Something Worth Listening To

[NoLost4Rhymes]

[Something Worth Listening to]

He says we must go to war to take away Weapons of Mass Destruction/
When really there's nothin/
Thousands Of men dyin or somethin/
Soldiers gettin blown up by the dozen/
Iraqi's are runnin/
Sayin they'll stop us, but why is America still comin/
Bush always says he has a plan when really he's frontin/
If all we have is hate in the world, then who's gonna keep lovin/
We've had so many chances of freedom, but look at all the doors Bush is shuttin/
Since we already live in a world of hell, you'd might as well put our souls in a oven/
We need to cool down like the breeze of the ocean/
People need ta stop smokin/
And gangsters need to drop the guns they hold'n/
People need to cool down but need to keep their hearts from gettin frozen/
People need to denie Bush cuz finally we really know him/
Vote for somebody else while keepin our minds open/
We know what we really want and we need to go and show him/
Bush came into office for four years and left with our trust broken/
America used to be a bright land on earth and now we stopped glowin/
And our lives keep passin by in front of our eyes in slow motion/
And we gotta start doin and gotta stop hopin/
So go vote cuz i hope you believe the words that i've spoken

I'm gonna try to use this with a beat!!
I Give Props To My Man Able Worku That Helped Me With This Piece
By: Chris & Able Worku

[Freeman]

Nah, it wasnt.

[Maven.]

freeman, give a good reply or don't bother

nolost, reply to one other open mic and post a link to your reply in this thread or it's closed.
thanks.

[Freeman]

Lol.
Your the best, Mave.
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Here goes..

Either, and im giving you an excuse here my friend, you wrote this to a beat that has an inconsistent pattern, or your just shit.
Your flow isnt nice.
You need to up your vocabulary.
Topic is played, and you didnt really do anything to make it special, really, did you?
Keep trying.
You will get there one day, maybe.
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