Simplistik vs Darknova

[Darknova]

10 lines
due.. soon
rules.. House

Check it.

[Darknova]

I guess u summed this battle up perfect... simplistic
Too bad ur name was too hard to spell n you missed it
Must have been all that coke u was smokin in Oakland
I'd call u an herb, but the obvious no need to be spoken
How could u write those lines, tha fuck is in your mind?
Ur name now, how it always will be.. in ur sig: undefined
You think rhymin, be simple, but you prove RB wrong
I'd actually take more than 10mins to key this..
...if I thought you'd some strong
Why you write ur words in CaPs n sHIt.. doesn't make sense
Okay, open up the flood gates... and this merking commense

[SimPliStiK]

ay yo i could spot a fraud from a fuckin mile away,
tha mo you open yo mouth tha mo i realize you fake,
i come hard on tha mic thats just wat i do,
While you callin up yo bitch scream HELP ME BOO!,
Its been a hot minute since i put deez raps down,
You want dis royal status but you cant wear my crown,
I spat this flow wit mo speed dan a cycle,
Ma wordz be powerful touchin kidz like Michael.

[SimPliStiK]

Good Shyt Dogg Imma Be Out Ill Come Bak Later To See Wussup .

[R. Frost]

darknova-you had good personals...............flow was on and i was liking it...........punches hit hard...........structure was on...............not really nething bad to say about this verse but jus use a lil more wittiness in your verse and elevate a lil bit and you could be good

sim-you came weak....shit you woulda needed atleast 20 lines to beat nova but for some reason you only came wit 8......that was a stupid move.......strcuture was okay could have been better........punches.....ehhh didnt hit hard at all.....flow was a lil off..........and you didnt have ne p0ersonals work on that shit and elevate....pc

v/darknova

[Darknova]

yea, you too..

nice battle.

votes...........

[Darknova]

UPPIN numbre 2..

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[Neeno K.I]

y0 good battle but im gonna have to agree a little with lyrical..

Darknova - had a little harder punches and all good structure (well to me). your shit was easy to ryhme with too like while i was sayin it i was rappin it pretty well..(always got beats playn in winamp :P) but shit is aight..

Simplistik - i thin lyrical was abit hard on you dawg... you were alright, weak spot 8 lines only..?? 2 lines aint that harder to think up... but anyways shit was alright gotta give u credit for the micheal line i had laugh and thought you were pretty tight ...

not sure if i can vote yet(100 posts needed) but my vote goes to Darknova

[SimPliStiK]

Ay Yo That Shits Not Right .....yo Dark You Said 8 Lines And Fools R Hatin On Me Cuz I Only Dropped 8

[÷Thìñg÷]

i will vote on this later when you vote on one of my battles

[Darknova]

Ay Yo That Shits Not Right .....yo Dark You Said 8 Lines And Fools R Hatin On Me Cuz I Only Dropped 8

Man.. u really are smoked up aren't you?

Check the top....
and check back to bitchslapped if u want..
I would (never) say 8 lines.

[÷Thìñg÷]

aight this was a close battle both came decent
but i felt that nova came with harder hitting punches
if S would have come more hard hitting he mighta won
but thats not the story today, cuz nova takes personals
both had ok flow and the wordplay was good, average
S came basic and fondaled with filler which hurt him
try using a punch and a personal and a rhymescene
in each line, it will benefit also to throw in wittyness
good job nova ya verse won u this keep elavating
simplistic u need more elavation jus keep at it ok
vote/darknova for influencing punches & personals

now remember to poll in my battle but u need 200 posts
dont kno if you will get them in time, ask a mod to poll it?

[Darknova]

Hmm.. I'll hit up ur future battles, like I said

This was close?...

aight, uppin.

[Darknova]

uppin #5....

last one..

blah.. people need to vote..
I will give feedback to other battles.

[Darknova]

this is ridiculous......................... UPPING