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Last edited by Scott B; April 21st, 2004 at 10:30 AM
.. im back
dont know how to finish, thats the way it goes
im an angry gardener, way im not digging this hoe
cough..... just getting started
this dude is lame, his skills level decreased
thought u had potential.... potential to be beat
shops off other verses, ima show u whats in-store
he thinks his verses is nice...
..........................nice when u dont write no more
decided to joined lll jr., but must of got confused
wanted 3l's.................................. so hes started 0-2
hes predicted to lose this week, do i look surprised
ur strutures fucked up... when! this// is how u WRITE!!!!
not sure if last week u had even one punch land
or if even one punch wanted to leave his hand
closers are overrated, so is thrust, just to mention
thrust winning this battle.....
...........................maybe in another dimmension
Last edited by Scott B; April 21st, 2004 at 04:18 PM
.. im back
Damn kid, The double Z's in ya name only express...
The voters sleeping after they read that lame ass text
Man your shits out of style, Your game's old..no doubt
Only time people thought of you being hip...
..Is when i popped it out
Odd's are against me, The underdog of this battle
Ha! I'ma drown this bitch with my spits..
..Til he doggy paddles
Swipe the smurk off your face...Believe me it ain't no treat
To see this ugly fuck...kids were running the streets...
..Like it was Halloween
Your fucked huh? Yea admit dude, Your shit out of luck
Even before i posted...He went back n edited that trash up^^
So keep your wits about, Beware of what's around you
I might just get you with a tazer...To test your schock value
v/ Thrust
Both were nasty.. in a bad way.. dizzle's 'LLL stats' punch has been used in nigh on evry battle.. insultin the way he writes is also old.. ya best lines were the 'in store' ones.. not a bad flip.. Thrust.. the 'bein hip' line made me laugh.. an i havent seen that 'underdog/doggy paddle' concept before.. verse was a tad more effective with regards personals cos u worded em into harder punches.
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vote-thrust....this was my worse week for sdizzle i think he has done well in this but this week he dropped no punches that hit really hard i was impressed with his 3l's punch as it was clever but part from that nothing really hit.unlike thrust who came with consistency and a beter flow.that simple........keep it up man
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Vote thrust-
Sdizzle
I used to like your style bro..but your punches were just outclassed by thrust here, he turned it around on you man..you had decent flow, and a few standout lines, but nothing special...
Thrust
1st verse ive seen you drop before, good style, very direct, no filler and the pucnhes were clear and understandable, some nice personals in there too like, like the shock value 1..which was also a good punch...
Good battle in my opinon, lacked a little but still entertaining..
Props..
Peace
101
good battle here....
sdizzle.... some ok lines... flow was a bit off at some points...
you had a few good punches that hit... couple personals... some ok metas..
wp - ehh.... overall not a bad verse.... decent... 10/20
thrust - ... a more complex verse... punches were more creative and more consistant...
personals lacked but metas and wordplay were ok... structure was alright it flowed well... overall it was a good verse...11/20 - punches were more creative and hit harder with better consistency.
vote - thrust
sdizzle-
dont know how to finish, thats the way it goes
im an angry gardener, way im not digging this hoe
played
this dude is lame, his skills level decreased
thought u had potential.... potential to be beat
no
shops off other verses, ima show u whats in-store
he thinks his verses is nice...
..........................nice when u dont write no more
no
decided to joined lll jr., but must of got confused
wanted 3l's.................................. so hes started 0-2
eh...
hes predicted to lose this week, do i look surprised
ur strutures fucked up... when! this// is how u WRITE!!!!
played concept...
not sure if last week u had even one punch land
or if even one punch wanted to leave his hand
ok concept...wording was terrible
closers are overrated, so is thrust, just to mention
thrust winning this battle.....
...........................maybe in another dimmension
ok
thrust-
Damn kid, The double Z's in ya name only express...
The voters sleeping after they read that lame ass text
no
Man your shits out of style, Your game's old..no doubt
Only time people thought of you being hip...
..Is when i popped it out
lol...not bad
Odd's are against me, The underdog of this battle
Ha! I'ma drown this bitch with my spits..
..Til he doggy paddles
weak
Swipe the smurk off your face...Believe me it ain't no treat
To see this ugly fuck...kids were running the streets...
..Like it was Halloween
too stretched
Your fucked huh? Yea admit dude, Your shit out of luck
Even before i posted...He went back n edited that trash up^^
eh....
So keep your wits about, Beware of what's around you
I might just get you with a tazer...To test your schock value
your flow is messed up here...weak punch
thought this battle was weak...thrust won with slightly better punches....and I mean SLIGHTLY.
v/thrust
Go Red Wings
Decent Battle..
Sdizzle- Your punches were evident, but they were all very much played, not a lot of originality. Had a nice idea with the land hand line, but as Rappad said, you messed up on the wording. That was probably the only punch I haven't seen before, but decent job.
Thrust- Ok punches, also a little played, but definately didn't do it as much as sdizzle. The Halloween line was nice, a lil too much filler. Also liked the hip line, haven't seen that one before. The rest was aight, nothin special but enough to get the win.
Vote goes to Thrust for having more originality with his punches. Respect to both.
TNL
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Thrust came harder in this one. Sorry dizz.
Basically liked that whole thing^.Originally Posted by Thrust
Tight, very.
Sorry dizz, punches werent hard enough for him.
V/Thrust.
thrust got this....punches hit harder...personals were more on point...........flow was good...dizzle's were kinda bad......work on stuff like structyure
v/sdizzle
^ Got that there junior?
Thrust wins (1-1)
sdizzle loses (5-3)
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