Due by tonight
Start keying up now
Due by tonight
Start keying up now
Look at this guy "firez" he remains undead//
Hes new this this website so he wack from his legs to his head,
Let me get the over wit and make sure im done//
Becuz im about to make this new guys record zero and one,
This guy must be white or must be hation//
The only guy this guy will be suffering his discrimmination
This guy is a rerun and thats what he says everday//
Imma do you like "Burger King said have it your way",
This guy must be like 18 workin at pizza hut//
He be probably be beating his meat at 3:00 am watching BET UNCUT,
But thats ok we still can be friends//
Imma act like Al Pacino(Scarface) and say hello to my little friend,
Let me get out of this thread becuz i think its all done,
Let me get back to my T.V show becuz i just made your record zero and one
As My Volume-Increases, I leave X's On your Bars Like a Malcom Thesis, 'dropping Super Flows quicker than angry Fans on Album Releases
Wit astounding pieces ..I keep Levy's Worthy, Plugging '72' in your back like an Ecko Jersey, thinking Your records Steady ..This Faggot plays Beverly Hill cocks/cops Like gay versions of Eddie Murphy
Record's Steady ..I'm 'Rearing' Wins like Porn Competions, While in rap, Ac'cord'ing to nurse commisions, Super Flow stays under the weather like he was 'born' in poor condition*
I spawn Admission's & Like bad tempered Clothes Designer's, I rip his 'material' ...an Imperial thriller, Making Sure another Loss 'dawns' Upon Super Flows, Like a Cerial Killer**
He "Flow's" a Bacterial river, Don't get your raps blocked, Cause you couldn't murk me Like that verse itself, Chances are you'll get your 'cap's locked'
(Ac'cord'ing <~~Umbilical cord)*
A loss, a life ...Dawn, in the morning, cerial ..you eat in the morning, get it)**
Nice battle............uppin.............uppin fo votes...........uppin
uppin fo battles..............uppin.........uppin.
uppin for votes...................................
uppin fo votes people vote...........................uppin
Firez- An okay verse for a newb. Punches were aight. Flow ya really didnt have one , wasn't feelin it. Wordplay did okay on tha. Personals you rrally wanna work on dat cuz you didn't have any. But it was a good verse for a newb and all, just keep elevateing.
Super Flows- Good verse but i thought yours was better. Punches hit harder then his. Wordplay did good on that. Structure you mite wanna fix that up a little. But you get my vote for better punches but not by much, and better personals.
Vote- Super flow
i will poll my vote once you hit up mine(honest vote)....and explain ur vote...~1~
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=124561
fierz won he merked my mans!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - ILLunatic
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aight yo we aint getting no votes.Dang............
wow....
fire is a hot ass newbie....an I believe he really is one cus of the structure...
everything in his verse was ill...the flow was off the hook an the metiphore were crazy....
just work on your structure....an try out for fusion....
super...not so super....
very basic..good concept ok disse's but no meat in there....and kill the //'s
vote- firez
now super...go back an poll on my battle thanks
if you dont cus i voted against u i will report it......
an they will bann you....
no hate..pc-1
Look at this guy "firez" he remains undead//
Hes new this this website so he wack from his legs to his head,
meh...ok for this battle...
Let me get the over wit and make sure im done//
Becuz im about to make this new guys record zero and one,
played, again...ok for this battle
This guy must be white or must be hation//
The only guy this guy will be suffering his discrimmination
no
This guy is a rerun and thats what he says everday//
Imma do you like "Burger King said have it your way",
coulda been good, but was directed to...?
This guy must be like 18 workin at pizza hut//
He be probably be beating his meat at 3:00 am watching BET UNCUT,
ha...
But thats ok we still can be friends//
Imma act like Al Pacino(Scarface) and say hello to my little friend ,
played
Let me get out of this thread becuz i think its all done,
Let me get back to my T.V show becuz i just made your record zero and one
uh...recycled...and played
overall, flow was terrible...structure...keep your lines even. Metas were attempted, direct your punches at your oponent...
As My Volume-Increases, I leave X's On your Bars Like a Malcom Thesis, 'dropping Super Flows quicker than angry Fans on Album Releases
Wit astounding pieces ..I keep Levy's Worthy, Plugging '72' in your back like an Ecko Jersey, thinking Your records Steady ..This Faggot plays Beverly Hill cocks/cops Like gay versions of Eddie Murphy
Record's Steady ..I'm 'Rearing' Wins like Porn Competions, While in rap, Ac'cord'ing to nurse commisions, Super Flow stays under the weather like he was 'born' in poor condition*
I spawn Admission's & Like bad tempered Clothes Designer's, I rip his 'material' ...an Imperial thriller, Making Sure another Loss 'dawns' Upon Super Flows, Like a Cerial Killer**
He "Flow's" a Bacterial river, Don't get your raps blocked, Cause you couldn't murk me Like that verse itself, Chances are you'll get your 'cap's locked'
^^cant even judge this because structure is sooo terrible...but I tried and everything was played. Dont type like this: ''burgers'' and 'fries'//*(get it?)
v/super flows....
No walls to hold me back...
ok...ill give it to super he had like 2 aight verses in ther but the rest was garabage..and fire yo ya flows is killa aight...stay up..all u gotta do is elevate...u murked this cat tho he aint got nutin on u....
yo flirez killed dis shit in my point of view but if flowz didnt have " super flow " he wouldve got merked ya both had good verses Firez ya shit wuz fuccin tight good ass complexity vocab ur structure wasnt greath tho press enter after every bar its better 4 the readers super flowz use complexity cuz simple wordz does make your vrse have sik flow but flo iznt everything ya verze wuz iight
Vote/Firez
plz return the favor in my battle against X Acutor with a honest vote thanx pz
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