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    "words"

    a force is hidden under the innocence of speech
    breach what you cant reach by putting down the pwoer
    flower your strength to resist against temptations that are sour
    spitting constantly of glory only promotes yourslef
    kids are pressured by parents to do their best
    while the rest at school degrate their self-esteem
    a dream of domination is influenced by a verbal rhyme scheme
    that displays the greed and corruption of money
    and many like to talk to any of goals that touch
    the concept of vilonece using verbal actions
    and make extractions of current events to issure retaliations
    to speak aginst a government that is deaf to their people
    the pwoer of words
    has no extend to the affect it has on a young mind
    a little girl is demonized by the hateful words of her mother
    she is swallowed by the dark and spit out by the light
    and she is later found six feets under our earth, she didnt even bother
    to escape from her silent box, and is now trapped under rocks
    she was grieved by the verbal-abuse by her parent
    the power of words
    can change the world positevely and start revolutions
    people protest, resist aginst the country constitions
    display their rebelliance in a great alliance of sound
    they forget what was first found and changed to fit their hand
    to have tha ability to mold what they want, faint the evil
    a word can spark the motivation of a child to succed
    to proceed in the path of pureness and to exceed

    a 1000 words can describe a picture, describe a person's emotional stature
    help mature a person's nature of respecting a world's creature
    words have the power to influnce, change, hurt, help
    it has the possibilites of good and bad
    it has the possibilties of happy and sad
    words control our world and can destroy it
    ORIGINAL BADASS


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    ORIGINAL BADASS


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    Good meaning...nice topic
    vocab needs a little work as does vocab
    rhyme scheme wasnt great but i really did liekt he meaning of this peice
    overall i give then a 5/10...just keep writing and you will eleveate you have potential
    Scytsophrenia

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