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12 line is good. G'luck
Last edited by Laureate; April 12th, 2004 at 08:11 AM
A few achievements here and there
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12 yeah dude?
Not replyin is agreement.. PM me anything else.
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We agreed on 16 earlier.
I’m aware of my previous battles duke.. didn’t need to go lookin thru
See when I battle people remember..
But with lyric.. its “Who the hell were you??”
Now I hate to hate on u.. since we fam an all but really
Punchin me? Bitch.. only ya mood swings seriously
Cos I know punchin keys leaves ya identically depressed
Yeah the shits messed
But I’m hear to clear up ya confusion.. an affirm the best
As me.. duke this is like ‘Big Trouble In Little China’
Were cool..
But you’ll be back an forth more than Feebs an Com in a Final
Ya always forgotten.. like a Eunuch lyric’s still un-seeded
Elevated in IJL so much I wonder..
Is it Smoka’s lap on which ya seated?
There’s more suspicion surroundin ya record than Area 51
Rose to the crews Elite.. without facin a single vet dunn
Is that how its done? Jeez kid.. as Tek i'm sure ya coulda had me
Now forcin personals? Ya prolly grimacing worse than that avvy
High hopes.. Aiming for a vote cos clearly ya Skills Surpressed
U couldn’t contend with shit
An even the Contendorship is way ahead.
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I won't $pit hard in this battle, cause I don't want you to quit
But vets would agree...
...writing in Illtalics is newbish
I mean with the lines you come up with, how have you lasted this long?
Don't blame your computer...
...Cause your still lagging along!
Bitch took a week off, because he couldn't handle a losing mark
Guess my fellow English Chum...
...Is getting tossed to the sharks!
Man the weather is harder hitting than you, and more often 'hailed'
You could offer your 2 cents...
...But you'd never make a sale!
This kid wants MOD recognition, Dickrides jus to stay alive
...Originally Posted by SmokaJoka666
...Belly flopped, Clean up on Aisle Phive!
I 'Monopolize' wins, 'Sorry' kid but you aint got a 'Clue'
1st lines are whack...
...Even 'Sun sets' up better than you!
I hate to go so personal, cause I know you lack the skills to condemn
Aint got the balls to step...
...Cause ya avy jacked them!
Your mom failed at suffocating you, This kats outta the bag
Aint tryin ta be racist...
...But your waving the white flag
A few achievements here and there
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Your mom failed at suffocating you, This kats outta the bag
Aint tryin ta be racist...
...But your waving the white flag...
lol...
good battle, but ive seen both of you come much harder than this...
Illtalic....
Decent Verse, good flow, nice punches, a few played ones, and the structure wasn't that great, but the personals were ther...
But ive seen you came wayyyy illler than this...this was like your weakest verse ive seen lately...no offence..its just my opinion....Its just seems rushed...
Lyrics verse was much more consistant...had some hard hitting personals and punches,...and his structure was good aswell....The english chum bit was a little bit gay, but apart from that you had the better verse....
V-Lyric..
Good battle...
Peace
One/.
i agree with osirus on this one.........lyric had the better verse
illtalic- i thought your verse was pretty weak........The punches didnt hit that hard but the personals were ok though....flow was off a bit because of the structure.....
verse was rather simplistic...and didnt have that many good aspects
lyric- Had a good verse...punches hit harder than Illtalic's .....personals were good also......flow was good and so was the structure....verse was simplistic at times...but was ok
v/lyric
This battle was aight, but...
illtalic: Your verse was very personal. That was probably the best thing about it. Besides that, ur flow was pretty good, structure was aight, but I felt that you didn't come hard enough. Keep elevatin'.
lyric: Your verse was less personal, but still good. Basically, you came up with better metas and punches to pull this through. Keep elevatin'.
Vote: lyric
ill-
I’m aware of my previous battles duke.. didn’t need to go lookin thru
See when I battle people remember..
But with lyric.. its “Who the hell were you??”
played
Now I hate to hate on u.. since we fam an all but really
Punchin me? Bitch.. only ya mood swings seriously
this would have been nice had it not messed up your flow
Cos I know punchin keys leaves ya identically depressed
Yeah the shits messed
But I’m hear to clear up ya confusion.. an affirm the best
blah
As me.. duke this is like ‘Big Trouble In Little China’
Were cool..
But you’ll be back an forth more than Feebs an Com in a Final
heh..decent
Ya always forgotten.. like a Eunuch lyric’s still un-seeded
Elevated in IJL so much I wonder..
Is it Smoka’s lap on which ya seated?
lol...ok
There’s more suspicion surroundin ya record than Area 51
Rose to the crews Elite.. without facin a single vet dunn
why is your setup better than your punch here?
Is that how its done? Jeez kid.. as Tek i'm sure ya coulda had me
Now forcin personals? Ya prolly grimacing worse than that avvy
blah
High hopes.. Aiming for a vote cos clearly ya Skills Surpressed
U couldn’t contend with shit
An even the Contendorship is way ahead.
decent
Overall-few decent lines, not too good for the most part though.
lyric-
I won't $pit hard in this battle, cause I don't want you to quit
But vets would agree...
...writing in Illtalics is newbish
no
I mean with the lines you come up with, how have you lasted this long?
Don't blame your computer...
...Cause your still lagging along!
decent
Bitch took a week off, because he couldn't handle a losing mark
Guess my fellow English Chum...
...Is getting tossed to the sharks!
no
Man the weather is harder hitting than you, and more often 'hailed'
You could offer your 2 cents...
...But you'd never make a sale!
played
This kid wants MOD recognition, Dickrides jus to stay alive
illtalic has fallen off lately
...
...Belly flopped, Clean up on Aisle Phive!
haha nice
I 'Monopolize' wins, 'Sorry' kid but you aint got a 'Clue'
1st lines are whack...
...Even 'Sun sets' up better than you!
didn't like the punch too much, but nice wordplay here
I hate to go so personal, cause I know you lack the skills to condemn
Aint got the balls to step...
...Cause ya avy jacked them!
hahahahha...nice
Your mom failed at suffocating you, This kats outta the bag
Aint tryin ta be racist...
...But your waving the white flag
very nice punch, my favorite of the battle
Overall-also weak for the most part, but a few very nice bars as opposed to a few decent ones.
V/lyric
Shit.
No one gets it.
=(
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LMFAO
this shit was a good battle... mainly because Lyric's shit was funnay as hell. The Belly flop punch took the cake, that shit was sick hilarious. Closer was good as well, nice touch on recent topic.
Illtalic - good verse as well, seemed like you just didn't add that spark of creativity I saw in Lyric's. Nice punches, personals, but just couldn't match Lyric's.
Nice job Lyric vote = Lyric
good batte... both came iight...
ill - good verse wit some decent punches... some good personals
good metas.. structure was ok... flow was off once or twice...
wordplay wasnt great... good dissing... overall decent verse 10/20
lyric - good punches, they hit harder than ill's... showed some wit in your disses... your verse was little more creative...personals were ok you played off his name, avy and such... good metas and wordplay... flow and structure were good to...
basically thought your verse hit harder... 12/20
vote - lyric
Meh, Illtalic. Really not living up to the hype dude. I seen you come better.
Your best bar^.
Your punches were off, nothing was hard hitting enough or personal except for the Smoka line. Overall, just not much witt or ... i don't know ... I guess just not enough to beat him!
Lyric, pretty tight.
Dope.
You had some tight ass punches bro. Def. liked the Aisle one as well.
Came hard hitting in most places, a little inconsistent, but nonetheless a pretty dope drop from you.
Consider getting rid of 'these' though. No real need for them.
Still dope.
V/Lyric.
hahaha nice battle man I have to go with Lyric he had nice punchs and his shit was personal he even had a quote saying that you fell off shit thats bad but yo illtalic has an ok flow but your punchs werent hard enough.
vote lyric
Ill - The mood swings line was niceness... but verse just wasn't as good as Lyrics
Lyric - Waving the White Flag line put you way over the top... Crazy man, killed it. Should've saved that line against me though... Good comeback against the racist bullshit.
Vote / Lyric
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