.iLL.__vs__illtalic

[Its Illytizzle!™]

10 lines.

I'm postin first.

Regular votin rules.

[buh bye Matty :(]

check check..

[Its Illytizzle!™]

I gave a 'thumbs up' to this dumb fuck.. dayum
he tried bitin from me
but couldnt even manage my whole name
Duke made three requests:

10 lines
reg rules
blah..

I complied with the first two..
an let ya verse answer the last 'blah'
.iLL... fed up of fighting claims he's really a fem
revolves around his 'periods'
an gets pushed to one side like his pic of Eminem
An ya had to 'Check' twice cos u realised the mistake
too late
seems my avvy's got in his hands jus what it takes
I really dont have to prove jus who's iller
i simply click 'send'..
but your destined to crumple
cos I'll have ya foldin like 13th Amend.

[buh bye Matty :(]

How should I work this, I'll start on the surface..
.......you aint it even worth it..
Maybe thats why Im writin' filler on purpose..
Member of IJL? I find this amusing..
.......cus last time I checked..
IJL was an acronym for I'm Just Learning..
Why the thumbs up smilie? You like this writer?..
.......ur verse couldnt get 'thumbs up'..
If your whole fan club were hikers!..
Id say ya got a dope name, but lets get realistic..
.......it shows your really wack..
Cus ya chose your name from this font characteristic..
So why you still battlin newbs who're new to RB?..
.......maybe its for insurance wins..
When you lose to actual vets like me..

[Its Illytizzle!™]

Yay!

-vote-

(particularly on original personals)

[lyricallyabbusiv]

.iLL. took this fairly easy...
nice battle though...no doubt....
but i was feeling .ill.'s personals...good shit...i liked his creativity...his pucnhes hit harder..n ya opener was amusing....liked that...
best line:
Member of IJL? I find this amusing..
.......cus last time I checked..
IJL was an acronym for I'm Just Learning..
^^really thought that was made with thought put into it...good shit..

illtalic- nice verse dawg...but i waznt feelin ya flow...your punches were sorta weak...not relaly hitting hard and direct...our verse was sloppy..like u just rote w.e came 2 ur head with out thought put into it...i havent seen any of your other battles...but this one was weak...
best line:

IP: FFBB 4829

I gave a 'thumbs up' to this dumb fuck.. dayum
he tried bitin from me
but couldnt even manage my whole name
Duke made three requests:
Quote:
Originally Posted by .iLL.
10 lines
reg rules
blah..
I complied with the first two..
an let ya verse answer the last 'blah'
.iLL... fed up of fighting claims he's really a fem
revolves around his 'periods'
an gets pushed to one side like his pic of Eminem

^but that waasnt even hard though...

vote- .iLL....fairly easy...

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=125148
^plze return favor...

[Oakley]

^ i agree totally...
I really don't think this was close...
I had to read talic's verse 4 times to get the flo...
An when I did it really didn't catch me....
Ill's verse was filled wit smart witty diss's an very nice flo....
Fuck the vocab....who needs it...it's a battle....

Ill nice verse....
Talic....i dunno man...work on structure an flo....
no hate...but shit gave me a headache...-1

vote- Ill

drop an honest vote here
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=125051

[buh bye Matty :(]

uppin like whaaaaaaaaaaaaat

[Osirus]

yo ILLtalic whats happenin brah?..lol..this is going to be the second time ive voted against you man...i wasn't feeling your verse at all..ive seen you perform much iller than this man...but ya kno im an honest voter like i kno both of you are....so 'ill give my honest opinion..

ILL's verse was very consistant with witty punches all over the verse, and the personals were good aswell,..i liked the flip on the crew name lol...This battle should have been a little bit closer but ILL just dominated it..

ILtalic i think you need to work on your structure....i think uve changed it....i liked your old style much better..it was more direct...without those quotes that every1 seems to be doing these days...in my eyes its just played and people do it, because they see other vets using that style...and they mimic...but u need to be original..have ur own style....

V-ILL...

Props to both tho,...

Just dropin my honest opinion on things, no hate..

Peace
-1-

return the favor..

[buh bye Matty :(]

Up up and away...

Thx to all voters..


Drop a vote, leave links, they'll be followed..

[R. Frost]

I complied with the first two..
an let ya verse answer the last 'blah'

^^ was that suppoze 2 rhyme...no nothing was there but writing..

.iLL... fed up of fighting claims he's really a fem
revolves around his 'periods'
an gets pushed to one side like his pic of Eminem

^^ok personal..ok..

An ya had to 'Check' twice cos u realised the mistake
too late
seems my avvy's got in his hands jus what it takes

not much of a punch..

I really dont have to prove jus who's iller
i simply click 'send'..
but your destined to crumple
cos I'll have ya foldin like 13th Amend.

^^^some rhyme'n not much of a punch..just kinda writing

punches...5
flow..7
vocab..6
wordplay...7
personals..5
overall...30...u lacked a lot..like punches and personals...that hurt ya..
2843


How should I work this, I'll start on the surface..
.......you aint it even worth it..
Maybe thats why Im writin' filler on purpose..

^^kinda amusing..kind of a punch..good opener..

Member of IJL? I find this amusing..
.......cus last time I checked..
IJL was an acronym for I'm Just Learning..

nice personal..ok punch..

Why the thumbs up smilie? You like this writer?..
.......ur verse couldnt get 'thumbs up'..
If your whole fan club were hikers!..

^^funny lil punch..nice use of his avy and all..not strong but ther

Id say ya got a dope name, but lets get realistic..
.......it shows your really wack..
Cus ya chose your name from this font characteristic..

..nice personall ok punch..

So why you still battlin newbs who're new to RB?..
.......maybe its for insurance wins..
When you lose to actual vets like me..

^^ok punch..



punches...8
flow..7
vocab..7
wordplay...7
personals..8
overall...37....u had strong points where he didnt like punches and personals..

VOTE: ILL...his verse was that much better..he had punches and personals..and the other kat lacked them real bad..

no hate just my vote.

pec

VOTE: ILL

[÷Thìñg÷]

Why the thumbs up smilie? You like this writer?..
.......ur verse couldnt get 'thumbs up'..
If your whole fan club were hikers!..

omfg u bitch u fead off his verse right here so u lost mother fucker
but im not gonna vote for him, i dont want this to be a hate vote like yours

[Jammin' Jobus]

omfg u bitch u fead off his verse right here so u lost mother fucker
but im not gonna vote for him, i dont want this to be a hate vote like yours

your stupid that wasnt a feed

[÷Thìñg÷]

your stupid that wasnt a feed

what bitch
he used the thumbs up line as a feed so stfu pussy
and why are u holding his side, hold yur own man

[buh bye Matty :(]

lmao@thing..

You tried so hard to find feeding huh? ... too bad I was referring to the smilie he put in his very first post dumbass..

...lol