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10 lines
no feedin
no bitin
no hate votes
no d/r
no crew votes
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GL mayne
Vanja
HYPER-ACTYVE
rules:
10 lines
no feedin
no bitin
no hate votes
no d/r
no crew votes
each verse due 2 hours after their check-in
GL mayne
check check check check checkin in........................good luck to u too man........................
aight kid u checked in lets get the time started, heres ma checkin aswell...............................verses due in 2 hours or less
it's this kats first official battle, & he starts off with me
could care less if ya good or bad...........................
..................u aint shit to me, & i say that repeatedly
Vanja..............& and hip-hop, dont mix too well
from the earths core.................................
...........just a preview of ya next home........HELL
uv been on my dick ever since i battled Mr. Watson
suckin up, & complimenting like u always wantin some
now its cool im the first u wanted to start with
so i can show u the 'wants' of wanting to forfeit
bitch, should of thought twice before accepting......
.....to whom forth u never thought u were expecting
this is just a quick keystyle
Aight here we go man......
You say u a student....aight then Ima teach u some shit
Lesson 1 dont battle Vanja..matter of fact thats what every lesson is
Want jewels?,well Ima drop a "couple"...like I shot u and yo date
Skill is "foreign" to u..so when readin this get someone to translate
I got "grizzly" lyrics u cant "bear"...so u better play dead
Dumb fuck,I lost 10 IQ points jus being wit u in the same thread
Delivery,flow,lyrics...I got every part coverd like Afghan women
Thought I was ill befo...but like Hypers puberty Im jus beginin'
Like Pac,no matter what they say...u dead and aint comin back
I just left u like every book on my shelf..."red" front to back
~1~
aight lets get some votes, uppin(1).................
i don't care if that was a keystyle, you got merked hyper active, you had way too many pauses, not as good flow, barely rhymed, the only aight line u had was the earths core one, and that seems to simple and played, vanja, u had a better flow, some lines could have been better, took this in wordplay n metas, punches, and closer, opener wasn't too good, both of you need to try n rhyme a bit more, all in all my vote goes to vanja, keep elevating, and i'd really really appreciate if you voted on one or 2 of those battles in my sig
my v/ vanja
^^^uhh....im gonna say those r ur two best lines.......ok personal.......punch on the second line was weak.....overall ur verse was ok.......u gotta get a new structure......u usin the vet structure just didnt work out......ur set ups and punches were off.....just madness.....ur flow was decent.....ok metas.......there wasnt to much wordplay........most of ur punches didnt connect.......ok personals.......Originally Posted by HYPER-ACTYVE
^^^im gonna say those were ur two best lines......stop puttin " " around ur words, thats newbish.....but u had pretty good wordplay......punch was a lil played but still ok......overall ur verse was pretty nice......ur structure was good......flow was on target......no metas......wordplay was tight.......some of ur punches connected......personals were ok....
conclusion - vanja wins this......y?......she had a better structure (though this is not a factor in winnin the battle)......her flow was better, hyperactyves fell off cause he tried usin the vet structure......hyper had more metas.......vanja smoked him in wordplay.....vanjas punches connected more......personals were about even....so basing off of that......vanja gets my vote......
VOTE - VANJA
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aight that straight, but wut is the vet structure?, then it seems everyone bitin everyone hey style, but its straight uppin(2)................
yo i vote for V..............dat dude killllllllled you out there.....that was better then yours period...no joke...check it out you self........check out my batttttles.....ight...one
shut the hell up, u aint won the one against me, u gotta ryhme to get some votes, and u aint do that, so stfu u stupid bitch, oh yeah u aint aloud to vote, fuckin newb...uppin
Uppin...............up Up Up Up..........................uppin................. .....................
yo vanja how but hittin ma battle up with Zee the 2nd, aight, thanks, uppin(40)......
my fault i meant uppin(4), now its fuckin (5).....................shit
Sorry to freepost here guys....
I'll check this and place my vote tomorrow when I get up. I can't look it over now, but I said I would check it for yous. If its closed I'll check another battle of yours.
Goodluck to you both. Sorry again.
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