Jumbo Shrimp.
Jumbo Shrimp.
Piece was okay, nothing groundbreaking. Seemed to me like you were just trying to find your feet and get back into writing, the storyline was decent but could use more of a twist towards the end - it was semi-predictable IMO. Flow was okay, got sketchy in some parts due to the changing bar lengths.
Decent piece.
^Thanks.Yea I'm trying to get back into wrting.
For the Last time. O_______o
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