Trogdor Vs. Tactixx

[aSap iLL]

overall it was a pretty okay battle thought tactixx could have done better
but it wasnt enough to beat tro

verse from tactixx:

Trogdor could lose his left side and still never be right,
I can end your weak exsitstence quicker than gas ignites,
I'm persistant,and always strapped with knives and pipes,
If its urgent I can make certain you get my point bluntly,
Even your best vocab and wordplay still couldn't stump me,
Your verse might be better kid if someone good edits it,
win chances just vanished with that basic rap etiquette,
Youre gonna need lyrical ammo, skills and a good thesaurus,
I just wrote the song "Wack" and your verse is the chorus,
Trogder's raps are gettin worse, mine keep getting better,
Bitch couldn't flip scripts if he was a hollywood director,
It's cool you got a web page at your age Ive seen it rarely,
but explain why you have links to Pictures of fairy faeries *

tight stuff mayne.....7/10

verse from trog:

u wouldnt be with me on all levels if u installed inter-coms
and no1 stops to watch your battles.....not even peepin toms
i'll have this emcee hiding, he shoulda called himself native tactixx
stretch u out like ya warning sign worse than giraff necks n' elastics
now watch me blow Tac out like anorexic sluts who vommit a meal
your best defense is no seatbelt so you can use a wind-shield
I'll decapatate ur head, this preyin mantis is ready to mate
Tac wouldnt be outa controll as African country fertility rates
4get spittin dirty, u couldnt come clean nailed to a fuckin cross
ya lines are rotten, ur just a bad apple like a crashed macintosh

damn u can made dope son ...
8/10

breakdown:
flow:tro
opener:none
multies:tro
punchlines:tie
structure:tac
closer:tro
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v/ goes to trogdor
thought he came harder then tactixx
seen u've do better
please return the favor in this battle and ill drop my poll vote
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=121922

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[Tactixx]

Uppin.........................
leave a link and ill return the favor..

[lyricallyabbusiv]

u wouldnt be with me on all levels if u installed inter-coms
and no1 stops to watch your battles.....not even peepin toms
lol...ok...pretty weakk...
i'll have this emcee hiding, he shoulda called himself native tactixx
stretch u out like ya warning sign worse than giraff necks n' elastics
nice...
now watch me blow Tac out like anorexic sluts who vommit a meal
your best defense is no seatbelt so you can use a wind-shield
lol...
I'll decapatate ur head, this preyin mantis is ready to mate
Tac wouldnt be outa controll as African country fertility rates
nicee...looll..
4get spittin dirty, u couldnt come clean nailed to a fuckin cross
ya lines are rotten, ur just a bad apple like a crashed macintosh
eh...2nd line weak...
total-7/10

Trogdor could lose his left side and still never be right,
I can end your weak exsitstence quicker than gas ignites,
I'm persistant,and always strapped with knives and pipes,
nice....i liked the first bar....1st 2 lines...
If its urgent I can make certain you get my point bluntly,
Even your best vocab and wordplay still couldn't stump me,
nice...ok...
Your verse might be better kid if someone good edits it,
win chances just vanished with that basic rap etiquette,
eh...weak...
Youre gonna need lyrical ammo, skills and a good thesaurus,
I just wrote the song "Wack" and your verse is the chorus,
culdve done suttin better...
Trogder's raps are gettin worse, mine keep getting better,
Bitch couldn't flip scripts if he was a hollywood director,
eh...weak...ur goin down n down...
It's cool you got a web page at your age Ive seen it rarely,
but explain why you have links to Pictures of fairy faeries *
lolll...nicee
total- 7.5/10
i really thik dat tactixx came harder....overall better punches...i felt ya shit...
vtote- tactixx

[Trogdor]

MY MACANTOSH LINE WAS MY BEST LOL

thats wierd

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[lyricallyabbusiv]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ricallyabbusiv

plze hit this batte up........thankz....

[HYPER-ACTYVE]

vote-trodgor

reason:
trodgor(wutever name is)- u had a good verse, flow, structure,metas,wordplay,vocab, and personal were all pretty much good in this battle. u had had this by a hair.

tactixx- good verse too. U both a good verse in this particular battle. Thats why it was so hard to give the winner. U as well had good verse pretty much the same as trodgor, but he had a bit more personals.

thats why my vote goes to trodgor

hey maynes how about hittin my battle up, seeing that i took the time to hit ur guys battle up, thanks heres da link....http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=122857

[CAMROK]

Ehh... damn. this is too close..

trog- You came ok here. You threw some nice punches out there at him. Topics somewhat played in certain lines but u switched it up a bit and made it a little different from the norm, which is good. Personals weren't at a high level, I think I remember 1 but they weren't really here in this battle. Strucutre/flow was fine... I think u could've come harder here...

tactixx- Both verses were very close here. You came ok too. Once again some of it had slightly played concepts but you can't really get away from that. I think ur verse came a bit more original because you used more personals then him. Strucutre/flow was ok as well....

I'm going to honestly have to go with Tactixx in winning this battle. It's just my own opinion on this. No hate. Both verse came really similiar. It's going to come down to everyones personal preferences. Keep up guys...

vote- tactixx

[Tactixx]

Uppin....#2
post an honest vote...
leave a link....
I'll check it out asap...
thx...peace

[wrightmak17]

Vote: Tactcixx

Trogdor: Some good punches, a pretty nice flow and ok personals. I didnt like how long your verses were, it was hard to follow what you were saying. they were just too long. I liked the jiraffe line, but the rest was just ok

Tactixx:I liked your opening line, and the rest of your verse had some nice personals and punches. You came through solid, and kept me interested the whole time. You just came a lot stronger and had better rhymes than trogdor.

Vote: Tactixx

Return the Favor At:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=122915

[Tactixx]

Uppin............................................. ....

[sabotage]

Trogdor took this one easily. He had some dope lines good structure, flow, some jokes lines. .. and most of all personals kicked us in the teeth! Good battle on your behalf trog.! inner meaning shit and creative too!

Tactixx you seemed kinda hurting in this battle. rhymes really played out and boring. Nothing that really made me smile or think oh shit. Can't really read your shit with interest. Sorry man, work on your vocabulary and elevate. Read books man trust me it helps like u dun know! 1

[Axe]

Upping.

[Axe]

This battle was actually decent by FL standards. Some decent lines that can be seen as punches. Trogdor barely edges it out though with his harder hitting punches. Neither of you had personals though. That'll help in your next battle.

I just wrote the song "Wack" and your verse is the chorus,
^Only quotable from Tactixx. Made me smile.

your best defense is no seatbelt so you can use a wind-shield

now watch me blow Tac out like anorexic sluts who vommit a meal
^Decent attempt at word play with the first line, the second was sorta decent.

Vote = Trogdor.