait.
$lip him some cash for a cab..60 miles worth atleast
Pointless for your Love Below if you got yeast...
Imperfect text is apparent in this kids vocabulary
Took him two trys to get it right...it's an inability
Alow me to make a suggestion, .44 can help here
Cock him and pull the trigger in your mouth...
Unload a whole clip since you can't choke out
Lubricant still aint gonna make the avy count
Are you even aware of your own sig!?...
Racing my new beginning got your era trailing
Thought I try somethin new, fucking hard...good spit $pit, no beef man. If the first few lines messed up tell me and I will tell you what it means.
Watch it there, this is your last warning EVER. Again .. and you're DQed. This is your last warning in LLL Jr.
-Aisle
Last edited by Aisle Phive; April 23rd, 2004 at 11:26 PM
.. im back
^^Swayer^^ Do it again and it will be reported, fucking herb. You have no flow to even get it anyway.
Spit: Wordplay was nice... flow on point... tear a wrists line was nice, assaulted line was nice, just nice verse man...
Kuldahar: Your verse was horribly forced... punch attempt's were just rancid, and your flow was the only thing you had going for you... on your finisher, sig doesn't rhyme with trailing... and the
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^^^ Thing really restricts your ability to make punches, don't do it anymore...
Vote - Spit
Look at em cheer - the crowd, I've been tame as I spit it to you
Everything from here till now has been strained and then given to you
- Brethren
vote spit. i dont know why the other dude did that intitials thing or whatever. what a bad idea...like breth said that totally restricts ur ability. nothing quotable or hard hitting in there. just makes u go...oh....he spelled his name with the first letters. spit came good with a few punches that stood out...easy win. but get the fuck out of Jr, hoe. why would u want to stay here?
vote $
A h e U n c D e f I o r B w a L r d E
this was very one sideded
vote=spit
Spit murked Aj..
Aj..what were you thinkin man,...your shit lacked punches, propper disses, and personals..only one..and i found it gay as hell..
really came weak dunz..
V-Spit..easy win..
peace
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Agreed, Spit came ok. But AJ came blah, drop the style though. I didn't like the whole ..
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^That was wack, just go for punches and shit.
Anyways ..
Spitacular wins (7-1)
AJ loses (0-1)
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