rules:
10 lines
no feedin
no biting
no d/r
no hate votes
no crew votes
and each mc's verses are due 2 hours after there check-in, aight, so that means theres no "other person goes first", unless u hurry up and check-in.
GL
Zee the 2nd
HYPER-ACTYVE
rules:
10 lines
no feedin
no biting
no d/r
no hate votes
no crew votes
and each mc's verses are due 2 hours after there check-in, aight, so that means theres no "other person goes first", unless u hurry up and check-in.
GL
Ight dick, I’ll go first
Don’t you know niggga you from north Carolina
That pussed out hood
I know you a coc-craver bastard, jus needed the people to know
I’m from the boro that produced many hits
Queens LI, you cant say fuck GODS SON
Cuz the second will murder you without a prime indications
Don’t gotta wait for the jury to deliver
Man who wouldn’t want anyone to murder you son
You a wuss let alone a hick that fucks his sis
I don’t need rhymes to beat you man
I got two good fists, so I can punch you to death..
this kats gotta be jokin, w/that shit hes just typed
ill gripe, & then slap this kid stupid with ma pipe
'zee the 2nd' had to face it, hes never been first(check his name)
worst of days will still throw this kat to the hearst
im leavin u tremblen, almost out ya fuckin shoes
ur screwd kid, ma fuze has been lit to bruise.......
this kat im murderin is John Dough, check his profile
its time to quit rap, so my verses are worthwhile
ur the type of people who screw RB up.....with SHIT!
leavin other's wasted verses, no longer able to spit
Fuck im goin inna slump, someone help me out......even to newbs i can barely come up with a rap, someone help me out please, before IM fucked. No hate, i just want some advice, thanks, and peace
uppin(1).......................................... .........
zee words did not rhyme at all in his verse....no metaphors or nothing good...except straight trash....but ya did try so I'll give you props and dats about it...zee make your lines more even and put metaphors and wordplay in your verse to make it more complex and more fun to listen to..aight..now hyper active already feel off da deep in I can see..hyper your verse was straight, but below par of other shit you've posted..so you need to practice man..I know I do...anyways hyper active had shit dat actually rhymed and made sense so my vote goes to hyper active for actually battling.
vote=hyper active
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=117124
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114817
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114748
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Zee that was fuckin.........well i dont know what that was. Its suposed to rhyme and have a good flow at that.wtf were u thinking lol U had no metaphors no wordplay no punches........theres really no point in saying this shit cuz it didnt even rhyme.
Hyper like he said yur shit actually rhymed and made sense man lol. It was jus ok tho as far as verses go.U coulda done way better. The punches were ok wordplay a little here and there. over all u won.........but thats mainly cuz his was a poem not a rhyme and not a good one either.
vote- hyper
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=122916
Vote on mine (return favor)
Zee the 2nd- Wow you cant rhyme at all. Verse not good. Rhymeing hell not at all. Punches not good either. Flow maybe a little but dont get cocky on that. But you need to elevate big time dawg.
Hyper Actyve- Good verse better then his. Better rhymeing i mean wayyy better. Punches were decent. Flow was good and so was your structure. It was pretty much a one handed battle, a very easy battle for you good job.
vote- hyper
i will poll my vote when you hit my battle...cuz i hate sleepers so hit it up...peace
zee-no ryhme or nothin' real weak. you focus way to much on hatin instead of making your lyrics any good. Next time try and put something that flows.
hyper-alright stuff..at least you got a pretty steady flow goin. take time off and think about your writin. it will come to you.
vote-hyper
give it to me
uppin(2).......................................... .........
WTF... this was a horrible battle... HYPER WINS BY DEFAULT
When Zee said "i dont need rhymes to win" he meant it literally... he didn't rhyme a single word in his verse... no real punches or disses either, just threats.. no wordplay... no imagery... no metaphors... at least u had one good vocab... "Indications"...
HYPER disses werent that good either, but at least he actually had a few and his words actually rhymed... thats all there is to it really... HYPER simply had better disses... you flowed ok too... nice structure
vote = HYPER
PLEASE return the favour by honestly voting on my battle VS UNDEAD in front lines... thanks
i already did mayne.............uppin(3).............
uppin(4).......................................... .....
This was upsetting!
Especially after Zee the 2nd
PM'd me wantin to battle.
I figured he was a good alias
Now i read this... i'm glad i said no!
Zee the 2nd - Herbish style, no punches
No personals, weak flow! no structure
No multies, no wordplay, no wittyness
You have alot to elevate with!
Hyper Actyve - decent punches, ashamed tho
I can't believe you would battle a newbie!
Your punches is what won this for you!
Thats all i need to say!
V/Hype Actyve
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